Fir ek baar.......:Shairy-E-Watan

NETRAPAL

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Jaipur me dhamako ko dehk har aisa laga kee ham napunsak ban gaye ham kuch nahi kar skate kayar taa hamare bheetar ghar kar gayee..........

Lo lag gaya kalank manvata par fir ek bar
Jhoom uthe hai jalim kamyabee pe apnee fir ek bar
Fir rachee koi sajis dushmane ne yaha
Ham fir hogyae hai lachar, dayneey, kaayar se.
Fir ek baar..

ho gayee hai jamee laal lahoo se
Ghayal bhee karhate hai fir ghare jkhmo se
Tadfate hai dared-dil se apnaa khone wale
Roo uthi hai koi maa mayat pe bete kee fir ek baar

Har saal jashane-ajaadee ham manate hai
Bamo ke dhamake hame naponskata ka ahsaas karate hai
Na kar paye the ham kal bhee kuch unka
Lo dekh lo napunsak bangaye ham, fir ek baar

Hotee thee dharte lal kuhne se pahale bhee
Marate the bahadur watane-ajaadi pe tab
marte hai ab lakho anjaan dushmano se roj
Lo jhuk gaye ham sharm se fir ek baar..

Netra…


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Shikha12

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Re: Fir ek baar.......

«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2008, 06:07:09 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob... Netra.. Applause

Bilcul sahi kaha hai aapne.. I appreciate..


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Re: Fir ek baar.......

«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2008, 06:45:05 AM »

bahut bahut khoob netraji..
sachaiyon se bharpoor likha hai aapne..bahut ache..


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Rajbir

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Re: Fir ek baar.......

«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2008, 07:24:25 AM »

Netra

Full of facts ! Applause


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NETRAPAL

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Re: Fir ek baar.......

«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2008, 11:52:51 AM »

thanks for reply rajbir jee, mahiya jee, khwaish ji,

kaash is dard ko koi samj paata.....

sab mashgool hogaye hai vapas
sama bandh gaya hai waise hee
jo gamgeen the dekh ke haadsaa
wo muskarate hai jaise kuch hooa hee nahi..

netra....


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Roja

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Re: Fir ek baar.......

«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2008, 02:41:53 PM »

Very true and well expressed lines.

Katil nigahein ghoom rahi watan ke kone kone mein
Be-maut jaan le chalo kafan ke kone kone mein
Aatangwadi raundh rahe hai jaipur ki ahele zindagi
Aur jehaad ka nara de rahe sadan ke kone kone mein


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NETRAPAL

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Re: Fir ek baar.......

«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2008, 04:59:46 AM »

Quote from: Roja on May 15, 2008, 02:41:53 PM

bahoot khoob roja ji

netra...


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Talat

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Re: Fir ek baar.......

«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2008, 01:09:00 PM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on May 15, 2008, 04:45:27 AM

Jaipur me dhamako ko dehk har aisa laga kee ham napunsak ban gaye ham kuch nahi kar skate kayar taa hamare bheetar ghar kar gayee..........

Lo fir lag gaya kalank manvata par fir ek bar
Jhoom uthe hai jalim apnee kamyabee par fir ek bar
Fir rachee koi sajis dushmane ne yaha
Ham fir hogyae hai lachar, dayneey, kaayar se.
Fir ek baar..

ho gayee hai jamee laal lahoo se
Ghayal bhee karhate hai fir ghare jkhmo se
Tadfate hai dared-dil se apnaa khone wale
Roo uthi hai koi maa mayat pe bete kee fir ek baar

Har saal jashane-ajaadee ham manate hai
Bamo ke dhamake hame naponskata ka ahsaas karate hai
Na kar paye the ham kal bhee kuch unka
Lo dekh lo napunsak bangaye ham, fir ek baar

Hotee thee dharte lal kuhne se pahale bhee
Marate the bahadur watane-ajaadi pe tab
marte hai ab lakho anjaan dushmano se roj
Lo jhuk gaye ham sharm se fir ek baar..

Ansoo nhai hai rona chahta hoo
Juba nahi khultee, mai bolna chataa hoo
Dil kee bat chand lafjo se kahna chata hoo
Lo mar gayee insaaniyat yahaa kee
Fir ke baar……..

Netra…

Bohot achchi tarah aapne un jazbaat ko express kiya hai Netra Ji. Sach..taareef bhi kaise karun ki ye sach itna ghinauna hai.


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