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tut kar bikhrein hain is tarah
k har dard ab nasur ban gaya hai
pyaar ne to tod hi diya tha mera dil
ab har dost bhi juda ho gaya hai
sochte the dost to wafadar hote hain
har gam k raazdaar hote hain
par ek dost ne hamei aisa ilzaam dia hai
k dosti par se bhi vishwaas kho gaya hai
hamne to dosti apne dil se nibhai thi
par hamei kya pata tha usmei bhi chupi bewafai thi
har dost matlab parast nikla mera
bas reh gayi mere paas meri tanhaai thi
aajma liya jab har kisi ko tab ye jaan paye
koi nahi apna har preet hai parayi
log jise apna dost keh dard apna batate hain
vipati mei unki hamei har chal samajh aayi
koi nahi apna har preet hai parayi.....................
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2008, 07:51:49 AM » |
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shukriya sihab ji
dard jab had se gujar gaya to wo alfaaz ban gaye
likhne kuch bethe to shabd meri aawaz ban gaye
jinhe samajh rahe the ham umrabhar k saathi
wahi har shaqs aaj mere khilaf ho gaye
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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2008, 08:26:01 AM » |
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thnks for reply shihab ji
dushmano se kya gila
hamei to dosti ne mara hai
jinke liye maangi thi khushiyon ki dua
unhone hi hamei uljhano mei dala hai
kya karein kya na karein
ye kash-m-kash mei rehte hain sada
kiska karein aitbaar
kisse ab khushiyon ki maange dua
wo khuda bhi darshak bankar
mere haal par hasta raha hai
log dushmano se khauf khate hain
par mera dil to doston ne hi chalni kiya hai
par fir bhi dil ye mera dei raha hai dua
rakhna unhe aabaad e-khuda
jinhone mera daaman daag daag kiya hai
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«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2008, 09:57:24 AM » |
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nice reply again shihab ji
sach jaan gaye hote to acha tha
unhe pehchan gaye hote to acha tha
dost maana tha jise kabhi umra bhar k liye
unhe na puja hota to acha tha
jaan kehte the kabhi jinhe jaan lutate the jinpar
unhe kareeb se na jaana hota to acha tha
sach hi hei duniya matlab ki hai
na apna gam kisi ko sunaya hota to acha tha
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«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2008, 11:23:48 AM » |
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bahut accha likha hai kaushik ji,shihab ji
SACH HI HAI MERE DOST AAZMA KE DEKH LO
KAR KE YAKEEN MUJH PE MERE PAAS AAKE DEKH LO
BADALTA NAHIN KABHI SONA APNA RANG
JITNI BAAR CHAHO AAG LAGA KAR DEKH LO{nm}
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2008, 11:49:50 AM » |
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Maun Ka Jisko Nahi Hai Tazurba
Shayri Ka Lutf Woh Kyun Paaye Bhala.
Dushmano Se Main Nipat Lunga Magar
Doston Se Tu Bachana..E..Khuda..
Good One Kaushik ji Keep it up...
Bohat Khoob Likha Hai Ji Aapne
Bus Woh Khuda Wali Line Chhodkar..Kee It Up..
Roz Ke Milne Milane Wale
Dost The Mujhko Mitane Wale.
Haan Main Bhi Duniya Ke Har Rang Ko Dekha Hai.
Aksar Logon Ko Mausam Ki Tarha Badalte Dekha Hai.
Jo Karte Hai Waade Umar Bhar Saath Chalne ke Liye.
Un Waado Ko Aksar Bich Raah Main Toot Te Hue Dekha Hai.
Jo Kabhi Har Waqt Utha Karte The Meri Dua Ke Liye.
Aaj Unhi Masoom Haathon Main. Maine Khanzar Dekha Hai.
Aap Jise Kehte Hai Dost Hum Kabhi Unhe Jaan Kehte The
Magar Aaj Khud Apni Aankho Se Us Jaan Ko Jate Hue Dekha Hai.
Haan Main Bhi Duniya Ke Har Rang Ko Dekha Hai
Aksar Logon Ko Mausam Ki Tarha Badalte Dekha Hai
Bhai Shihab..Ek Bhi alfaaz Nahi Hai Mere Paas Ki Kuch bayaa'n karoon..allaah aapke Kalum Me wo Taassir de ki Har Oonwaan aur Mauzu Par aap Likhte Raho..
Badiya Likha Hai aapne..Hammesha Ki Tarhaa |
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2008, 11:55:22 AM » |
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bahut accha likha hai kaushik ji,shihab ji
SACH HI HAI MERE DOST AAZMA KE DEKH LO
KAR KE YAKEEN MUJH PE MERE PAAS AAKE DEKH LO
BADALTA NAHIN KABHI SONA APNA RANG
JITNI BAAR CHAHO AAG LAGA KAR DEKH LO{nm}
Jee diya aapne bhi kya khoob kahaa Hai
aur waaqaee aap k dost khus kismat honge ki aap Un k Liye badal na nahi chahti..allaah aapki dosti aur dosto ko salaamat rakhe.
aur
Main To Shayar Nahi Ki Is Andaaz Se Likhta.Fir Khamosh Hun |
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«Reply #8 on: August 20, 2008, 11:38:26 AM » |
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bahut hi aacha likha hai aap ne bhawna ji har line apne aap main kuch kehti hai  bahut aacha ssaath diya hai shihab ji N diya ji  Baadal |
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«Reply #9 on: August 20, 2008, 04:42:01 PM » |
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jayada nahi bahut hi kam likh paaya hu
umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayega
Dil se nibhaya har rista bhi thik nahi hota,
Dosti ke laayak bhi har insaan nahi hota,
Lakh banao tum raajdaar kisi ko,
Lakin yanha koi wafadaar nahi hota,
Jise dekho wo apna hi dikhta hai,
Waqt pe lakin koi bhi apna nahi hota,
Kaise samjhaue apne dil ko main,
Ki har insaan yanha farista nahi hota.
Ki har insaan yanha farista nahi hota............
Baadal
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«Reply #10 on: August 21, 2008, 04:42:03 AM » |
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baadal ji bohut acha likha hai aapne bhi
thnks a lot
jawab mei kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai umeed hai aapko pasand aayega
tanha safar mei ek saath talash rahe the
gairon ki aad mei koi sacha dost talaah rahe the
nadaan the shayad isliye jaan na paaye
dosti ki aad mei ham farishta talaash rahe the
sach hi hai baadal koi hota nahi apna hai
begano ki bheed mei ham koi saathi talaash rahe the
jinko samajh apna har dard kabhi tha sunaya
wahi hamare liye kafan talaash rahe the
hamne to haste haste apni khushiya unpar thi luta di
aur wo the k jakhm dene k bahane talaash rahe the
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«Reply #11 on: August 21, 2008, 06:48:53 AM » |
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bahut aacha likha hai aapne
bhawna ji Baadal
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«Reply #12 on: August 21, 2008, 07:11:00 AM » |
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAIN APNE KAUSHIKBHAWNA JI.
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«Reply #13 on: August 21, 2008, 07:14:02 AM » |
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bahut aacha likha hai aapne
bhawna ji Baadal thnk u baadal ji and ankit ji and all the vieweres |
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