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sath rehta tha parchai bankar
kho gaya aaj yaado.n ki syaahhi bankar
mere dil k gharonde ko jisne jeena sikhaya
wahi aaj so gaya hai unn wado.n ki duhai bankar
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2008, 07:13:49 PM » |
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nice lines phoenix!! nice to see you today!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2008, 07:16:38 PM » |
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thank you pooja ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2008, 07:18:38 PM » |
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Bohot khoob Nitesh !!! Nice to see you after such a long time...!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2008, 08:59:30 PM » |
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thank u tallu ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2008, 02:10:29 AM » |
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sath rehta tha parchai bankar
kho gaya aaj yaado.n ki syaahhi bankar
mere dil k gharonde ko jisne jeena sikhaya
wahi aaj so gaya hai unn wado.n ki duhai bankar
Bahut khoob... |
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2008, 07:47:36 PM » |
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thnx roja ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2008, 03:35:52 AM » |
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subaha subah in lines ko padkar kisi ki yaad me aankhen nam ho gai........ Dil ke zazbaat ko lafz dene ka liye...... jitana khun kam lagta hai phoenix  |
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2008, 04:18:28 AM » |
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Bahoot achhe janaab...pheonix ji.... sath rehta tha parchai bankar
kho gaya aaj yaado.n ki syaahhi bankar
mere dil k gharonde ko jisne jeena sikhaya
wahi aaj so gaya hai unn wado.n ki duhai bankar Duhayii ki baat kerte ho parchhai banker
Seekha bhi tumne GharoNde ka panchhi banker
Hum aaj bhi yaad kerte haiN dil hatheli per rakhe
jaane kyuiN tum door rehte ho kasayii banker
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«Reply #9 on: March 18, 2008, 06:14:42 PM » |
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nice reply harsh ji Bahoot achhe janaab...pheonix ji.... sath rehta tha parchai bankar
kho gaya aaj yaado.n ki syaahhi bankar
mere dil k gharonde ko jisne jeena sikhaya
wahi aaj so gaya hai unn wado.n ki duhai bankar Duhayii ki baat kerte ho parchhai banker
Seekha bhi tumne GharoNde ka panchhi banker
Hum aaj bhi yaad kerte haiN dil hatheli per rakhe
jaane kyuiN tum door rehte ho kasayii banker
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«Reply #10 on: March 18, 2008, 06:16:03 PM » |
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sunkar aacha laga ki hamari soch milti hai thnx 4 ur appreciation Bahoot achhe janaab...pheonix ji.... sath rehta tha parchai bankar
kho gaya aaj yaado.n ki syaahhi bankar
mere dil k gharonde ko jisne jeena sikhaya
wahi aaj so gaya hai unn wado.n ki duhai bankar Duhayii ki baat kerte ho parchhai banker
Seekha bhi tumne GharoNde ka panchhi banker
Hum aaj bhi yaad kerte haiN dil hatheli per rakhe
jaane kyuiN tum door rehte ho kasayii banker
Harash |
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«Reply #11 on: March 18, 2008, 06:23:50 PM » |
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bandagi sikhakar masrur ho gaye
wo humse kuch iss tarah durr ho gaye
rehnuma kehte the khud ko mera
aaj saare rishte humse durr ho gaye
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«Reply #12 on: March 19, 2008, 05:19:33 AM » |
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koi kyon itana door chala jata hai.....
jahan se laut ke koi nahi aata hai
sath rehata tha jo shamo sahar mere
aaj khwabon me bhi aane se katraata hai.....
in the memeory of my brother
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«Reply #13 on: March 19, 2008, 05:37:26 AM » |
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bekarar wrote:- koi kyon itana door chala jata hai.....
jahan se laut ke koi nahi aata hai
sath rehata tha jo shamo sahar mere
aaj khwabon me bhi aane se katraata hai.....
in the memeory of my brother A...h....kya peshgi hai...bahoot khoob dost...bada dil ko soz maiN sarkaya hai aapne bekrar ji......insan kai baar bahoot mazboor sa ho jata hai ...bas maiN hi kutch nahi rehta...... humari taraf se bhi kuch qobool farmayen.. jo khaas aapke thread ke leye hai... ummeed karta hon k apke dil ko sakooN farmayega...... Tere tasavvar maiN rehker hamne jo sakooN paya hai
Tanha paloN ko har waqt apne dil maiN hi sazaya hai
Woh sawaal jo chupke se thhehre the hamare dil maiN
unhe har ibarat maiN yuiN hi khuda se poochhta aya hai
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«Reply #14 on: March 19, 2008, 05:46:44 AM » |
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phoenix wrote:- bandagi sikhakar masrur ho gaye
wo humse kuch iss tarah durr ho gaye
rehnuma kehte the khud ko mera
aaj saare rishte humse durr ho gaye bahoot khoob dost.....door hone ki baat toh door....hum toh bas yahi kahenge...kyuiN mile ho tum aise hi mujhe rahoN maiN
Na khatamm honge silsile aisi aaj haiN hum
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