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by bekarar on January 18, 2009, 12:52:33 PM
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taj hotel ke hamle me shahid hue humaare bhaiyon ke baare me socha aur kuch pantiyan likhi maine.......ye kavita kalpna hai us shahid ke aakhiri soch ki aakhiri saans ki....kaafi samay se post nahi kar paaya tha...


Na jaane kaise log the wo, na jaane kaisa junun tha,
Mar mitne ka zajba tha, aankhon me utra khoon tha,

bas yahi baat zahan me, nirdoshon ko bachana hai,
ya to use mita denge ya fir khud mit jana hai

sar pe baandh kafan khada tha, wo jo kisi ka sindoor tha,
mout ki aankh michouli se, bas chand goliyan door tha,

us sachche hindustaani pe fir dhokhe se hi waar hua
chupe hue kayar dushman ki goliyon ka  sikaar hua,

Ant samay me ek baar to koundha hoga wo chehra,
Dulhan poora singaar kiye, apne maathe ka sehra,

Bahna ki bholi baaten bhi, Bhai ki judai bhi,
Har saans ke saath ubharta hoga, apne bachche ka chehra,

ek aansoo to tapka hoga, budhi mata ki khatir,
ek siski to nikli hogi, janmdata ki khatir,

dukh ka sagar umdta sa, aankhon se tak-rata hoga
is vikal chot ki vedna ko, kaise wo sah jata hoga,

ghabra-kar jab usane apni, palkon ko khola hoga,
jo mukt hue un logon me-se, koi “JAI HIND” bola hoga,

bas thik yahi samay hoga, jab niyati ne kiya hoga nish-chay,
he veer tere antim safar me, “tiranga” tera chola hoga,

aseem shanty chayi hogi, usake chinta-tur chere pe
jaate jaate bhi wo shaheed, “JAI BHARAT MA” bola hoga
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2009, 01:12:26 PM »
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apki kavita kai baar parri.... ek ek shabd tasveer ki tarah ek ek drishye dikhata hua laga... bahoot he ache se apni apni rachna main ek ek vedna ki rachna ki hai...... Ati sunder... jitani tareef ki jaaye utani kam hai..... bahooot bahoooot bahooot khooob Bekarar ji    Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2009, 01:21:41 PM »
bahoot shukriya pooja ji apki housal afzaai ke to hum kayal hain ...kuch aap bhi likh detin to ........kavita poori ho jaati
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2009, 01:34:24 PM »
bahut hi badiya,- very beautifully written...bekararji.....

khakar sine par goli,pahen li watan ki choli,
sada ke liye veer bangaye,wo sipayi watanke.   
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2009, 01:38:08 PM »
taj hotel ke hamle me shahid hue humaare bhaiyon ke baare me socha aur kuch pantiyan likhi maine.......ye kavita kalpna hai us shahid ke aakhiri soch ki aakhiri saans ki....kaafi samay se post nahi kar paaya tha...


Na jaane kaise log the wo, na jaane kaisa junun tha,
Mar mitne ka zajba tha, aankhon me utra khoon tha,

bas yahi baat zahan me, nirdoshon ko bachana hai,
ya to use mita denge ya fir khud mit jana hai

sar pe baandh kafan khada tha, wo jo kisi ka sindoor tha,
mout ki aankh michouli se, bas chand goliyan door tha,

us sachche hindustaani pe fir dhokhe se hi waar hua
chupe hue kayar dushman ki goliyon ka  sikaar hua,

Ant samay me ek baar to koundha hoga wo chehra,
Dulhan poora singaar kiye, apne maathe ka sehra,

Bahna ki bholi baaten bhi, Bhai ki judai bhi,
Har saans ke saath ubharta hoga, apne bachche ka chehra,

ek aansoo to tapka hoga, budhi mata ki khatir,
ek siski to nikli hogi, janmdata ki khatir,

dukh ka sagar umdta sa, aankhon se tak-rata hoga
is vikal chot ki vedna ko, kaise wo sah jata hoga,

ghabra-kar jab usane apni, palkon ko khola hoga,
jo mukt hue un logon me-se, koi “JAI HIND” bola hoga,

bas thik yahi samay hoga, jab niyati ne kiya hoga nish-chay,
he veer tere antim safar me, “tiranga” tera chola hoga,

aseem shanty chayi hogi, usake chinta-tur chere pe
jaate jaate bhi wo shaheed, “JAI BHARAT MA” bola hoga


Bahoth Sabardastlikha hai mere bhai alfaaz nahi hain bayan karne ko salaam apki is Ghazal ko !!

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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2009, 01:57:46 PM »
bahut hi badiya,- very beautifully written...bekararji.....

khakar sine par goli,pahen li watan ki choli,
sada ke liye veer bangaye,wo sipayi watanke.   

shukriya cara......
aapne bhi do lines me bahoot badi baat kah di..
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2009, 01:58:36 PM »
Bahoth Sabardastlikha hai mere bhai alfaaz nahi hain bayan karne ko salaam apki is Ghazal ko !!

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bahoot shukriya qadeer ji aapne meri soch ko samjha aur saraha
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2009, 03:45:31 PM »
kaya likhe meri kalam, her shabd bemaani hai
us sipahi ki lash dekh, rooh hui goom, zisam to phir zismani hai

dekhu uski lash ko, ya ab un zinda lasho ko dekhu
jeevan bhar rona ab jinki zindgaani hai

kuch sikko ko uchal kar, kar gaye farz apna poora
in neta per likhu, jinki rago main ab sirf paani hai

roti ma ko dekh kar, her shabd hua lachaar
Budhe ma-baap ki zindagi mai na bachi koi rawaani hai

ant samye main kaya sochta hoga wo jaane wala
desh per marne wala janta tha, yah jaan to ek din jaani hai


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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2009, 04:12:50 PM »
bahoot hi khoobsoorat likh-kar bhi sab unlikha sa..
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2009, 04:17:14 PM »
janati hu Bekarar ji... kalam likh kar bhi nahi likh pa rahi hai..mafi chahti hu... janati hu jo app parna chahte the uske kahin aass pass ka bhi nahi likh saki

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«Reply #10 on: January 18, 2009, 04:23:24 PM »
jee nahi aap galat samajhin ....waqai aapne bahoot sahi likha hai...mera ishara.....aapke likhne ki shaili ki aur tha......aapki lay ki or tha........jaisa ki aapne likha ..
kya likhe meri kalam.....
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2009, 05:35:13 PM »
kaya likhe meri kalam, her shabd bemaani hai
us sipahi ki lash dekh, rooh hui goom, zisam to phir zismani hai

dekhu uski lash ko, ya ab un zinda lasho ko dekhu
jeevan bhar rona ab jinki zindgaani hai

kuch sikko ko uchal kar, kar gaye farz apna poora
in neta per likhu, jinki rago main ab sirf paani hai

roti ma ko dekh kar, her shabd hua lachaar
Budhe ma-baap ki zindagi mai na bachi koi rawaani hai

ant samye main kaya sochta hoga wo jaane wala
desh per marne wala janta tha, yah jaan to ek din jaani hai




Bahoth Hi saadgi se Ahesaas ko Bayan Kiya Hai Apne Daad qubool karen !! Pooja Ji !!

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«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2009, 05:37:23 PM »
shukaria Qadeer ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2009, 10:36:42 PM »
Nice presentation Bekarar Ji
Aur Pooja ji ki hazir jawaabi ka kya kahna
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«Reply #14 on: January 23, 2009, 08:28:24 PM »
Bohat Achche Bekaraar Bhai,.
And Nice One Pooja Didi,.
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