Mahefiloon ki Raunaq Tha jo Shaqs kabhi ............

by abdulqadeer on January 05, 2009, 09:44:12 AM
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Ye Ghazl me bhi maine khuch isharoon me Apne Jazbath aur ahesaas dikhane ki chuti si koshish ki hai !! Agar Ghazal se mil ja-o- to daad ka mahutaj hon !!

Ghazal apke Nazar kar raha hon Tawajo Chahonga !!


Ye kiss janib zamane ne ungli utha-e- hai !!
Ye wo shaqs hai jisne qaribi me baadshahath baati hai !!

Ab uski saqawath ki kya misaal doge !!
Baatke ujale jisne andheroon me zindagi kati hai!!

Kyoon tadpate ho tishnagi se is shaher ko !!
Ye wohi dar jahan se tumne pyaas bhuja-e- hai !!

Mahefiloon ki raunaq tha jo shaqs kabhi!!
aj ussi ke ghar tanha-e- hai !!

kal tak jo mulak hausloon ki misaal tha qadeer !!
aj ussi sarzameen pe bebasi chah-e- hai !!

Qadeer Toopchi

From Dubai But an indian
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2009, 10:04:45 PM »
Ye Ghazl me bhi maine khuch isharoon me Apne Jazbath aur ahesaas dikhane ki chuti si koshish ki hai !! Agar Ghazal se mil ja-o- to daad ka mahutaj hon !!

Ghazal apke Nazar kar raha hon Tawajo Chahonga !!


Ye kiss janib zamane ne ungli utha-e- hai !!
Ye wo shaqs hai jisne qaribi me baadshahath baati hai !!

Ab uski saqawath ki kya misaal doge !!
Baatke ujale jisne andheroon me zindagi kati hai!!

Kyoon tadpate ho tishnagi se is shaher ko !!
Ye wohi dar jahan se tumne pyaas bhuja-e- hai !!

Mahefiloon ki raunaq tha jo shaqs kabhi!!
aj ussi ke ghar tanha-e- hai !!

kal tak jo mulak hausloon ki misaal tha qadeer !!
aj ussi sarzameen pe bebasi chah-e- hai !!

Qadeer Toopchi

From Dubai But an indian


Waah Mere Bhai,
Waah,.

KOi Samjhe Ya Na Samjhe,.
Maine Bohat Kuch Samajh Liya Is Kalaam se,.
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2009, 10:17:26 PM »
wah wah...bahaut hi acha likha hai...inshallah woh bebasi..woh tanhai khuda dhoor karega...phir se roshni hogi...inshallah...
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2009, 11:15:42 PM »
Its really soooo meaningfullll bohat hi khubsurat likha hai aap ne  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2009, 03:39:17 AM »
Waah Mere Bhai,
Waah,.

KOi Samjhe Ya Na Samjhe,.
Maine Bohat Kuch Samajh Liya Is Kalaam se,.
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
May Allah Bless You,.

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Azeem Bhai !! Apne Samjha to meri is Ghazal Yahan Post karne ka maqsad mil gaya !!

Allah hafiz

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 03:39:50 AM »
wah wah...bahaut hi acha likha hai...inshallah woh bebasi..woh tanhai khuda dhoor karega...phir se roshni hogi...inshallah...

nachiz apka ahesanmand hai !!
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2009, 03:42:36 AM »
Its really soooo meaningfullll bohat hi khubsurat likha hai aap ne  Applause Applause Applause

Apka Tahe dil se shukar guzar hon ke apne meri ghazal ko samjha aur uske maqsad ko pahechana !!

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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2009, 10:56:01 PM »
Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Azeem Bhai !! Apne Samjha to meri is Ghazal Yahan Post karne ka maqsad mil gaya !!

Allah hafiz

Qadeer Toopchi

U Are Welcome Bhai,.
Aur Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
Allah Aapko Kamyaab Kare,.

Aameen,.
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