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Yaad aate hain wo school ke din
Na jaate the school doshton ke bin
Kaisi wo doshti thi kaisa tha wo pyar
Ek din ki judai se darte the jab aata tha saniwar
Chalte chalte pathron main marte the thokar
Kabhi hashte gaate to kabhi chalte the rokar
Kandhon main bag liye haath main botel paani
Kise pata tha bachpan ki doshti bichhura degi jawaani
Yaad aate hain wo shayahi se range haath
Kaya din the wo jab karte the lunch saath
Chhutti ki ghanti sunte hi wo bhag ke kamre se bahar aana
Fir hashte hashte doshton se mil jaana
Kaash wo dosht aaj bhi mil jaate
Dil main fir se bachpan ke phool khil jaate
Sameer
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2007, 01:00:33 PM » |
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Wow... This is Lovely... =D> School ke dinn yaad aa gaye...  Its a Pleasant Feeling... Sameer, You are Most Welcome to our Family of Yoindia...
Keep Writing.... You are writing Very Well... |
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2007, 01:10:16 PM » |
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Thankyou so much shikha ji
Main bahut purana hoo yoindia sayad aapne meri poem nahi read kiyi maine apani first poem 2003 main post kiyi thi, beech main kuch apani duniya main busy the isliye kaafi dino wapas aaya achcha laga aate hi aapne appricate kiya thanks once again, yoinid se mere dil ke rishte hain yoindia se hi to main apani dil ki baat share karata hoo isliye thankyou yoindia & every members of yoindia
bye TC
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2007, 01:49:27 PM » |
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Thankyou so much shikha ji
Main bahut purana hoo yoindia sayad aapne meri poem nahi read kiyi maine apani first poem 2003 main post kiyi thi, beech main kuch apani duniya main busy the isliye kaafi dino wapas aaya achcha laga aate hi aapne appricate kiya thanks once again, yoinid se mere dil ke rishte hain yoindia se hi to main apani dil ki baat share karata hoo isliye thankyou yoindia & every members of yoindia
bye TC I am so Sorry....  How could I be so Careless.. to ignore your joining date... I have to rectify my Words... Welcome Back... To Your Family of Yoindia... Hope We will be able to read you regularly now.... |
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2007, 02:02:27 PM » |
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Maafi na maga karo doshti anmol badi hoti hai
Ek dosht ko chot pahuchi to dushare ki aankh roti hai
Kuch is tarah samaye ho dil main aap jaise saagar main moti hain
Tum paas nahi to kaya tumhari yaad khawab bankar paas mere soti hai
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2007, 02:28:42 AM » |
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Achcha likha hai !
.. nice attempt !
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2007, 09:30:43 AM » |
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Maafi na maga karo doshti anmol badi hoti hai
Ek dosht ko chot pahuchi to dushare ki aankh roti hai
Kuch is tarah samaye ho dil main aap jaise saagar main moti hain
Tum paas nahi to kaya tumhari yaad khawab bankar paas mere soti hai Nice One Again... |
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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2007, 09:50:53 AM » |
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Tumne hashte huye houshla badhaya
Jhuthi dilasha deke humne har jakham bhulaya
Doshti kaya hoti hai koi puchhe "SHIKHA JI" se
Jisne khud rote huye bhi auron ko hashya
Thankyou shikha once again
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«Reply #8 on: June 27, 2007, 10:46:24 AM » |
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ap sb ki buhat acchi ha.
enjoy kero aur kerwaty jaoo.thoro thori hamay b dosti sekhaty jaoo
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«Reply #9 on: June 27, 2007, 11:14:13 AM » |
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Farah Janab !!!
Naraj mat hoyiye aap bhi to mere dosht hai, jarur aap se bhi hum bahut kuch shikhenge agar aap shikhaye to
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2007, 11:36:29 AM » |
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why not.hm sekhay gy phr ap ko b seekhay gy.per os k ly ap ko b thori zahmat kerny paray gee. phely sekhay gy ap phr hm baty gy.dont mind
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2007, 04:05:58 AM » |
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Wah ji wah
Khush raho !!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2007, 04:38:19 PM » |
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aaj ki subah kuch ajib si thi
jaane kyun yaad dila gayi
woh school ke pyare din
jab hum sab befiker the duniya se
iss duniya ki gandagi se
ek pal mein doston se hoti thi takrar
aur agle he pal hum ban jaate the yaar
woh teacher ko copy kerna
woh last bench per sona
her baat ko hasi mein udana
aapni he duniya mein khoya rehna
rikshe ke paison se break mein samose khana
fir gher jaane ke liye doston se udhar lena
na chinta ki chita thi na nafrat ki andhi
woh bhi kya din the jab her pal saaath thi doston ki yaari
aaj ki subah ajib si thi
kuch yaad dil ker chali gayi
aankhon mein asoon the aur dil ga raha tha
"koi lauta de mere pyare pyare din
pyare pyare din woh mere pyare pal chin"
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2007, 09:25:21 PM » |
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nice sameer and srk ji
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«Reply #14 on: July 13, 2007, 03:14:47 AM » |
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Thankyou so much P ja Ma'am aur SRK ji aapne mujh se bahut jayada achcha likha hai aur umeed karta hoo ki future main bhi regularly aapki poems read karu Likhte raho !! aur hum read karte rahenge |
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