Dosti Ke Badalte Rukh

by syednaami on April 19, 2009, 09:40:21 AM
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Bare dinon bad khud izhar-e-khayal karne ko dil chaha, so aap logon ki khidmat men yeh ghazal paish kar raha, doston ko behad pasand ayegi... Shukirya


Kuchh anjane men kisi ne hamen sataya hoga,
Kuchh anjane men hamne kisi ko rulaya hoga...

Rishton ke khel men apne paraye hote hain,
Kuchh Parayon ko hamne bhi dil se lagaya hoga...

Dukh to hota hai chehron ke badal jaane par,
Khair aisa keh kar hamne hi unka dil dukhaya hoga...

Baat chhoti ko bari banne men der kahan lagti hai,
Isi tarah doston ne hi kuchh baton ko barhaya hoga...

Bigri ko ham hi bar bar banaate rahe dil se,
Shayad doston ko bhi kabhi aisa khayal aya hoga...

In baton se dil ko hi milti hai takleef bahut,
Bas dosti karke hamne khud ko hi zara sataya hoga...

Bane the dost jo kal aaj bhi dost hain apne liye,
Lagta nahin kyun Naami ko bhi unhonne dost banaya hoga...



-!Syed!-
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2009, 10:07:25 AM »
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Wah Wah Syed saheb...kya khoob likha hai apne.. teesra shaer toh lajawab tha... Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2009, 10:14:05 AM »
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Bare dinon bad khud izhar-e-khayal karne ko dil chaha, so aap logon ki khidmat men yeh ghazal paish kar raha, doston ko behad pasand ayegi... Shukirya


Kuchh anjane men kisi ne hamen sataya hoga,
Kuchh anjane men hamne kisi ko rulaya hoga...

Rishton ke khel men apne paraye hote hain,
Kuchh Parayon ko hamne bhi dil se lagaya hoga...

Dukh to hota hai chehron ke badal jaane par,
Khair aisa keh kar hamne hi unka dil dukhaya hoga...

Baat chhoti ko bari banne men der kahan lagti hai,
Isi tarah doston ne hi kuchh baton ko barhaya hoga...

Bigri ko ham hi bar bar banaate rahe dil se,
Shayad doston ko bhi kabhi aisa khayal aya hoga...

In baton se dil ko hi milti hai takleef bahut,
Bas dosti karke hamne khud ko hi zara sataya hoga...

Bane the dost jo kal aaj bhi dost hain apne liye,
Lagta nahin kyun Naami ko bhi unhonne dost banaya hoga...



-!Syed!-

Bohot Khoob S.Naami, aaj bohot din baad likha aapne, bohot khoob likha hai !
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2009, 10:23:47 AM »
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Bare dinon bad khud izhar-e-khayal karne ko dil chaha, so aap logon ki khidmat men yeh ghazal paish kar raha, doston ko behad pasand ayegi... Shukirya


Kuchh anjane men kisi ne hamen sataya hoga,
Kuchh anjane men hamne kisi ko rulaya hoga...

Rishton ke khel men apne paraye hote hain,
Kuchh Parayon ko hamne bhi dil se lagaya hoga...

Dukh to hota hai chehron ke badal jaane par,
Khair aisa keh kar hamne hi unka dil dukhaya hoga...

Baat chhoti ko bari banne men der kahan lagti hai,
Isi tarah doston ne hi kuchh baton ko barhaya hoga...

Bigri ko ham hi bar bar banaate rahe dil se,
Shayad doston ko bhi kabhi aisa khayal aya hoga...

In baton se dil ko hi milti hai takleef bahut,
Bas dosti karke hamne khud ko hi zara sataya hoga...

Bane the dost jo kal aaj bhi dost hain apne liye,
Lagta nahin kyun Naami ko bhi unhonne dost banaya hoga...



