Dosti Me Wada

by Meena on April 09, 2005, 05:40:53 PM
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Jo Wada kiya hai dosti me tumne,
Usse wafadari se nibana tum,

Agar toot gaya wada to tootega mera dil,
Tume hum apna samajhte hai, gair humko na banana tum,

Door to hai par tere dil ki baat sun hi lete hai,
Humare hote hue gum ke anson na bahana tum,

Jane kab tak ka saath hai, jane kab bichad jaye,
Rahenge tere dil me humesha, khud ko akhele na pana tum!
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2005, 05:43:06 PM »
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Jo Wada kiya hai dosti me tumne,
Usse wafadari se nibana tum,

Agar toot gaya wada to tootega mera dil,
Tume hum apna samajhte hai, gair humko na banana tum,

Door to hai par tere dil ki baat sun hi lete hai,
Humare hote hue gum ke anson na bahana tum,

Jane kab tak ka saath hai, jane kab bichad jaye,
Rahenge tere dil me humesha, khud ko akhele na pana tum!


wow  meena.............kya  baat  hai,.............  every lines  is  very  nice  meena.........bahot  khoob...................  :lol:
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2005, 06:08:50 PM »
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Jo Wada kiya hai dosti me tumne,
Usse wafadari se nibana tum,

Agar toot gaya wada to tootega mera dil,
Tume hum apna samajhte hai, gair humko na banana tum,

Door to hai par tere dil ki baat sun hi lete hai,
Humare hote hue gum ke anson na bahana tum,

Jane kab tak ka saath hai, jane kab bichad jaye,
Rahenge tere dil me humesha, khud ko akhele na pana tum!


lafz nhi hai iss kalaam ki tarrif ke liye..... bahut hi acha likha hai aapney .... kitna khusnaseeb hai woh dost jiskey liye yeh kaalam likha gya hai ......  aap ki issi kalaam ko nazar kertey huye jo kyaal dil mein aaye hain likh rha hooN. umeed hai aap ko achi lagagi meri yeh kalaam... to pesh-e-kidmat hai ......


Kiya hai jo wadda to isse 'ta umr nibaunga
Duniya mein waffa ki yeh missal bnaunga

Tere dil ko kabhi tootney na dunnga 'e dost
Naz krogi dosti pe, mein aasi rasm chalauna

janta hu ke sun hi leti hai tu iss dil ki baat
chahtey huye bhi koi baat na tum se chupa paunga

mila hai jo tu mujhko to mil gyi zannat mujhey
pooja krunga teri tere sajdey pe sir jukaunga

Milna aur bichdna to khuda ke hath hai "HumTum"
Pass payegi har pal mujhey teri sansooN mein bas jaunga


HumTum
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2005, 06:23:29 PM »
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thank u waheed!!!!!!!!

 :D

@ hum tum:

aww such a sweet and cute and lovely and... and....and...poem!!!!!!!!!! bohot hi ache!!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2005, 08:46:44 PM »
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very  nice  hum  tum................:lol:............
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2005, 11:51:04 PM »
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Kya baat hai Meena.... jawaab nahi aapka....it's beautiful..

HumTum...wah....Bohat umdah!
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2005, 07:03:36 AM »
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wah wah ... bohat khoob ..... meena Usual Smile   and  hum tum Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2005, 03:34:39 PM »
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thank u ji thank u aryaan ji and nishu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2005, 12:07:10 PM »
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wada joh tumne kiya kabhi todna nahin
kisi aur se ab ye dill jodna nahin
gar yoon karke wada tera toota
samajh lena ies duniya main ek ashiq ka dum choota.
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2005, 12:09:51 PM »
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wada joh tumne kiya kabhi todna nahin
kisi aur se ab ye dill jodna nahin
gar yoon karke wada tera toota
samajh lena ies duniya main ek ashiq ka dum choota.


wah .. wah... kya baat hai rawat sahab ... bahut achey ...

mein kis se kahu ki shab-e-gum kya hai, buri bla hai
mujhey kya bura tha marna gar ik baar hota .....


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«Reply #10 on: April 15, 2005, 09:27:29 AM »
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maza aa gaya kya likha hai meena,humtum aur rawat keep it up!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 15, 2005, 09:31:05 AM »
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maza aa gaya kya likha hai meena,humtum aur rawat keep it up!!!!!!!


Shikriya ji Shukriya.......
wassey aap nhi kamal likhtey ho Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2005, 09:33:47 AM »
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maza aa gaya kya likha hai meena,humtum aur rawat keep it up!!!!!!!


Shikriya ji Shukriya.......
wassey aap nhi kamal likhtey ho Usual Smile

thank you ji,thnk you very much Usual Smile  :D
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«Reply #13 on: April 15, 2005, 04:03:59 PM »
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maza aa gaya kya likha hai meena,humtum aur rawat keep it up!!!!!!!


shukriya ji shukriya!!!

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«Reply #14 on: April 16, 2005, 09:06:48 AM »
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wah wah wah wah wah wah.........wonderfuuuul kya likha hai meena and humtum,bohat acche.
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