***haadson ka jahaan***

by kaushikbhawna008 on September 03, 2008, 06:42:48 AM
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haadson ka jahaan

kahi par bhukmari to kahi pe parti.yaan
yahi hai dosto haadson ka jahaan

kahin andher sunsaan si hain sadke
to kahi pe roshni se chamchamati si manzilein

kahin saj rahi hai dharti dulhan ki tarah
to kahin rang khoon ka hai ispe sajaa

yahi hai dosto haadson ka jahaan

kahin boond paani ko tarasta hai bachaa
to kahin paani ne hi sabkuch tabaah hai kiya

kahin jashn-o-diwali manate hain log
to kahin shok mein dube hain ghar

yahi hai dosto haadson ka jahaan

kahin girte ko aur girate hain log
to kahin sambhalna khud pad raha hain yaha

kisi k ghar khajaane se hain bhare
to kahin koi 2 paise ko taras raha hai yahaan

yahi hai dosto haadson ka jahaan

nojavaan giraft hain aaj sharaab k janjaal mei
paise aur andher nagri k moh-maal mei

bech apne sanskaaron ko khush hain ho rahe
ve nahi jaante aaj wo kya hain kho rahe

dheere dheere khatm hai bhaichara ho raha
har koi yahaan aham hai kar raha

kar lo band aaj bhi is vyapaar ko
nahi to kho doge ek din apne aapko

sach hai yahi jaan lo ab ye tum
dharti maa hi hai sab kuch bachaa lo iski aan ko

karo kuch aise karam k lute na ye fir kabhi
iski aanchal mei na pade fir khoon k daag kabhi

har taraf haryaali aur shaanti chain ho
na koi fir keh sake koi bhi yaha

yahi hai haadson ka jahaan
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2008, 07:08:56 AM »
dil ke chalo ko yu na dikhaya kar
jis tarah ho khud ko samjaya kar
yeh jhooti duniya cheen legi tujse kalam teri
sach bol par itna bhi na bola kar

                                      -sg-
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2008, 07:13:50 AM »
saji ji ham aapke likhe ko ab kya samjhe
ek salaah ya mahaz chand alfaaz

vaise post padhne k liye shukriya
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baadal102
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2008, 02:46:13 PM »
bahut hi khoob bahut hi umda
wah ji bhawna ji



Baadal
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honeyrose
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2008, 03:10:08 PM »
 Applause Applause Khoob likha hai bhawana sis..
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2008, 03:15:10 PM »
Bohot khoob Bhawna....nice lines Sajid Ji
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2008, 03:46:25 AM »
thanks mira yeh bhavna thodi emotional hain mere likhe sher ko personally le liya hain shayed usne thoda samjhaye use
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2008, 07:39:55 AM »
shukriya baadal ji
honey ji and celmira ji

sajid ji ye sahi hai ki ham thode emotionally hain magar aapne alfaaz hi kuch aise likhe ki ham aapse puch hi bethe ki ye mahaz chand likhe alfaaz hi hain ya koi salaah (advice) tongue3
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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2008, 08:17:01 AM »
good work bhawna...
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2008, 09:17:21 AM »
thnk u bekarar ji
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Shikha12
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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2008, 09:27:14 AM »
Good Work Bhawna... Applause
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2008, 09:31:11 AM »
shukriya mahiya ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: November 13, 2008, 11:56:39 PM »
bahoot khoob bhawna!!
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #13 on: November 18, 2008, 06:42:00 AM »
thnk u pooja ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: November 18, 2008, 11:43:58 PM »
nice lines SG
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