-!Syed!-
bade bhai bahut dino k baad aapne likha hai.......... Ek shikayat hai aap roz likha karo......

maine kii dosti aur oose dil mein jagah di
mere doston ne bhi apne dil mein mera kona banaya hoga

mere doston agar khata ho kucch "Saahil" kii toh maaf karna
main jaanta hoon tumne apni zindgi ko sharafat main bitaya hoga

mujhe koi gila nahin , main sabke gale lagta hoon
mujhe oonse bhi mohabbat hai jinhone mera dil dukhaya hoga

tasveer k pahlu hai do dosti aur mohabbat meri nazar mein
khuda jaanta hai mera maine har dastoor nibhaya hoga
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2009, 10:28:53 AM »
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Bare dinon bad khud izhar-e-khayal karne ko dil chaha, so aap logon ki khidmat men yeh ghazal paish kar raha, doston ko behad pasand ayegi... Shukirya


Kuchh anjane men kisi ne hamen sataya hoga,
Kuchh anjane men hamne kisi ko rulaya hoga...

Rishton ke khel men apne paraye hote hain,
Kuchh Parayon ko hamne bhi dil se lagaya hoga...

Dukh to hota hai chehron ke badal jaane par,
Khair aisa keh kar hamne hi unka dil dukhaya hoga...

Baat chhoti ko bari banne men der kahan lagti hai,
Isi tarah doston ne hi kuchh baton ko barhaya hoga...

Bigri ko ham hi bar bar banaate rahe dil se,
Shayad doston ko bhi kabhi aisa khayal aya hoga...

In baton se dil ko hi milti hai takleef bahut,
Bas dosti karke hamne khud ko hi zara sataya hoga...

Bane the dost jo kal aaj bhi dost hain apne liye,
Lagta nahin kyun Naami ko bhi unhonne dost banaya hoga...



-!Syed!-

Superb! Syed Ji . kya kamal ka likha hai ... Superb!

Wah Talat Di kya khoob kaha hai aapne..
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2009, 12:36:34 PM »
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Wah Wah Syed saheb...kya khoob likha hai apne.. teesra shaer toh lajawab tha... Applause
Bahut shukriya Dear Dead heart... pasand farmane ke liye...
Bohot Khoob S.Naami, aaj bohot din baad likha aapne, bohot khoob likha hai !
Celmira Jee, Jee bare dinon baad likha hai, bas aaj kal masrufiyat ki nazar ho gaye hain... Tahe-dil se mashkoor hun aapka...
bade bhai bahut dino k baad aapne likha hai.......... Ek shikayat hai aap roz likha karo......

maine kii dosti aur oose dil mein jagah di
mere doston ne bhi apne dil mein mera kona banaya hoga

mere doston agar khata ho kucch "Saahil" kii toh maaf karna
main jaanta hoon tumne apni zindgi ko sharafat main bitaya hoga

mujhe koi gila nahin , main sabke gale lagta hoon
mujhe oonse bhi mohabbat hai jinhone mera dil dukhaya hoga

tasveer k pahlu hai do dosti aur mohabbat meri nazar mein
khuda jaanta hai mera maine har dastoor nibhaya hoga
Wah wah, mere pyare dost, kya barhiya jawab paish kiya hai, bhai lutf aa gaya...
Bahut shukriya zara nawazi bhaya... Han dost, abhi inshaAllah likhte rahenge...
Superb! Syed Ji . kya kamal ka likha hai ... Superb!

Wah Talat Di kya khoob kaha hai aapne..
Sophi sahiba, aap ne dad di aur samjha is ke liye bahut bahut mamnoon hun...
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2009, 12:53:35 PM »
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Janabe Wala Bahut khoob,
Dad qubool firmain



han kafi dino ke baad aap ko dekh raha hun





javed
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«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2009, 01:25:00 PM »
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Bare dinon bad khud izhar-e-khayal karne ko dil chaha, so aap logon ki khidmat men yeh ghazal paish kar raha, doston ko behad pasand ayegi... Shukirya


Kuchh anjane men kisi ne hamen sataya hoga,
Kuchh anjane men hamne kisi ko rulaya hoga...

Rishton ke khel men apne paraye hote hain,
Kuchh Parayon ko hamne bhi dil se lagaya hoga...

Dukh to hota hai chehron ke badal jaane par,
Khair aisa keh kar hamne hi unka dil dukhaya hoga...

Baat chhoti ko bari banne men der kahan lagti hai,
Isi tarah doston ne hi kuchh baton ko barhaya hoga...

Bigri ko ham hi bar bar banaate rahe dil se,
Shayad doston ko bhi kabhi aisa khayal aya hoga...

In baton se dil ko hi milti hai takleef bahut,
Bas dosti karke hamne khud ko hi zara sataya hoga...

