BHARAT

by NETRAPAL on August 08, 2007, 02:17:51 PM
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aaj tak desh ke booraiyo ke likha tha aaj kuch badal kar likh raha hoo
is desh is dhartee ke gorav ko dikhane kee koshish kee hai kitna kamyab hoo aap batayenge..

tamanna hai dekhne ki sare jaha ko
dekhni ho khubsoorat fijao ko mahakte huye
chahat ho dil me kisee haseen khwab ke dilme gar
ek bar jhak kar hee dekh lo mere hindustaan ko

hamne banya tha bharat khalata hai mahan ye
samete sabhi dharmo ko ek vishal samandar hai ye
sone kee chidiya thee kabi bharta meraa bhee
aaj bhee chamakta hia duniya me sartaj bankar
jo dekhna ho prem to deklo ek bar mere TAJ ko

poojte hai nadiyo ko bhee sirf bharat me
gay ko bhee maa kahate hai hindustanee
poojee jatee hai naree bhee devi bankar
patthar kee ahiliya ko bhee poojte hai hindustanee

gulamee kee dar se nikal kar kar badhyae hai aaj kadam
ho gar guma dushman ko bhee to dhartee use dikha sakte hai ham
ajadee nahi mile thee bheek me hame
kitne hoye the kurbaan wo dard abhi tak nahi boole hai ham

foolo se sajta hai har najara yaha
kahi registaan kee bahar hai
kahi barfilee hawao ka himalay hai yaha

jo ho tamanna dekhne kee rishto ke bandan
kaise lagaate hai gairo ko bhee seene se, to
ek bar.............................................. .........

netra....





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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2007, 07:08:03 PM »
Netrapal Ji, I really appreciate your hardwork.

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Things which you have mentioned in poem are nice & I hope in future you will come with more nice & improved poems.
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2007, 12:45:40 PM »
koshish karunga sir,

thanks for this comments

netra......
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