Itna waqt bhi kum laga!

by anjaan dharkan on December 09, 2008, 08:26:16 PM
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chand ghanto k leeyaen sahee, aaj nazar sehklee humne,
teree aankhon mein dostee kee chuhpee muhabbat dehklee humne.
Shukriya dost, humme khud k layak sahmja... Aaj kee tammam sadee sahee, humko teray saath k leeyaen itna waqt bhi kum laga!
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2008, 01:10:16 AM »
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chand ghanto k leeyaen sahee, aaj nazar sehklee humne,
teree aankhon mein dostee kee chuhpee muhabbat dehklee humne.
Shukriya dost, humme khud k layak sahmja... Aaj kee tammam sadee sahee, humko teray saath k leeyaen itna waqt bhi kum laga!

hai ni kya baat hai ANJAAN

ANJAAN DHADKAN KI DHADKAN BHI AAJ RUK GAYI
PAAS WOH AAYE AUR PALKEY SUK GAYI

MILA NASIBOH SEY AAJ MERA YAAR
AISEY NASEEB PEH AAJ, YEH NIGAAH JHUK GAYI
ANJAAN DHADKAN KI DHADKAN BHI AAJ RUK GAYI

ABB SAATH HI REHNA MERE, HAR PAL MERE PIA
TERE SAATH KI KAHANI AAJ SAKHIYOH SEY BAK GAYI
ANJAAN DHADKAN KI DHADKAN BHI AAJ RUK GAYI


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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2008, 01:24:24 AM »
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Good one Anjaan Ji
Jas Ji tera to  koi jawaab nahi
Likhto ho jo hoti hai kamaal ki
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2008, 02:03:16 AM »
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hai ni kya baat hai ANJAAN

ANJAAN DHADKAN KI DHADKAN BHI AAJ RUK GAYI
PAAS WOH AAYE AUR PALKEY SUK GAYI

MILA NASIBOH SEY AAJ MERA YAAR
AISEY NASEEB PEH AAJ, YEH NIGAAH JHUK GAYI
ANJAAN DHADKAN KI DHADKAN BHI AAJ RUK GAYI

ABB SAATH HI REHNA MERE, HAR PAL MERE PIA
TERE SAATH KI KAHANI AAJ SAKHIYOH SEY BAK GAYI
ANJAAN DHADKAN KI DHADKAN BHI AAJ RUK GAYI


JASBIR SINGH

damn good maan! meray naam pe iss nazam ko lihknay ka tah-e-dil se shukriya!
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2008, 02:05:15 AM »
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BAHOOT KHOOB ANJAAN AND JAS JI
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2008, 02:08:02 AM »
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Good one Anjaan Ji
Jas Ji tera to  koi jawaab nahi
Likhto ho jo hoti hai kamaal ki

thx rajesh!
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2008, 02:12:29 AM »
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BAHOOT KHOOB ANJAAN AND JAS JI
THX POOJA
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2008, 06:17:53 PM »
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Good one Anjaan Ji
Jas Ji tera to  koi jawaab nahi
Likhto ho jo hoti hai kamaal ki



Thanks Rajesh

buss yaar, itna bhi paid peh na chadao
hamey jameen meh hi rehney doh
yu aasmaan ki sair na karao

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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2008, 06:18:57 PM »
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BAHOOT KHOOB ANJAAN AND JAS JI


Thanks JI


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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2008, 06:22:12 PM »
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damn good maan! meray naam pe iss nazam ko lihknay ka tah-e-dil se shukriya!


Thanks Anjaan

yeh mainey koi kamaal nahi kia
aap ki nazrey padi aur buss yuhi likhta chala gaya
likhney sey pehley toh main bhi jaanta tha ki kya likha jayega
aap ney apney dil ka haal iss kadar bayaan kia ki buss yeh aap neh naam ho gaya.
so thanks mera nahi ANJAAN, apna hi karo.

fir bhi, aap koh pasand aaya, aap ka bahut thanks


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«Reply #10 on: December 10, 2008, 08:20:26 PM »
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Thanks Anjaan

yeh mainey koi kamaal nahi kia
aap ki nazrey padi aur buss yuhi likhta chala gaya
likhney sey pehley toh main bhi jaanta tha ki kya likha jayega
aap ney apney dil ka haal iss kadar bayaan kia ki buss yeh aap neh naam ho gaya.
so thanks mera nahi ANJAAN, apna hi karo.

fir bhi, aap koh pasand aaya, aap ka bahut thanks


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janaab, now u r just simply being modest!
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«Reply #11 on: December 10, 2008, 08:30:07 PM »
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janaab, now u r just simply being modest!

nahi ANJAAN

HUM KISI KA HAKK NAHI MAARTEY
TABHI TOH HUM KABHI ISHQ NAHI SAMAJTEY

KAL TAK JOH MERI HO KEY REHTI THI
AAJ KISI AUR KI BANN KEY REHTI HAI
USS DEWANEY SEY HUM APNA PYAAR NAHI MAANGEY
ABB SAMJEY AAP, HUM USKA HAKK NAHI MARTEY



toh joh aap ka hakk raha, aap koh kaha
aap hi ki wajah sey woh lines likhi gayi,
toh woh aap ka hakk ....
samje ki nahi samje ?
samje naa ?


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«Reply #12 on: December 11, 2008, 08:06:37 PM »
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chalo yaar... sahi hai! maan gaye... lols! u r a great writer though.


achha lihnay waalon ka dard ANJAANA sa, buss haathon mein kulumn hee dunya ko wo dard sahmjaa paata hai...
kuch sahay huway shabd, kuch betee huwee baataen aashique dunya ko ek shaer se hee bataa pata hai!

aapko AGAR koi dard hai jasbir, tho ye dardh aap k lafzon mein saaf bayaan hota hai... ye khubsuratee shabdon mein yunheen nahee aatee... aur agar koi dhuk nahee hai, tho i salute your writing! iss ka matlab u r a born natural!
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«Reply #13 on: December 13, 2008, 12:54:59 AM »
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chalo yaar... sahi hai! maan gaye... lols! u r a great writer though.


achha lihnay waalon ka dard ANJAANA sa, buss haathon mein kulumn hee dunya ko wo dard sahmjaa paata hai...
kuch sahay huway shabd, kuch betee huwee baataen aashique dunya ko ek shaer se hee bataa pata hai!

aapko AGAR koi dard hai jasbir, tho ye dardh aap k lafzon mein saaf bayaan hota hai... ye khubsuratee shabdon mein yunheen nahee aatee... aur agar koi dhuk nahee hai, tho i salute your writing! iss ka matlab u r a born natural!


ANJAAN BORN WRITER KOI NAHI HOTA HAI
DARD HI USEY SHABDOH MEH PIROTA HAI

JITNEY GHEHREY DARD SEY GUJROHGEY
UTNEY GEHREY SHABDOH SEY SULJOHGEY

ANJAAN DHADKAN KAB HAI BANTI
JASBIR KEY DARD MEH JAB YEH RAMTI
KHUSHIYOH SEY HUM KOSO DOOR CHALEY AAYE HAI
ABB TOH INTEZAAR MAUT MEH BANTI


GHARONDA SARA BIKHAR GAYA HAI
HAR GAM ABB NIKHAR GAYA HAI
LOG BHI HAI ABB TOH JAANTEY
JASBIR KA DIL MARR GAYA HAI



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«Reply #14 on: December 13, 2008, 01:53:08 AM »
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Nice Jas Ji
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