Bane the dost jo kal aaj bhi dost hain apne liye,
Lagta nahin kyun Naami ko bhi unhonne dost banaya hoga...



-!Syed!-

Bahoot khoob likha hai syed ji... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2009, 01:26:19 PM »
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bade bhai bahut dino k baad aapne likha hai.......... Ek shikayat hai aap roz likha karo......

maine kii dosti aur oose dil mein jagah di
mere doston ne bhi apne dil mein mera kona banaya hoga

mere doston agar khata ho kucch "Saahil" kii toh maaf karna
main jaanta hoon tumne apni zindgi ko sharafat main bitaya hoga

mujhe koi gila nahin , main sabke gale lagta hoon
mujhe oonse bhi mohabbat hai jinhone mera dil dukhaya hoga

tasveer k pahlu hai do dosti aur mohabbat meri nazar mein
khuda jaanta hai mera maine har dastoor nibhaya hoga
Bahoot khoob salil!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2009, 04:53:51 PM »
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Janabe Wala Bahut khoob,
Dad qubool firmain


han kafi dino ke baad aap ko dekh raha hun

javed
Bahut bahut Shukriya muhtaram Javed sahib, aap aye to hamari is shayiri ko char chand lag gaye... Mehrbani Nawazish...
Bahoot khoob likha hai syed ji... Applause Applause Applause
Salma Saahiba, aap ne pasand kiya bahut achha laga hamen, shukriya...
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2009, 09:57:25 AM »
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shukriya syed bhai ......aur salma
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«Reply #11 on: April 22, 2009, 06:26:39 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob syednaami!!

Good one Salil!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2009, 06:59:03 PM »
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Bare dinon bad khud izhar-e-khayal karne ko dil chaha, so aap logon ki khidmat men yeh ghazal paish kar raha, doston ko behad pasand ayegi... Shukirya


Kuchh anjane men kisi ne hamen sataya hoga,
Kuchh anjane men hamne kisi ko rulaya hoga...

Rishton ke khel men apne paraye hote hain,
Kuchh Parayon ko hamne bhi dil se lagaya hoga...

Dukh to hota hai chehron ke badal jaane par,
Khair aisa keh kar hamne hi unka dil dukhaya hoga...

Baat chhoti ko bari banne men der kahan lagti hai,
Isi tarah doston ne hi kuchh baton ko barhaya hoga...

Bigri ko ham hi bar bar banaate rahe dil se,
Shayad doston ko bhi kabhi aisa khayal aya hoga...

In baton se dil ko hi milti hai takleef bahut,
Bas dosti karke hamne khud ko hi zara sataya hoga...

Bane the dost jo kal aaj bhi dost hain apne liye,
Lagta nahin kyun Naami ko bhi unhonne dost banaya hoga...



-!Syed!-

waah sayednaami..
kyaa baat hai jee...
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2009, 04:54:02 PM »
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Bare dinon bad khud izhar-e-khayal karne ko dil chaha, so aap logon ki khidmat men yeh ghazal paish kar raha, doston ko behad pasand ayegi... Shukirya


Kuchh anjane men kisi ne hamen sataya hoga,
Kuchh anjane men hamne kisi ko rulaya hoga...

Rishton ke khel men apne paraye hote hain,
Kuchh Parayon ko hamne bhi dil se lagaya hoga...

Dukh to hota hai chehron ke badal jaane par,
Khair aisa keh kar hamne hi unka dil dukhaya hoga...

Baat chhoti ko bari banne men der kahan lagti hai,
Isi tarah doston ne hi kuchh baton ko barhaya hoga...

Bigri ko ham hi bar bar banaate rahe dil se,
Shayad doston ko bhi kabhi aisa khayal aya hoga...

In baton se dil ko hi milti hai takleef bahut,
Bas dosti karke hamne khud ko hi zara sataya hoga...

Bane the dost jo kal aaj bhi dost hain apne liye,
Lagta nahin kyun Naami ko bhi unhonne dost banaya hoga...



-!Syed!-


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Syed ji aapne bohat khoob likha hai 
yuhi likhte rahiye Great lines ...
Miss you lotsss Syed ji....
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2009, 03:43:29 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob syednaami!!

Good one Salil!!

Bahut shukriya aap ki tashreef aavari ka aur taareef kel liye meherbaani, Pooja sahiba...
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