Dil Udaas Hai......!!

by Talat on May 06, 2009, 12:36:29 AM
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Shayad kuch rishte itne mazboot nahin the.....Shayad hum hi bharam main jee rahe the !!!



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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2009, 01:17:28 AM »
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Talat,Insaan Jab Duniya Mein Aata Hai Usse Maa-Baap Ka rishta Bana-Banaya Milta Hai, Bhai-Behan Ka Rishta Bhi..Ek dosti Ka Woh Pehla Rishta Hota Hai Jo Woh Khud Apni Soch,Apni Pasand Se Banata Hai..Kehte Hai Ache Dost Hi Ache Insaan Ki Parakh Hoti Hai..

Aapne Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha..Talat,Par Kya Sirf Ek Choti Si Baat se Hum rishto Ko Jod aur Tod Sakte Hai...


Raahon Ki Dhool Ko Hum Sar-Maathe Se Laga Na Sake,
Dost Kehte Hai Hum Jisse Dil-O-Jaan se,
Aakhir Kyon hum Ussi se Hi Dosti Nibha Na Sake....

Apna Woh Shaks Kal Bhi Tha!!
Apna Woh Shaks Aaj bhi Hai!!
Apna Woh Shaks aane wale Kal Mein bhi Hoga!!
Fark Sirf Itna Hai Ke Waqt Ke mutaabik,
Iss Baat Ka Ehsaas Hum Shayad Unhe Dila Na Sake....

Eh Dost,Dil Ki Gehraiyon Mein Tera Naam Likha Hai,
Par Afsos Iss Baat Ka Hai,
Ke Hum Tujhe Hi Dikhla Naa Sake....

Abhi Waqt Hai, Kyon Naa Iss Dosti Ko Hum Uss Mukaam Par Le Jaaye,
Ke Chaah Kar Bhi Koi Isse Mita Naa Sake....

Ek Awaaz Laga kar to Dekho,,Woh Dost Hamesha Apke lIye Haazir Hoga!!
Woh Koi Guzra Waqt Nahi Jo Bulaane Par Waapas Aaa Naa Sake...

"Khwaish" Naa Jaane Kyon  Yuhi Likhta Chala Gaya "TALAT"
Muaf Karna,Jazbaat Ko Dil Mein Apne Hum Daba Naa Sake....
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2009, 01:55:20 AM »
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Thanks Khwaish for appreciation !

Aur tah-e-dil se shukriya Dost himmat-afzaai ka.....aur is khoobsurat shayari ko meri nazar karne ka...inn khoobsurat alfaaz ka   icon_flower

Aap fikar na karen, ye sirf ek mudde ko le kar poetic expression tha, imagination tha jab koi dost dosti ka bharam tod de......Ye meri haqiqat nahin hai...

Isiliye aap bilkul pareshaan na hon.....Thanks a million for being such a good friend  notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2009, 02:07:15 AM »
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bahoot khoob Celmira and Khwaish ji... dono ne kamaal ka likha hai!!! Good work Both!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2009, 02:16:57 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Celmira Ji
N Khwaish Ji tera bhi kya kehna
Just Wonderful, both of you
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2009, 09:07:19 AM »
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Khoob Bahut Khoob Celmira Ji
Dil Udas hai, rishton me khatas hai
Doorian badhti ja rahi hain

sher kaha hai

TEJ RAFTAREN ABHI AUR AAYENGI
MANZILEN AB DOOR NA RAH PAYENGI
AE MERE SCIENCE-DAAN LEKIN BATA
KAB DILON KI DOORIAN MIT PAYENGI

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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2009, 10:07:38 AM »
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Bohat khoob Celmira sis ... Thumbs UP

Bohat khoob khwaish ji

Aur sarvesh ji bohat khoob
 
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2009, 03:54:37 PM »
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bahoot khoob Celmira and Khwaish ji... dono ne kamaal ka likha hai!!! Good work Both!!!

Bohot bohot shukriya Pooja  notworthy
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2009, 06:16:35 PM »
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bahut hi acha likha hai .. lekin bura bhi lag raha hai.. kyunki humbhi aapke dost hai aur ye likha hua humare liye bhi hai.. sorry dear huamaare hote hue aap udaas ho .. koshish rahegi aapko humesha hasaya jaye
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2009, 09:31:37 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Celmira Ji
N Khwaish Ji tera bhi kya kehna
Just Wonderful, both of you

Thanks a lot Rajesh
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2009, 09:34:16 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hia Talat aapne. It was something which really illusioned me.

