FOJI EK KARHAA RAHAA HAI

by NETRAPAL on May 07, 2009, 10:46:21 AM
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Chataa hoo prnaam karoo mai
Maat pita ko naman karoo mai
Bandhoo sakhaa sab bhayee mere
Karlo darshan ab antim mere

Meree sanss nikal jayegee
Chahat meree rah jayegee
Abhee to mai jawaa hooaa  tha
Kisee pyaree kee aas banaa tha
Wo kaise fir jee payegee
Vidhwaa ab wo ban jayegee

Maat meree  ro mat ab too
Chaatee karle pakee ab too
Mai to bas ab challaa jaaoongaa
Aanchal soonaa kar jaaoongaa


Baapoo meraa kahaa gyaa hai
Farj apnaa kyaa bhool gayaa hai
Wo to ro bhee nahi payegaa
Dheeraj kaise rakh payegaa
Kos rahaa kismat ko apnee wo
Kandhaa degaa mujhko ab wo

Chotee bahnaa bilakh rahee hai
Sudh apnee wo bhool rahee hai
Kaise doo ab iskaa mai saath
Karegee kisaa ab wo roshan haath

Ghayal sipahee karaahaataa hai
Samay antim ab, uskaa ayaa hai
Ajab muskaam chehre pe chaayee
Golee seene pe  usne hai khayee

chup kyoo hai dhartee maa ab too
god me lele mujhko bas ab too
kuch pal kee dree hai bakee
kuch ansloo maa ke hai bakee
sanse bas ab band hotee hai
ankhe ab jaldee mundetee hai
agnee kund tyaar pdaa hai
fojee ek karhaa  rahaa hai……..

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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2009, 08:20:11 PM »
Antarman ko hila gayi aapki ye kavita.....Bharat maa ke un laakhon sapooton ko salam jo apni jaan dete hain  taaki hum jaise log sukoon se reh saken  icon_salut icon_salut

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Bohot Khoob Netra Ji
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2009, 08:45:54 PM »
Netra,

As always, your this creation is again a superb creation. Applause

Again a revolutionary poet at his best Applause

Bahut he ache vichaar hain aap ke ! Mujhe aap ki poetry padhna bahut acha lagta hai.

Keep it up ! We need poets like you ! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2009, 09:49:28 PM »
Netra ji Kavita padate waqat aise laga jaise ankhon ke samne yah ho raha hai... dil zor se dhadak raha tha ya dhadkna bhool gaya.. mujhe nahi pata chala... magar jab kavita khatam hui deemag kuch palo ke liye shunye main chala gaya..aor chah kar bhi ro nahi saka.. itani vedna...ek ek shabd main..

Hamesha ki tarah app ne bahoot bahoot acha likha hai... ki her ek bahoot oar acha shabd bahoot kam lag raha hai!!

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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 10:51:11 PM »
bahut bahut behtrin....sb kuch aankho k samne jeevant ho utha.
bahut umda Netra ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2009, 09:16:21 AM »
thanks clemira ji, rajbir ji, pooja ji, poppoetry

thanks for reply

Netra....
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2009, 10:17:23 AM »
Bhoot hi khooob likha hai.. hamesha ki tarah.. Yea kavita bhi saraniya hai..

Too Gud Netrapal ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2009, 02:25:26 PM »
thanks sophi ji....

netra...
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2009, 05:21:40 PM »

kon suntaa hai us pukar ko
foji kee ghaayal aawaaj ko
ham to befikr se sojate hai

chand boond khoone kee gire
to asptaal ham pahuch jate hai
wo hai kee khoon bhakar bhee
muskaraate hai................

aaj ek fojee kharaayaa hai
dard dil kaa usne bataayaa hai
kise fursat hai uske dard kee
apne hee dard me har sakh
ko dube hooe payaa hai...

Netra...

seema pe jab koi foji ghayal hojtaa hai aur use ye mahasoos ho kee wo ab shaydad hee bache to wo kyaa sochtaa hai ise mane apnee pahalee rachnaa se darshaane kee koshis kee hai........
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2009, 05:24:09 PM »
Hands off... Netra ji... bahut accha likha hai aapne.  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2009, 05:27:33 PM »
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kon suntaa hai us pukar ko
foji kee ghaayal aawaaj ko
ham to befikr se sojate hai

chand boond khoone kee gire
to asptaal ham pahuch jate hai
wo hai kee khoon bhakar bhee
muskaraate hai........


Satya vachan...... Jaisa Foji k zindagi mein hota hai sab ke sab aapne yahan
apne kalam se dikha diya  sad7

Bahut acche Netra ji... Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2009, 05:32:16 PM »
Good to see a reply from a real fauji !

Our dear Roja Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 13, 2009, 05:48:02 PM »
thanks roja ji.. (real foji)

thanks rajbir ji...

Netra..
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«Reply #13 on: May 13, 2009, 05:53:04 PM »
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Wah wah bohat khoob Netra ji,,,
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2009, 06:09:48 PM »
Good to see a reply from a real fauji !

Our dear Roja Applause

Thanks for the respect dear Raj ji
Netra ji ne bahut sahi likha and I feel very much honoured  icon_salut ... ...


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