DHAMAKAA (DELHI)

by NETRAPAL on September 19, 2008, 06:43:43 AM
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Hote hai dhamake bamboo ke
Hamne ghabraana chod diya
Bichtee hai lashe kai magar,
Hamne ab rona chod diya…….

Kon royega lasho pe ab
Yaha Dafan hajaro hote hai
Bichtee hai lashe kai magar
ab kafan hee saste bikte hai…

Logo kee hotee durgatee
Lasho pe chaltee rajneetee
Kutto se ladte hukmaraan
Hamne sab sahanaa seekh liyaa
Rote the kal ham mayyat pe
Arthee pe hansna seekh liya
Hote hai dhamake………….

kursee pe baithe ye mhaana
bhaarat maa ke ye vardaan
kabhee the ye bhee gairatmand
begairat hona seekh liya
nakshe kadma pe unke hee
hamne bhee chalnaa seekh liya
hote hai dhamake bambo ke....

muskate hai we besharmee se
hamne bhee rona chod diya
hote hai dhamake bambo ke
hamne ghabrane chod diya..



NETRA...
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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2008, 06:50:29 AM »
 Applause Applause
bahoot hi khoob likha hai netra ji aapne...aaj ke haalaton par ek gambheer aur theekhi nazar aapki..
rote the kal hum maiyat pe,
arthee pe hansna seekh liya

chot si pahunchati hai ye baat kaash koi is dard ko samajh paaye
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2008, 07:00:16 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob... Netra Applause

Ek dhamaaka pal bhar mein kitni hi zindagiyon ko khatam kar deta hai, kuch usi pal khatam ho jaati hai toh kuch umar bhar uss dhamaake ke pal ke diye hue dard ko jhelne ke liye ek zinda laash bann ke reh jaati hai..


Waise,

Ghabarahat toh ab bhi hoti hai,
Par humne ab jatlaana chhodh diya..
Dil aise mein ab bhi dukhta hai magar,
Aansu ne aankh mein aana chhodh diya...
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2008, 07:33:25 AM »
Netra

Tumhare likhe kalam itne ache hote hain...itne ache hote hain ki dil chahta hai ek baar kabhi mauka mile to tumse zaroor miloon !

Bahut he sachai se tum likhte ho...ek krantikari ki tarah !

Keep going Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause

@Mahiya
Nice reply Applause
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2008, 07:40:01 AM »
netra ji bilkul sahi kaha aapne
dhamaako mei logo ki jaan to jaati hai par koi fark nahi
padta in leaders ko wo to apni rajnitiyon mei hi vyast rehte hain
aur unhe to ek dusre par ungli uthane ka mauka aur mil jaata hai
par ek begunaah hi apni jaan gawata hai


dil dukhta aaj bhi hai
kyu ki ham gulaam aaj bhi hain

pehle hukumat thi goro ki yahaan
par ab apno k shikaar ham aaj bhi hain

pehle to sare aam gore pehchane jaate the
desh k dushman jaane jaate the

par ab apne hi kar rahe atyaachar hain
to kaise kahei ham k ham aazaad hain

netaayon k sharyantra hain anek yahaa
apne hi sab lete loot yahaan

begunaaho ka khoon hi behta hardam hai
aur netaaon k loktantra k sirf bhaashan hain

sharam aati hai mujhko ye kehne mei
k ham swatantra desh ki waasi hain

lagta hai aisa jaise mujhko
sab atyachaar ko sehne mei hi ab raazi hain    tearyeyed
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2008, 11:25:47 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on September 19, 2008, 06:50:29 AM
Applause Applause
bahoot hi khoob likha hai netra ji aapne...aaj ke haalaton par ek gambheer aur theekhi nazar aapki..
rote the kal hum maiyat pe,
arthee pe hansna seekh liya

chot si pahunchati hai ye baat kaash koi is dard ko samajh paaye

thanks sir, bas haalaat aise hai kee baya karte bhee dard hota hai

netra..
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2008, 11:27:21 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on September 19, 2008, 07:00:16 AM
Bahut bahut khoob... Netra Applause

Ek dhamaaka pal bhar mein kitni hi zindagiyon ko khatam kar deta hai, kuch usi pal khatam ho jaati hai toh kuch umar bhar uss dhamaake ke pal ke diye hue dard ko jhelne ke liye ek zinda laash bann ke reh jaati hai..


Waise,

Ghabarahat toh ab bhi hoti hai,
Par humne ab jatlaana chhodh diya..
Dil aise mein ab bhi dukhta hai magar,
Aansu ne aankh mein aana chhodh diya...

thanks mahiya ji achaa likha hai aapne bhe....

netra...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2008, 11:31:28 AM »
Quote from: Rajbir on September 19, 2008, 07:33:25 AM
Netra

Tumhare likhe kalam itne ache hote hain...itne ache hote hain ki dil chahta hai ek baar kabhi mauka mile to tumse zaroor miloon !