Equally good poem by Khwaish Ji too as usual..
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2009, 10:49:22 PM »
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Waah waah Talat ji kya khoob likha hai..behad acha kalaam aisa laga padhke ki thoda aur likhti aap..coz itna acha likha aapne..awesome poem Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley ..

ek koshish                                                                                                                   

dost kabhi kahin nahi jaate...
jo chale jate hain hume chhod ke...
kuch to vo hume aur kuch hum bhi unhe nahi samajh pate....
par vo jaane ke baad dil ko apni yaad de jate hain,
aur jo vo nahi rahte paas to yaad ban hume rulate hain..
aisi saugaat hume de jate hain,
har ashq ke baad naye aa jate hain,
par jab unme se kuch khushnuma yaad leke aate hain,
hum har su vasl-e-bahaar pate hain,
zindagi me zindagi ko pate hain,
aur tab aansoo bhi muskurate hain,
kyunki vo khushi ke palon me hi aate hain

Thanks so much Kaash Ji for your lovely comments....Its always so encouraging to see friends' comments ... Thanks a lot.

Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji, aapne to dosti ki sachchai likh di...sach kaha , dost bichad sakt hai, par dosti khatam nahin ho sakti....Very nice lines Kaash Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2009, 10:59:23 PM »
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Shayad kuch rishte itne mazboot nahin the.....Shayad hum hi bharam main jee rahe the !!!



Bahut accha likha hai dear Talat.... Last para toh bahut sahi aur accha likha aapne. Daad hazir hai dear
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2009, 11:00:15 PM »
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Talat,Insaan Jab Duniya Mein Aata Hai Usse Maa-Baap Ka rishta Bana-Banaya Milta Hai, Bhai-Behan Ka Rishta Bhi..Ek dosti Ka Woh Pehla Rishta Hota Hai Jo Woh Khud Apni Soch,Apni Pasand Se Banata Hai..Kehte Hai Ache Dost Hi Ache Insaan Ki Parakh Hoti Hai..

Aapne Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha..Talat,Par Kya Sirf Ek Choti Si Baat se Hum rishto Ko Jod aur Tod Sakte Hai...


Raahon Ki Dhool Ko Hum Sar-Maathe Se Laga Na Sake,
Dost Kehte Hai Hum Jisse Dil-O-Jaan se,
Aakhir Kyon hum Ussi se Hi Dosti Nibha Na Sake....

Apna Woh Shaks Kal Bhi Tha!!
Apna Woh Shaks Aaj bhi Hai!!
Apna Woh Shaks aane wale Kal Mein bhi Hoga!!
Fark Sirf Itna Hai Ke Waqt Ke mutaabik,
Iss Baat Ka Ehsaas Hum Shayad Unhe Dila Na Sake....

Eh Dost,Dil Ki Gehraiyon Mein Tera Naam Likha Hai,
Par Afsos Iss Baat Ka Hai,
Ke Hum Tujhe Hi Dikhla Naa Sake....

Abhi Waqt Hai, Kyon Naa Iss Dosti Ko Hum Uss Mukaam Par Le Jaaye,
Ke Chaah Kar Bhi Koi Isse Mita Naa Sake....

Ek Awaaz Laga kar to Dekho,,Woh Dost Hamesha Apke lIye Haazir Hoga!!
Woh Koi Guzra Waqt Nahi Jo Bulaane Par Waapas Aaa Naa Sake...

"Khwaish" Naa Jaane Kyon  Yuhi Likhta Chala Gaya "TALAT"
Muaf Karna,Jazbaat Ko Dil Mein Apne Hum Daba Naa Sake....


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Wonderful.......  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: May 07, 2009, 02:14:31 AM »
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Khoob Bahut Khoob Celmira Ji
Dil Udas hai, rishton me khatas hai
Doorian badhti ja rahi hain

sher kaha hai

TEJ RAFTAREN ABHI AUR AAYENGI
MANZILEN AB DOOR NA RAH PAYENGI
AE MERE SCIENCE-DAAN LEKIN BATA
KAB DILON KI DOORIAN MIT PAYENGI

SARVESH RASTOGI


Tah-e-dil se shukriya Sarvesh Ji  notworthy

Bohot Khoob Kaha Sarvesh Ji aapne


Kya Bataaun Kyun Dooriyan Hoti Hain
Kyun Aisi Majbooriyan Hoti Hain
Dil Se Dil Ki Raah Kyun Na Kam Hui
Jab Sitaaron Se Dooriyan Bhi Kam Hui !

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