*Mere Dost*( Mere Yoindia Doston Ke Liye)

by honeyrose on December 30, 2008, 06:30:33 AM
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Chand ho tum ya dil mein noor ho tum
Jab bhi zameen mein uttar the ho khayamt ho tum

Tumse ek pyaar ka rishta joda hai dil ke kareeb ho tum
Humare dosti ki kitab mein pehla alfaaz ho tum

Kehne ko toh bohat kuch hai par Arsaa-e-aalam ho tum
Dosti ke duniya mein dil ke dhadkan ho tum

__________honeyrose__________
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«Reply #1 on: December 30, 2008, 07:10:31 AM »
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Bohat umda kalam likha hain honey.... Clapping Smiley

Achche ho bure ho jaise bhi ho
Shukr hain khuda ka mere ho tum

                        -SG-
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«Reply #2 on: December 30, 2008, 08:27:18 AM »
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Chand ho tum ya dil mein noor ho tum
Jab bhi zameen mein uttar the ho khayamt ho tum

Tumse ek pyaar ka rishta joda hai dil ke kareeb ho tum
Humare dosti ki kitab mein pehla alfaaz ho tum

Kehne ko toh bohat kuch hai par Arsaa-e-aalam ho tum
Dosti ke duniya mein dil ke dhadkan ho tum

__________honeyrose__________


Bahut hi khoob, Honey Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 30, 2008, 10:26:43 AM »
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Chand ho tum ya dil mein noor ho tum
Jab bhi zameen mein uttar the ho khayamt ho tum

Tumse ek pyaar ka rishta joda hai dil ke kareeb ho tum
Humare dosti ki kitab mein pehla alfaaz ho tum

Kehne ko toh bohat kuch hai par Arsaa-e-aalam ho tum
Dosti ke duniya mein dil ke dhadkan ho tum

__________honeyrose__________


bahut accha likha hai Jaya di aapne
nice !!!
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«Reply #4 on: December 30, 2008, 10:32:21 AM »
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Bohat umda kalam likha hain honey.... Clapping Smiley

Achche ho bure ho jaise bhi ho
Shukr hain khuda ka mere ho tum

                        -SG-


Kya baat hai Sajid sahab
aapne bhi khoob likha hai
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: December 30, 2008, 11:32:39 AM »
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Chand ho tum ya dil mein noor ho tum
Jab bhi zameen mein uttar the ho khayamt ho tum

Tumse ek pyaar ka rishta joda hai dil ke kareeb ho tum
Humare dosti ki kitab mein pehla alfaaz ho tum

Kehne ko toh bohat kuch hai par Arsaa-e-aalam ho tum
Dosti ke duniya mein dil ke dhadkan ho tum

__________honeyrose__________

Bahut Khoob likha hai Honey Ji aap ne
Koshish kar ke jawaab doonga
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«Reply #6 on: December 30, 2008, 11:42:41 AM »
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Chand ho tum ya dil mein noor ho tum
Jab bhi zameen mein uttar the ho khayamt ho tum

Tumse ek pyaar ka rishta joda hai dil ke kareeb ho tum
Humare dosti ki kitab mein pehla alfaaz ho tum

Kehne ko toh bohat kuch hai par Arsaa-e-aalam ho tum
Dosti ke duniya mein dil ke dhadkan ho tum

__________honeyrose__________



very nice and sweet poem by you HONEY. great work

Jasbir Singh
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: December 30, 2008, 11:45:16 AM »
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Kuch likh raha hoon Honey Ji

Chaand sitaron mein basne wali zannat ki hoor ho tum
Zameen pe rahne wali meri aankhon ki noor ho tum

Dil ki dharkan ki tarah mere dil mein basi ho tum
Mere is beraan  zindagi har pal ki  saathi ho tum

Koi agar hum se yeh pooche ki meri kaun ho tum
Garvh ke saath kahta hoon ki meri zindagi ho tum
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«Reply #8 on: December 30, 2008, 11:47:25 AM »
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Kuch likh raha hoon Honey Ji

Chaand sitaron mein basne wali zannat ki hoor ho tum
Zameen pe rahne wali meri aankhon ki noor ho tum

Dil ki dharkan ki tarah mere dil mein basi ho tum
Mere is beraan  zindagi har pal ki  saathi ho tum

Koi agar hum se yeh pooche ki meri kaun ho tum
Garvh ke saath kahta hoon ki meri zindagi ho tum


arey wah RAJESH kya baat kahi hai, bahut hi badiya kaha hai aap neh. very very nice


Jasbir Singh
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2008, 11:50:28 AM »
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Thanks Jasbir Ji
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cara
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2008, 12:33:49 PM »
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honeyji......

aap aesa vesa dost nahin ho tum,
madh-gulab ho "honeyrose" ho tum.
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«Reply #11 on: December 30, 2008, 02:40:12 PM »
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Bohat umda kalam likha hain honey.... Clapping Smiley

Achche ho bure ho jaise bhi ho
Shukr hain khuda ka mere ho tum

                        -SG-


Shukriya sajid ji..bohat khoob likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #12 on: December 30, 2008, 02:40:57 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob, Honey Ji Applause Applause

Shukriya Deepati dear...
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«Reply #13 on: December 30, 2008, 02:41:33 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai Jaya di aapne
nice !!!
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Thanks diya dear.....
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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2008, 02:42:14 PM »
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very nice and sweet poem by you HONEY. great work

Jasbir Singh

Thanks Jasbir ji...
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