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Milte Hai kai Anjaane Sehar Mein
Koi Dost Ko Koi Hamsafar ban Jata hai
KOi bhar jata hai Khusiyan Daaman Mein
Koi umar Bhar ka Gum De jaata hai .. !!

Par Tujhse Kyun Koi Shikwa Nahi Hai
Tu Kaun hai, Apna lage par Apna nahi Hai
Tune Hi tho Hasi Di Hai Mere labo Ko
Tu Hakkikat hai Eh dost, Koi Sapna nahi hai !!

Tere AAne se mehfil Bhi rangeen Ho Jaaye
Tere Jaane Se Har dil , Gumsum sa Ho Jata hai
Kaise kahun ,Tu Tho Jaan hai, Har Dil Ki
Tere Baaton se Dil sabka Machal Jata hai ..!!

Tu pagal hai, shayad thoda Jhoota bhi
Tu har pal hasaye, kabhi-2 Mujhe ruta Bhi
Jante hai sab hamari Dosti hai bemisaal
Nazar Bhi Lagi Hame, Kai baar saath Chuta bhi..!!

Par Hamesha saath ho tum Mere har pal mein
Uss Jaisa Aur Koi Nahi Hoga Iss Dil Mein
Tu hai tho Andera Bhi Roshan Ho Jaata hai
Kaash Takraun Tumse main Apni har Manzil mein..!!

Rakhna Usko Bhi Tu Khuda Hamesha Khush
Chahe rahu ya Na rahu Main Iss Duniya Mein
De Dena Mere Hisse Ke Khushi Bhi Usse
Jo Apna Sa hai Iss Berang Anjaan Duniya Mein !!

Divya
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2011, 09:22:46 PM »
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Bahut Acha lagta Hai jab Koi Dil ki Gehraiyon Se Sache Jazbaaton Se Koi Kisi Ke Liye Kuch Likhta Hai...

Muaafi Chaahunga Mujhse raha na gaya aur main sabse pehle aa gaya Comment karne Sophi..Bahut Bahut Aur Bahuttttttttt Khooob!!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Jazbaat!!!Har lafz Dil ko Chuta Hoon..

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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2011, 11:16:16 PM »
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yes sophi........sach me khwaish ji sahi me raha nahin gya padhkar.....
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dil ko chhuta hua har ek shabd.....
ek dhundhlli si tasveer banata gaya....
dil me ek ajeeb si lehar uthne lagi..
koi bht apna hume bhi yaad aata gaya...!!!!


excellent creation and feelings sophi....
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2011, 03:53:41 AM »
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Ehm Ehm..Jazbaat behte nazar aa rahe hai..
Akhri line toh oho lajawab..
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Dil choo liya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2011, 08:44:50 AM »
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Bahut Sundar ... Bhaut khoobsurat ehsaas bayaan kiye haiN Aapne ... Sophi Ji !

kavita ki har pankti dil ko chhoo kar hi nahi jaati .. balkii apni mauzudgi bhi darz kara ke jaati hai ... behad umdaa likha hai ... !

tahe dil se daad ... !
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2011, 10:48:10 AM »
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wah wah sophiji.... sundar....

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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2011, 01:20:09 PM »
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Wah ....dosti ho to aesi      Sophi ji..

Sada yun hi is dosti ka silsila chalta rahe
Is dosti ko kabhi kisi ki nazar na lage....
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2011, 01:55:31 PM »
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I have not found any suitable title than "VIcky"

Milte Hai kai Anjaane Sehar Mein
Koi Dost Ko Koi Hamsafar ban Jata hai
KOi bhar jata hai Khusiyan Daaman Mein
Koi umar Bhar ka Gum De jaata hai .. !!

Par Tujhse Kyun Koi Shikwa Nahi Hai
Tu Kaun hai, Apna lage par Apna nahi Hai
Tune Hi tho Hasi Di Hai Mere labo Ko
Tu Hakkikat hai Eh dost, Koi Sapna nahi hai !!

Tere AAne se mehfil Bhi rangeen Ho Jaaye
Tere Jaane Se Har dil , Gumsum sa Ho Jata hai
Kaise kahun ,Tu Tho Jaan hai, Har Dil Ki
Tere Baaton se Dil sabka Machal Jata hai ..!!

Tu pagal hai, shayad thoda Jhoota bhi
Tu har pal hasaye, kabhi-2 Mujhe ruta Bhi
Jante hai sab hamari Dosti hai bemisaal
Nazar Bhi Lagi Hame, Kai baar saath Chuta bhi..!!

Par Hamesha saath ho tum Mere har pal mein
Uss Jaisa Aur Koi Nahi Hoga Iss Dil Mein
Tu hai tho Andera Bhi Roshan Ho Jaata hai
Kaash Takraun Tumse main Apni har Manzil mein..!!

Rakhna Usko Bhi Tu Khuda Hamesha Khush
Chahe rahu ya Na rahu Main Iss Duniya Mein
De Dena Mere Hisse Ke Khushi Bhi Usse
Jo Apna Sa hai Iss Berang Anjaan Duniya Mein !!

