FOR MY FRIEND....................

by smile_deep1 on December 21, 2004, 07:27:07 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 23, 2004, 06:32:07 PM »
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tum to aaj ek nayi poem laane wali thi :evil:
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«Reply #16 on: December 23, 2004, 07:14:10 PM »
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nahin la payin...............

you said u'll love me,
you said u'll care.
whenever i'll need you,
you said u'll be there.
you said u'll catch me ,
whenever i fall.
you said that to me,
when u said nothing at all.
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«Reply #17 on: December 23, 2004, 07:16:30 PM »
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to ye kya hai Shocked
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«Reply #18 on: December 23, 2004, 07:19:51 PM »
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well actually nahin likha aaj koi.........

yeh bahut pehlay likha tha aachanak yaad aya to likh diya........... samjhay
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«Reply #19 on: December 23, 2004, 07:21:24 PM »
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kaatil likha hai kasam se
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«Reply #20 on: December 23, 2004, 07:23:22 PM »
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tahe dil se shukriya janab
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«Reply #21 on: December 23, 2004, 07:25:12 PM »
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ji aapka su swagat hai! aap jara apni tashreef mere thread mein bhi le jayein to badi mehrbaani hogi..

apne sunder sunder haathon se kuch comments likh dein wahan ek nayi poem pe

Puzzled !


jaa ab dekhti rahegi
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«Reply #22 on: December 23, 2004, 07:27:49 PM »
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kaun se thread main apkay to bahut thread hain janab
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«Reply #23 on: December 23, 2004, 07:30:58 PM »
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shayari-e-jindagi

ek hi to hai jahan apni poems post karta hun Puzzled !

>> poems by me
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«Reply #24 on: December 23, 2004, 08:37:06 PM »
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nahin la payin...............

you said you'll love me,
you said you'll care.
whenever i'll need you,
you said you'll be there.
you said you'll catch me ,
whenever i fall.
you said that to me,
when you said nothing at all.


wow! deep thts an amazing work
ab kya bolun ! words hi nahi mil rahe
 

tumhari poem itni sweet hai ki tareef
ke liye kuch bhi likhun kam hi padega

keep it up! i luv 2 c ur work more...

ur amaing poet

:kiss:
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«Reply #25 on: December 23, 2004, 08:40:50 PM »
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i'll try to bring more of my work.......... and in better way...........well its always nice to read ur comments............ aur waisay bhi i know  tum words  yaad hi nahin karna chahtey thai......... coz fir tumko apnay poems main word ki kami ho jati to.......... i understand ................. hmmmmmmmmmm
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«Reply #26 on: December 24, 2004, 03:18:25 AM »
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i'll try to bring more of my work.......... and in better way...........well its always nice to read ur comments............ aur waisay bhi i know  tum words  yaad hi nahin karna chahtey thai......... coz fir tumko apnay poems main word ki kami ho jati to.......... i understand ................. hmmmmmmmmmm


nai yaar sachchi kasam se
bada kamaal  likha hai  :oops:
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«Reply #27 on: December 24, 2004, 07:23:45 AM »
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nahin la payin...............

you said you'll love me,
you said you'll care.
whenever i'll need you,
you said you'll be there.
you said you'll catch me ,
whenever i fall.
you said that to me,
when you said nothing at all.


ronan keating. wowow... he was nispiration wen u wrote this Winking nice work
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«Reply #28 on: December 24, 2004, 07:33:46 AM »
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lolz............. insipirations to kahi se mil hi jati ahin..............  ya it was.....
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«Reply #29 on: December 24, 2004, 07:41:48 AM »
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hehe.. my fav song.. Usual Smile
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