Bahut he sachai se tum likhte ho...ek krantikari ki tarah !

Keep going Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause

@Mahiya
Nice reply Applause

thanks sir,

aap padhte hai mujhe yahee bahoot hai mere liye or jo mai chahtaa hoo use aap bhee mahsoos karte hai yahee mai chahtaa hoo...

netra..
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2008, 11:33:41 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on September 19, 2008, 07:40:01 AM
netra ji bilkul sahi kaha aapne
dhamaako mei logo ki jaan to jaati hai par koi fark nahi
padta in leaders ko wo to apni rajnitiyon mei hi vyast rehte hain
aur unhe to ek dusre par ungli uthane ka mauka aur mil jaata hai
par ek begunaah hi apni jaan gawata hai


dil dukhta aaj bhi hai
kyu ki ham gulaam aaj bhi hain

pehle hukumat thi goro ki yahaan
par ab apno k shikaar ham aaj bhi hain

pehle to sare aam gore pehchane jaate the
desh k dushman jaane jaate the

par ab apne hi kar rahe atyaachar hain
to kaise kahei ham k ham aazaad hain

netaayon k sharyantra hain anek yahaa
apne hi sab lete loot yahaan

begunaaho ka khoon hi behta hardam hai
aur netaaon k loktantra k sirf bhaashan hain

sharam aati hai mujhko ye kehne mei
k ham swatantra desh ki waasi hain

lagta hai aisa jaise mujhko
sab atyachaar ko sehne mei hi ab raazi hain    tearyeyed

bahwnaa ji,

aapne mere dil kee baat kah dee 60 salo kee ajaadee ke baad aaj bhee kya ham apne aapko aajaad mahsoos karte hai?

netra..
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«Reply #9 on: September 20, 2008, 02:39:37 AM »
Quote from: NETRAPAL on September 19, 2008, 06:43:43 AM
Hote hai dhamake bamboo ke
Hamne ghabraana chod diya
Bichtee hai lashe kai magar,
Hamne ab rona chod diya…….

Kon royega lasho pe ab
Yaha Dafan hajaro hote hai
Bichtee hai lashe kai magar
kafan yaha  ab, saste hai…

Logo kee hotee durgatee
Lasho pe chaltee rajneetee
Kutto se ladte hukmaraan
Hamne sab sahanaa seekh liyaa
Rote the kal ham mayyat pe
Arthee pe hansna seekh liya
Hote hai dhamake………….

Maha murkh ye dahshatgardee
Bina  akal ke ye bedardee
Samjhe the jise ye Bhaghat Singh
Ye desh hai gandhee babaa ka,
Unke har tamache par, hamne
Dusra gaal badhaan seekh liya..
Hote hai dhamako bamboo ke
Hamne ghabraana chod diya……



NETRA...

wah netra bhaijaan bahut accha bayan kiya hai aapne halat ko..
dua yahi hai k dunia mein aman shanti rahe.
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #10 on: September 20, 2008, 07:17:34 AM »
noder, bahoot bahoot shukriyaa jawaab ke liye

netra...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #11 on: September 21, 2008, 06:28:57 AM »
log to darte hai gairo se
apno ne hame he maaraa hai
seene se lagate the jinko
unse hee khanjar khyaa hai
dekho, kaise hai badkismat
jakham peeth pe khyaa hai
imaan dharm ke thekedaro ne
dharam ko hee aaj duboya hai..

netra...
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«Reply #12 on: September 21, 2008, 06:58:44 AM »
 Applause Applause Bohat khoob likha hai aapne Netra ji...
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«Reply #13 on: September 22, 2008, 07:09:14 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on September 21, 2008, 06:58:44 AM
Applause Applause Bohat khoob likha hai aapne Netra ji...

thanks hony jee

netra...
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«Reply #14 on: September 24, 2008, 01:46:40 PM »
Quote from: NETRAPAL on September 19, 2008, 06:43:43 AM
Hote hai dhamake bamboo ke
Hamne ghabraana chod diya
Bichtee hai lashe kai magar,
Hamne ab rona chod diya…….

Kon royega lasho pe ab
Yaha Dafan hajaro hote hai
Bichtee hai lashe kai magar
ab kafan hee saste bikte hai…

Logo kee hotee durgatee
Lasho pe chaltee rajneetee
Kutto se ladte hukmaraan
Hamne sab sahanaa seekh liyaa
Rote the kal ham mayyat pe
Arthee pe hansna seekh liya
Hote hai dhamake………….

kursee pe baithe ye mhaana
bhaarat maa ke ye vardaan
kabhee the ye bhee gairatmand
begairat hona seekh liya
nakshe kadma pe unke hee
hamne bhee chalnaa seekh liya
hote hai dhamake bambo ke....

muskate hai we besharmee se
hamne bhee rona chod diya
hote hai dhamake bambo ke
hamne ghabrane chod diya..



NETRA...

Applause Applause Applause Bohot khoob Netra Ji...
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