KASHMEER

by NETRAPAL on July 15, 2008, 12:03:15 PM
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NETRAPAL
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Kaisee ye aag sulag rahee hai
Hindutaan kee jannat jal rahee hai
Lagee ye kaise aag aaj ghatee me
N maloom kiskee insaaniyta jal rahee hai

Dikh rhaa hai dhuaan sa udtaa hooa kahi
Jal utha wo pyaaraa sa kashmeer to nahi
Dekha jo manjar tabaahee kaa hamne
ruk gayee saans wahee ki wahee

Ek gaj jamee tak nahi de sake wo
Hindustaa ke raham pe jee rahe hai jo
Sar pe liye haath dushamno ka apne
Dag sarjamee  pe laga rahe hai wo

Kahsmeer pe hamne khoye veer kayee
Aayaa the cheen bhee kahkar hame bhayee
Kee thee koshish  deshman ne kair bar
Har baar usne magar muh kee hee kayee

Ghush ayaa hai dushamn chup kar yahaa
Batwaare kai sailaab lyaa hai yhaaa

Ham ab gumrah ho rahe hai
Apne hee bayee se ham lad rahe hai
Kah laataa  thaa shaan hindustaan kee jo
Apnee jannt ko ham hee jalaa rhea hai..



Netra…..
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Muhammed
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2008, 12:13:49 PM »
x?x?x?
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2008, 12:24:39 PM »
NETRAPAL Ji,
Aap kaa dard samajh saktaa hoon:
Naheen hai aisee kaheen aazaadee,
Jaisee is mulk mein milee hai hamain!!
Chaahtey hain jo sirf barbaadee:
Kaisey insaan hain, khudaa jaaney?
Jo apney ghar ko khud jalaatey hain:
Woh ho chukey hain zulm key aadee!
                     - abd bundeli  
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syednaami
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2008, 02:08:10 PM »
Quote from: netrapal
Kahsmeer pe hamne khoye veer kayee
Aayaa the cheen bhee kahkar hame bhayee
Kee thee koshish  deshman ne kair bar
Har baar usne magar muh kee hee kayee

Yun to saari nazm samajh men aayi,,, bas oopar wali lines ko zara dobara samjhaden to mahirbani hogi...

buhat naazuk vishay par likha hai,,, aur aisa kyun ho raha hai is ka bhi ilm hai...
Bas dua karenge Allah taala se ki haalat puraman ho jaayen...

Quote from: Muhammed on July 15, 2008, 12:13:49 PM
x?x?x?

?? kuchh savaal karna tha Raza bhai aapko...

Quote from: abdbundeli on July 15, 2008, 12:24:39 PM
NETRAPAL Ji,
Aap kaa dard samajh saktaa hoon:
Naheen hai aisee kaheen aazaadee,
Jaisee is mulk mein milee hai hamain!!
Chaahtey hain jo sirf barbaadee:
Kaisey insaan hain, khudaa jaaney?
Jo apney ghar ko khud jalaatey hain:
Woh ho chukey hain zulm key aadee!
                     - abd bundeli 

Par sochne ki baat yeh hai ki,,,
Faaida kisko ho raha hai...? Bas wohi pas-e-parda kal bhi lada ke chal diya aur aaj bhi kisi aur roop men aag laga raha hai...
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2008, 02:20:45 PM »
Quote from: NETRAPAL on July 15, 2008, 12:03:15 PM
Kaisee ye aag sulag rahee hai
Hindutaan kee jannat jal rahee hai
Lagee ye kaise aag aaj ghatee me
N maloom kiskee insaaniyta jal rahee hai

Dikh rhaa hai dhuaan sa udtaa hooa kahi
Jal utha wo pyaaraa sa kashmeer to nahi
Dekha jo manjar tabaahee kaa hamne
ruk gayee saans wahee ki wahee

Ek gaj jamee tak nahi de sake wo
Hindustaa ke raham pe jee rahe hai jo
Sar pe liye haath dushamno ka apne
Dag sarjamee  pe laga rahe hai wo

Kahsmeer pe hamne khoye veer kayee
Aayaa the cheen bhee kahkar hame bhayee
Kee thee koshish  deshman ne kair bar
Har baar usne magar muh kee hee kayee

Ghush ayaa hai dushamn chup kar yahaa
Batwaare kai sailaab lyaa hai yhaaa

Ham ab gumrah ho rahe hai
Apne hee bayee se ham lad rahe hai
Kah laataa  thaa shaan hindustaan kee jo
Apnee jannt ko ham hee jalaa rhea hai..



Netra…..

Bahut khoob Netra... Applause

Last para mein aapne woh sachhai keh di, jisey jaante shayad sabhi hai, magar maan.na nahin chahte..

