desh kee mitti

by Nira on August 09, 2008, 03:47:30 AM
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desh kee mitti

desh kee mittee aisee chootee,
bhaagy mujhe laaya pardesh
ghar rishton se badheen dooriyaan,
chootaa mel-jol, sandesh

baaba ,maan, aur bahan kee,
saaree khushiyon kee khaatir
saat samundar paar basaaya,
dhan kee chaahat ne aakhir

pyaaree bahna kee shaadee kar,
oonche ghar pahunchana hai
pariyon see sundar dulhan ko,
dolee men baithaana hai

lekar ye satrangee sapne,
lagaa kamaane main paise
pataa chalaa n raat-dinon ka,
kayi varsh gujre kaise

dhan-daulat to mili bahut see,
saath mili par aisee bhookh
jismen rishte bhaavnaon kee,
lahraatee bagiya gai sookh

maam jee-baba yaad n aaye,
aatee raheen diwaali-holi
n hee aakar main shaadee men,
utha sakaa bahna kee dolee

dil ke saare zazbaton ko,
halaaton ke kiye havaale
door desh men bas jaane se,
huye paraye ham ghar waale

vriddh pita beemaar pade hain,
uska beta paas nahin,
maan ke kanp te haath men chitthee,
par aane kee baat nahin hai

kaun nahin khinchta aayega,
maan-baba kee yaadon se
bhala mukar sakta hai koi,
dhartee maan ke vaadon se

lekin varshon kee mehnat ka,
yahaan khadaa hai kaarobaar
kisko ise havale kar den,
socha maine barambaar

isee kashmkash men uljhee hai,
mere jeevan kee gadee
shaayad rishton ke bare men,
samajh n paya raha anadee

shakl dekhne ko baba kee,
ye dil tarsa karta hai
maan ke haath kee rotee khaane,
ye dil tadpa karta hai

saaree khushiyan hone par bhi,
kamee desh kee khaltee hai
us mitti men vaapas aane,
ichcha sadaa machaltee hai

Nira
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2008, 06:16:59 AM »
nira ji,behad sashakt rachna se do-char karva diya aapne...bahoot hi sadgi se , behtreen tareeke se aapne ek ek shabd piroya hai....
bahoot achcha likha hai aapne. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2008, 04:32:09 AM »
Wonderful..... Superb... Nira didi  Applause  Applause

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baaba ,maan, aur bahan kee,
saaree khushiyon kee khaatir
saat samundar paar basaaya,
dhan kee chaahat ne aakhir

pyaaree bahna kee shaadee kar,
oonche ghar pahunchana hai
pariyon see sundar dulhan ko,
dolee men baithaana hai

Pardes main rehne wale behno aur bhayion k liye bahut log apna desh
chod k pardes chale jaate hai. Apno se dhur ... akele main...
Bahut accha dil se aapne likha hai didi. [/b]
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«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2009, 02:23:15 AM »
nira ji,behad sashakt rachna se do-char karva diya aapne...bahoot hi sadgi se , behtreen tareeke se aapne ek ek shabd piroya hai....
bahoot achcha likha hai aapne. Applause Applause Applause

bekarar ji
sorry aapki shukrguzaar hoon aapne rachna padhi sahrayi , mera thanks karna reh gaya, bahut dino baad aayi so poems check kar rahi thi.
thank u so much.
nira
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«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2009, 02:25:06 AM »
Wonderful..... Superb... Nira didi  Applause  Applause

Pardes main rehne wale behno aur bhayion k liye bahut log apna desh
chod k pardes chale jaate hai. Apno se dhur ... akele main...
Bahut accha dil se aapne likha hai didi.



roja sis
thanks a lot for understanding the feeling of poeple who are away from homeland. sorry for the late reply.
nira
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2009, 04:49:51 AM »
Bahot hi khoob likha hai aapne Nira ji,behad umda aur kavita ko bahot achi bhaavnaon se savara hai aapne, awesome poem

kaash ji
desh se bahar rahne walono ki yeh hi dasha hoti hai
aapko kavita pasand aayi dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2009, 04:59:34 AM »
wow too good Nira ji!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2009, 05:05:02 AM »
wow too good Nira ji!!

pooja ji shukriya aapko pasand aayi
rachna
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2009, 05:07:02 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Niraji..

Dil Ko Chuu Jaane Wale Jazbaat Pesh Kiye Hai Aapne..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2009, 10:59:10 AM »
Wah Nira Didi.. Kya Jazzbaat Likhe Hain.. desh se Door Rahene Wale Deshwaasiyon ke Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai aapne..!! Kahin Na Kahin is Rachna Me Aapka Dard Bhi Nazar aaya.. Shayad is Dard Ko Mehsoos Kiya hai aapne..!! Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai..Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2009, 12:39:13 PM »
wow too good Nira ji!!

pooja ji

hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya.
nira
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2009, 12:41:47 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Niraji..

Dil Ko Chuu Jaane Wale Jazbaat Pesh Kiye Hai Aapne..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


khwaish ji

aapne mere jazbaaton ko samajha aor saraya
dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon
nira
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2009, 12:45:07 PM »
Wah Nira Didi.. Kya Jazzbaat Likhe Hain.. desh se Door Rahene Wale Deshwaasiyon ke Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai aapne..!! Kahin Na Kahin is Rachna Me Aapka Dard Bhi Nazar aaya.. Shayad is Dard Ko Mehsoos Kiya hai aapne..!! Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai..Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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vicky
sach kaha hai hum bhi toh door desh baithe hain
aor halaat ke karan nahi wapas aa pate, vo dard toh dil mein rahta hai
tumne bahut ache lafazon mein saraya hain meri rachna ko
bahut bahut shukriya.
nira didi
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«Reply #13 on: August 24, 2011, 06:19:26 AM »
jeevan ek samasya hai jo kat jaye jald hee
math socho, niklo ab
baba ke paas aavo
maa ki pyaar bhari muskaan dekho
khush hokar shaadi kar lo
abh bhi waqt hai
der na kiya karo
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