KASHMEER

by NETRAPAL on July 15, 2008, 12:03:15 PM
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #15 on: July 16, 2008, 09:57:35 AM »
NETRAPAL Ji,
Aap kaa dard samajh saktaa hoon:
Naheen hai aisee kaheen aazaadee,
Jaisee is mulk mein milee hai hamain!!
Chaahtey hain jo sirf barbaadee:
Kaisey insaan hain, khudaa jaaney?
Jo apney ghar ko khud jalaatey hain:
Woh ho chukey hain zulm key aadee!
                     - abd bundeli  


bahoot khoob likha hai aapne sir

hota dard to dard hee ye
mera hai n tumharaa hai
rote hai tadaf kar aaj sabhee
is dard se naataa hamaraa hai
nahi hai koi begaanaa yaha
maano to sab apne hai
kahe jor se mil kar ham
ye hindustaa hamaaraa hai...

netra....
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syednaami
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«Reply #16 on: July 16, 2008, 03:58:39 PM »
mai  bhee aapke ray se ittefaaq rakhtaa hoo sir jee aapne bilkul sahee farmayaa....

netra...

Shukriya Netra Saahib,,, aap ne ittifaaq kya buhat achha laga...
Bas hamen har vishay par har pahlu se dekhna aur sochna hoga...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #17 on: July 22, 2008, 04:16:48 AM »
Nahi samaj payaa koi
sab madhoshi me ghoomte hai
tark dene wale bahoot hai yaha
magar bate sirf majahab ke karte hai

chal diye wo to kante bicha kar yaha
ham hai kee kanto kee chubhan ko sahte hai
nahi karta kaoi jantan hatane ka kante
sab ek dusra ke muah ko dekhte hai

netra...
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #18 on: July 23, 2008, 07:55:00 AM »
NETRAPAL JI,

'Jaantaa hai wahee US dard ko, jisey WAH ho!
 Doosroun ko sahee andaaz naheen hotaa hai !!
 Baap ho qatl, yaa ki maan, ki houn bahin-bhaayee:
 Jaan paataa hai wahee, jo ki, UNHAIN khotaa hai!

 Taqaatuli ka dour yah, na huaa khatm agar;
 Beygunaahoun ka khoon bahtaa rahaa gar youn hee;
 Aur ham doosroun key feir mein rahey parhtey;
 To samajh leejiye barbaadee hi barbaadee hai!
 Apnaa dushman hai koyi aur: jaantey hain  ham;
 Fir bhi ham baarhaa us key shiqaar bantey hain!
 Chand tukrhoun key liye zar key, bikeyngey kab tak?
 Ham ney yah kaisee khaak kufra-e-nou ki laadee hai?'

                            - abd bundeli

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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #19 on: July 23, 2008, 10:18:40 AM »
NETRAPAL JI,

'Jaantaa hai wahee US dard ko, jisey WAH ho!
 Doosroun ko sahee andaaz naheen hotaa hai !!
 Baap ho qatl, yaa ki maan, ki houn bahin-bhaayee:
 Jaan paataa hai wahee, jo ki, UNHAIN khotaa hai!

 Taqaatuli ka dour yah, na huaa khatm agar;
 Beygunaahoun ka khoon bahtaa rahaa gar youn hee;
 Aur ham doosroun key feir mein rahey parhtey;
 To samajh leejiye barbaadee hi barbaadee hai!
 Apnaa dushman hai koyi aur: jaantey hain  ham;
 Fir bhi ham baarhaa us key shiqaar bantey hain!
 Chand tukrhoun key liye zar key, bikeyngey kab tak?
 Ham ney yah kaisee khaak kufra-e-nou ki laadee hai?'

                            - abd bundeli



bilkul sahee farmyaa hai aapne aapse pooree tarah sahmat hoo...

netra....
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #20 on: July 23, 2008, 10:30:26 AM »
dashtgrdee ke saye me
n bhayee na koi maa hotee hai
wo sailaab hai ek junoon ka
bas barbaadee hee hotee hai

dard hota jaltaa hai jism bhee
dil bhee rotaa hai ansoo khoon ke
jab fanaa koi bhee maa hotee hai
n hindu n muslim kee
wo maa to bas ye sarmee hotee hai..

netra...

netra...


