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jub mushqile tamaam, jeevan mein aa rahe tey

by livingbytheday on June 24, 2012, 09:13:05 AM

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jub mushqile tamaam, jeevan mein aa rahe tey
jub lamhe lamhe dil ko, behad sataa rahe tey
wo log jinko maine dhadhakan bana ke rakha
saare jahan mein jinko apna bataa ke rakha
jub haarne laga main waqt ke kehar se
muuh pherne lagey wo, mujhse meri nazar se
jub zindagi andheri ek raat ho rahi thi
jub bhor ke ujaale mein dard ro rahi thi
....
jub zindagi pe mera aitbaar ko raha tha.....
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aise hi waqt mein tum ek "deep" bankar aaye
aur phir samet kar mujhe "deepak" bana diya
jajbe nazar ke tumko, lafzo mein kya kahen par
masoom dosti ka ai yaar shukriyaa
phir se milo jo humko jeevan ke raah par tum
tumko batayenge phir,
kitne azeez tey tum,
kitne azeez ho tum.....


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Re: jub mushqile tamaam, jeevan mein aa rahe tey

«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2012, 01:47:18 PM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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Re: jub mushqile tamaam, jeevan mein aa rahe tey

«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2012, 03:23:20 AM »

bahut khubsurat kalam... dono part bahut khubsurti se bayani hai...........bahut bahut mubarakbaad aapko dhero daad


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Re: jub mushqile tamaam, jeevan mein aa rahe tey

«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2012, 05:44:43 PM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Deepak ji....!!!


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Re: jub mushqile tamaam, jeevan mein aa rahe tey

«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2012, 03:41:25 PM »

bahut khoob jee


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Re: jub mushqile tamaam, jeevan mein aa rahe tey

«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2012, 03:36:21 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on June 24, 2012, 01:47:18 PM

waah waah bahut khoob

thank you saini sir


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Re: jub mushqile tamaam, jeevan mein aa rahe tey

«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2012, 03:37:01 PM »

Quote from: soudagar on June 25, 2012, 03:23:20 AM

bahut khubsurat kalam... dono part bahut khubsurti se bayani hai...........bahut bahut mubarakbaad aapko dhero daad

thank you soudagar ji


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Re: jub mushqile tamaam, jeevan mein aa rahe tey

«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2012, 03:37:32 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 25, 2012, 05:44:43 PM

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Deepak ji....!!!

thank you sir


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Re: jub mushqile tamaam, jeevan mein aa rahe tey

«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2012, 03:38:07 PM »

Quote from: suman59 on June 26, 2012, 03:41:25 PM

bahut khoob jee

suman ji thank you


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