Likhte rahiyega..  Thumbs UP
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Shikha12
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2008, 02:22:55 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on July 15, 2008, 12:24:39 PM
NETRAPAL Ji,
Aap kaa dard samajh saktaa hoon:
Naheen hai aisee kaheen aazaadee,
Jaisee is mulk mein milee hai hamain!!
Chaahtey hain jo sirf barbaadee:
Kaisey insaan hain, khudaa jaaney?
Jo apney ghar ko khud jalaatey hain:
Woh ho chukey hain zulm key aadee!
                     - abd bundeli 


Bahut sahi baat kahi aapne.. Abd ji..
Aur bahut khoob andaaz mein kahi.. Applause
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Sonia01
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2008, 03:49:21 PM »
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Kaisee ye aag sulag rahee hai
Hindutaan kee jannat jal rahee hai
Lagee ye kaise aag aaj ghatee me
N maloom kiskee insaaniyta jal rahee hai

Bahut sahi likha hai aapne. Accha laga padkar. But dil main dard bi hua ke hamare desh main kayi saalon se uneasyness hai... aur aaj bi hai.
kisi ko chain nahi wahan aur aram nahi ... Jannat narak si bante nazar
aa raha hai. sad5
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2008, 06:33:28 AM »
aap sab ka bahoot bahoot dhanaywaad reply ke liye or ise padhne ke liye
x?x?x? kis liye hai mujhe maloom nahi.

netrapal...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2008, 06:38:00 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on July 15, 2008, 02:08:10 PM

Yun to saari nazm samajh men aayi,,, bas oopar wali lines ko zara dobara samjhaden to mahirbani hogi...

buhat naazuk vishay par likha hai,,, aur aisa kyun ho raha hai is ka bhi ilm hai...
Bas dua karenge Allah taala se ki haalat puraman ho jaayen...

?? kuchh savaal karna tha Raza bhai aapko...

Par sochne ki baat yeh hai ki,,,
Faaida kisko ho raha hai...? Bas wohi pas-e-parda kal bhi lada ke chal diya aur aaj bhi kisi aur roop men aag laga raha hai...

sir jee maine jo chaha to wo shayad mai pooree tarah se likh nahi pyaa mai to yahee kahan chahataa hoo kee kashmeer kee parvarish ke liye hamne kya nahi khoyaa or kya nahi kho rahe hai fir bhee kashmeer ko ham apnaa kyo nahi kah sakte.....yaha bas nahi sakte...ho saktaa hai mai galat hoo par maine apnaa khyaal kah diyaa..
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Rajbir
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2008, 06:50:30 AM »
Netra

Ek baar phir se aap ka krantikari kalam Applause Applause Applause

Abd bhai ne bhi bahut achcha reply diya hai Applause Applause Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP
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syednaami
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2008, 06:54:51 AM »
Quote from: NETRAPAL on July 16, 2008, 06:38:00 AM
sir jee maine jo chaha to wo shayad mai pooree tarah se likh nahi pyaa mai to yahee kahan chahataa hoo kee kashmeer kee parvarish ke liye hamne kya nahi khoyaa or kya nahi kho rahe hai fir bhee kashmeer ko ham apnaa kyo nahi kah sakte.....yaha bas nahi sakte...ho saktaa hai mai galat hoo par maine apnaa khyaal kah diyaa..

Netra Saahib,,,
Aap ke khayaalaat bilkul sach ki aqaasi karte hain... Aur hum samajhte hain ki batwara bilkul sahih nahin tha...
Jis ki misaal aap Bangladesh se le sakte hain...
Jo kabhi Hindustan tha phir Pakistan bana aur baad men Bangladesh...
Bas ab man yahi dua karta hai ki hamara khita ek Sub-continent ban kar rahe na ke ek doosre ke padosi ho kar bhi tukdon par ladte rahe...

China ne kya bahtareen qadam utthaya jo ilaaqa kai baras se uske paas tha woh India ko lota diya.

Par massaail to hain par unka hal agar pura South Aisa mil kar hal kare to kuchh dinon men bhi hal ho sakta hai... Magar Aisa karne se kon beech men aa raha hai... aap ko bhi maloom hai shayad...

Shukriya...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #11 on: July 16, 2008, 08:58:27 AM »
Quote from: Rajbir on July 16, 2008, 06:50:30 AM
Netra

Ek baar phir se aap ka krantikari kalam Applause Applause Applause

Abd bhai ne bhi bahut achcha reply diya hai Applause Applause Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP

thanks rajbir ji....

Netra....
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #12 on: July 16, 2008, 09:00:21 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on July 16, 2008, 06:54:51 AM
Netra Saahib,,,
Aap ke khayaalaat bilkul sach ki aqaasi karte hain... Aur hum samajhte hain ki batwara bilkul sahih nahin tha...
Jis ki misaal aap Bangladesh se le sakte hain...
Jo kabhi Hindustan tha phir Pakistan bana aur baad men Bangladesh...
Bas ab man yahi dua karta hai ki hamara khita ek Sub-continent ban kar rahe na ke ek doosre ke padosi ho kar bhi tukdon par ladte rahe...

China ne kya bahtareen qadam utthaya jo ilaaqa kai baras se uske paas tha woh India ko lota diya.

Par massaail to hain par unka hal agar pura South Aisa mil kar hal kare to kuchh dinon men bhi hal ho sakta hai... Magar Aisa karne se kon beech men aa raha hai... aap ko bhi maloom hai shayad...

Shukriya...

mai  bhee aapke ray se ittefaaq rakhtaa hoo sir jee aapne bilkul sahee farmayaa....

netra...
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punam
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«Reply #13 on: July 16, 2008, 09:20:02 AM »
Netra ji bahut khoob...
bahut hi acha likha hai ...yun likhte raho...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #14 on: July 16, 2008, 09:50:20 AM »
Quote from: punam on July 16, 2008, 09:20:02 AM
Netra ji bahut khoob...
bahut hi acha likha hai ...yun likhte raho...


thanks poonam ji.......

netra...
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