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abdbundeli
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«Reply #21 on: July 23, 2008, 12:06:28 PM »
NETRAPAL Ji,
'Ham kahain kisko buraa, aur bhalaa kisko kahain?
 Ham sabhi ham hain, doosraa yahaan naheen koyee!
 Ham to ham hain, to rahain ham hee baraabar har roz!
 Taqaatulee hai hameen mein! sahey kaheen koyee?'

                             - abd bundeli
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syednaami
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«Reply #22 on: July 24, 2008, 07:14:17 AM »
Jannat ka hai nazaara,,
Na tera na mera kashmir hamara,,

Inko mila nahin sukoon,,
Jab se hua batvaara,,

Tukdon men kat gaya,,
Sab dekhte rahe nazaara,,


Angrez ki saazish ne,,
Saara naqsha tha bigada,,

Desh aaj bhi ladte hain,,
Ana ka masaala hai saara,,

Piste hain log wahan ke aaj tak,,
Mahroom raha khushiyon se Kashmir bechara,,

Mazloom hain masoom hain,,
Par deta nahin koi sahaara,,

Do deshon ke darmiyaan,,
Pista rahega Kashmir hamara..

Jannat ka hai nazaara,,
Na tera na mera kashmir hamara..


|Syed Naami|
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #23 on: July 24, 2008, 11:37:25 AM »
netra
Jannat ka hai nazaara,,
Na tera na mera kashmir hamara,,

Inko mila nahin sukoon,,
Jab se hua batvaara,,

Tukdon men kat gaya,,
Sab dekhte rahe nazaara,,


Angrez ki saazish ne,,
Saara naqsha tha bigada,,

Desh aaj bhi ladte hain,,
Ana ka masaala hai saara,,

Piste hain log wahan ke aaj tak,,
Mahroom raha khushiyon se Kashmir bechara,,

Mazloom hain masoom hain,,
Par deta nahin koi sahaara,,

Do deshon ke darmiyaan,,
Pista rahega Kashmir hamara..

Jannat ka hai nazaara,,
Na tera na mera kashmir hamara..


|Syed Naami|
..

nice saying sir jee "kashmeer n tera n mera hai hmaar"
bahoot achaa laga padh kar

Netra...
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Roja
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«Reply #24 on: July 26, 2008, 08:13:35 PM »
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Ghush ayaa hai dushamn chup kar yahaa
Batwaare kai sailaab lyaa hai yhaaa

Ham ab gumrah ho rahe hai
Apne hee bayee se ham lad rahe hai
Kah laataa  thaa shaan hindustaan kee jo
Apnee jannt ko ham hee jalaa rhea hai..

Wonderful Netra ji...  Applause Applause
Bahut accha likha hai aapne.
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #25 on: July 28, 2008, 11:13:52 AM »
Wonderful Netra ji...  Applause Applause
Bahut accha likha hai aapne.


thanks roja ji

netra...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #26 on: July 28, 2008, 11:17:42 AM »
kaisee ye dillgee hai naseeb kee
kaisaa ajab samaa ayaa hai aaj
lutaa chuke hai jinke liye sab kuch
wahee lootne ko tayaar hame hai aaj.

netra..
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Roja
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«Reply #27 on: July 30, 2008, 02:16:52 PM »
Wonderful creation Netra ji  Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #28 on: July 30, 2008, 02:18:20 PM »
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Jannat ka hai nazaara,,
Na tera na mera kashmir hamara,,

Inko mila nahin sukoon,,
Jab se hua batvaara,,

Tukdon men kat gaya,,
Sab dekhte rahe nazaara,,

Wah wah wah kya khoob likha hai aapne Syed ji... daad kabul kijiyega
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syednaami
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«Reply #29 on: July 30, 2008, 09:01:27 PM »
nice saying sir jee "kashmeer n tera n mera hai hmaar"
bahoot achaa laga padh kar

Netra...
Netra Saahib
Kuchh apni ghaltiyaan kuchh auron ki sarkashi...
Bas umeed hai ki yeh masaala jald az jald nibar jaaye...
Aapne pasand kya aapka tah-e-dil se shukarguzaar hun...


Wah wah wah kya khoob likha hai aapne Syed ji... daad kabul kijiyega
Jee Roja Saahiba bilkul qabool karenge,,, par kab tak hum yeh political tamasha dekhte rahenge,,, aakhir kab tak...
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