mera bharat--------? lakhwinder singh ashk

by lakhwinder singh ashk on September 03, 2012, 06:47:20 AM
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iss mulak ki kismat darust kyun nahin hoti
ye badkismst bewa raat bhar kyun nahin soti
jhoot mein azadi ka bharam pale baithe hain
zahar bechane walon ki pakar kyun nahin hoti
aaj phir gatter mein gir ke mar gaya koi
in sadkon ki murrammat kyun nahin hoti
ik bmw ne phir rond dale hain kuchh log
ye sharab ki dukanein band kyun nahin hoti
do andhon ko mar dala kuchh darindon ne
ye PM ki security kam kyun nahin hoti
ye kale angraij goron se bhi badter nikle
tijori in bhukhon ki bhar kyun nahin hot
ye jashne azadi har saal manate hein par
dard kahan hai in ko khabar kyun nahin hoti
hum kahan kis makam pe aa pahunche hein
haye is raat ki sahar kyun nahin hoti
ye kis ne kah diya bharat mera mahan hai
aag pet ki bhuj kar kam kyun nahin hoti
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2012, 07:09:35 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Lakhwinder ji....
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2012, 09:20:13 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoobsurat rachna ... bahut khoobsurati se aapne desh ke problems ke baare me bataaya hai.. ek ek shabd chilla chilla ke sach bol raha hai.. bahut khoob Ashk ji... bahut bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2012, 10:37:16 AM »
great
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2012, 08:48:10 PM »
Bahut ache...heart touching...
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2012, 12:43:32 AM »
bahut badhiya
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2012, 12:50:23 AM »
LSA ji aapne bahut hi umda aur ek dum sachha qalaam pesh kiya hai ........aapko salam karte hai aur hazaro daad dete hai aapke is qalaam ke liye

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