Dushman hai dwaar par hamaarey!!

by abdbundeli on December 03, 2008, 08:09:20 PM
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Deykhou aankheyn khol:
Chupkey sey dushman ghush aaye naa!
Jeewan hai anmol:
Sankat mein fir sey parh jaaye naa!

Kaayar hai shaitaan:
Dhokaa deynaa us kaa dharm hai!
Talwaareyn lo taan:
Socho mat, yahee weer-karm hai!

Baalak, shishu naadaan,
Mahilaayen-braddh hain nishaaney!
Chaahtaa hai bas jaan
Leynaa, zehaad key bahaaney!!
 
Kyaa hain wey insaan:
Jinkaa haiwaaniyat usool ho?
Koun hai ab anjaan,
Jaantaa naheen ho jo mool ko?

Ho jaaou hushiyaar!
Dushman hai dwaar par hamaarey!!
Ho jaaou taiyaar!
Dushman hai dwaar par hamaarey!!
 

               - Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'    

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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2008, 08:12:48 PM »
 Applause Applause

Very nice Abd ji...
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2008, 08:14:29 PM »
Waah Waah... Bahut sahi kaha aapne.. Applause Applause Applause

Aapki kalam sirf likhti hi nahin Abd ji.. Yeh bolti bhi hai.. Aapke likhe ashaar kisi goonj se kam nahin!!

Out-Standing Work...  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2008, 08:30:27 PM »
bahoot khoob abd ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 03, 2008, 08:31:32 PM »
Applause Applause

Very nice Abd ji...
Kotishah dhanyawaad honeyrose ji!
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2008, 08:36:03 PM »
Waah Waah... Bahut sahi kaha aapne.. Applause Applause Applause

Aapki kalam sirf likhti hi nahin Abd ji.. Yeh bolti bhi hai.. Aapke likhe ashaar kisi goonj se kam nahin!!
Out-Standing Work...  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Mahiya ji, bas aapkee krupaa hai! kotishah dhanyawaad!
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2008, 08:38:34 PM »
bahoot khoob abd ji
Shukriyah bekarar ji! Nazar-e-inaayat banaaye rakhiyegaa!
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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2008, 07:30:05 PM »
very nice  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2008, 07:46:24 PM »
very nice  Clapping Smiley
Thanks sabreen ji!
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2008, 08:38:38 PM »
Bahut Khoob ABD Ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2008, 08:57:48 AM »
Bahut Khoob ABD Ji
Thanks a lot Rajesh Harish ji!
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