Divya

tere alfaaz mein hamesha ek naya pan raha,
tere andaaz mein aksar ek bholapan raha,
teri nigaah hamesha talaashti hai khudko...!
teri nazar mein 'sophi'sabke liye apnapan raha..!!

main sophi ji ooper likhe chund halke alfaaz aapke nazar kar rahaa hoon . qabool farmaaye. main aapki taarif mein isse se zayada aur nahin likh sakta.kyonki aapki lekhni ko, aapke cocern ko takreeban main 2.5 years se jaanta hoon. aapki tarah khuch aur hain to abb nahin aate unhain bhi miss karta hoon

thank you ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2011, 12:30:49 PM »
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Bahut Acha lagta Hai jab Koi Dil ki Gehraiyon Se Sache Jazbaaton Se Koi Kisi Ke Liye Kuch Likhta Hai...

Muaafi Chaahunga Mujhse raha na gaya aur main sabse pehle aa gaya Comment karne Sophi..Bahut Bahut Aur Bahuttttttttt Khooob!!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Jazbaat!!!Har lafz Dil ko Chuta Hoon..

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Thanyou soo much khawaish ji.  For appreciating My creation. Maine aise likh diya apne iss shetaan dost k liye.. aur sorry ki kya baat hai balki khushi hui apka comment dekh kar. thanks a lot. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2011, 02:55:14 PM »
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I have not found any suitable title than "VIcky"

Milte Hai kai Anjaane Sehar Mein
Koi Dost Ko Koi Hamsafar ban Jata hai
KOi bhar jata hai Khusiyan Daaman Mein
Koi umar Bhar ka Gum De jaata hai .. !!

Par Tujhse Kyun Koi Shikwa Nahi Hai
Tu Kaun hai, Apna lage par Apna nahi Hai
Tune Hi tho Hasi Di Hai Mere labo Ko
Tu Hakkikat hai Eh dost, Koi Sapna nahi hai !!

Tere AAne se mehfil Bhi rangeen Ho Jaaye
Tere Jaane Se Har dil , Gumsum sa Ho Jata hai
Kaise kahun ,Tu Tho Jaan hai, Har Dil Ki
Tere Baaton se Dil sabka Machal Jata hai ..!!

Tu pagal hai, shayad thoda Jhoota bhi
Tu har pal hasaye, kabhi-2 Mujhe ruta Bhi
Jante hai sab hamari Dosti hai bemisaal
Nazar Bhi Lagi Hame, Kai baar saath Chuta bhi..!!

Par Hamesha saath ho tum Mere har pal mein
Uss Jaisa Aur Koi Nahi Hoga Iss Dil Mein
Tu hai tho Andera Bhi Roshan Ho Jaata hai
Kaash Takraun Tumse main Apni har Manzil mein..!!

Rakhna Usko Bhi Tu Khuda Hamesha Khush
Chahe rahu ya Na rahu Main Iss Duniya Mein
De Dena Mere Hisse Ke Khushi Bhi Usse
Jo Apna Sa hai Iss Berang Anjaan Duniya Mein !!

Divya

gud one sophi ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2011, 05:07:46 PM »
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Bahut khubsurat peshaksh sophiji..khuda aapki aur mann ji ki dosti hamesha salamat rakhe aur apki dosti ko kisi ki nazar na lage ya hi dua hai..bahut khoob ji...
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«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2011, 09:28:56 PM »
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yes sophi........sach me khwaish ji sahi me raha nahin gya padhkar.....
 love4 love4 love4 love4
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

dil ko chhuta hua har ek shabd.....
ek dhundhlli si tasveer banata gaya....
dil me ek ajeeb si lehar uthne lagi..
koi bht apna hume bhi yaad aata gaya...!!!!


excellent creation and feelings sophi....


Thank You so So Much Anamika Ji... I pleased to see ur Lovely Comments .. Thank you so so much !
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«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2011, 09:30:30 PM »
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Ehm Ehm..Jazbaat behte nazar aa rahe hai..
Akhri line toh oho lajawab..
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Dil choo liya di..
Khush rahiye..!

haha.. Dont Take It Otherwise..  Winking

And thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for Ur beautiful comments , Thanks Bhai !!
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«Reply #13 on: April 18, 2011, 09:39:58 PM »
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Bahut Sundar ... Bhaut khoobsurat ehsaas bayaan kiye haiN Aapne ... Sophi Ji !

kavita ki har pankti dil ko chhoo kar hi nahi jaati .. balkii apni mauzudgi bhi darz kara ke jaati hai ... behad umdaa likha hai ... !

tahe dil se daad ... !
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Wow.. I am really happy to See ur Such a Wonderful Comments .. Thank You  Naresh Ji.. for Lovely appreciation...  Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: April 18, 2011, 09:41:29 PM »
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wah wah sophiji.... sundar....

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Thank You sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much Manjum Ji ! Usual Smile
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