MERE MANDIR MEIN - TERE MASJID MEIN........cara.

by cara on January 05, 2009, 09:15:09 AM
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MERE MANDIR MEIN, TERE MASJID MEIN,
INKE GIRJE MEIN, UNKE GURUDWARE MEIN,
       EK HI MALIK RAHETA HAI
EK HI HAIN HAM ,YEH HI KAHETA HAI.

MERE KORAAN MEIN ,TERE GURU GRANTH MEIN,
   INKE GITA MEIN, UNKE BIBLE MEIN,
       EK HI GYAAN MILTA HAI
MILJUL KE RAHENE SE HI JEEVAN KHILTA HAI.

MERE RAGHON MEIN, TERE RAGHON MEIN,
INKE RAGHON MEIN,UNKE RAGHON MEIN,
     EK HI KHOON BAHETA HAI
HAM SAB EK HAIN, YEH HI SABOOT DETA HAI.

MEIN HINDU HOON,TU HAI MUSALMAAN,
YEH HAI SIKH,WOH HAI ISAAYI,
    YEH NAAM HAIN APNE
HAM JO HAIN CHAAR BHAI.

YEH HAI BHARAT,YEH HAI INDIA,YEH HAI HINDUSTAAN,
         JO CHAHEY PUKAR LO
YEH HAI SABKASTAAN.

        IS DESH KO KISI KI NAZAR NA LAGEY.
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2009, 11:07:25 AM »
Quote from: cara on January 05, 2009, 09:15:09 AM
MERE MANDIR MEIN, TERE MASJID MEIN,
INKE GIRJE MEIN, UNKE GURUDWARE MEIN,
       EK HI MALIK RAHETA HAI
EK HI HAIN HAM ,YEH HI KAHETA HAI.

MERE KORAAN MEIN ,TERE GURU GRANTH MEIN,
   INKE GITA MEIN, UNKE BIBLE MEIN,
       EK HI GYAAN MILTA HAI
MILJUL KE RAHENE SE HI JEEVAN KHILTA HAI.

MERE RAGHON MEIN, TERE RAGHON MEIN,
INKE RAGHON MEIN,UNKE RAGHON MEIN,
     EK HI KHOON BAHETA HAI
HAM SAB EK HAIN, YEH HI SABOOT DETA HAI.

MEIN HINDU HOON,TU HAI MUSALMAAN,
YEH HAI SIKH,WOH HAI ISAAYI,
    YEH NAAM HAIN APNE
HAM JO HAIN CHAAR BHAI.

YEH HAI BHARAT,YEH HAI INDIA,YEH HAI HINDUSTAAN,
         JO CHAHEY PUKAR LO
YEH HAI SABKASTAAN.

        IS DESH KO KISI KI NAZAR NA LAGEY.

Cara ji!
Bahut hi sundar wichaar hain aap key! Meiney aap key kalaam ko thorhaa 'edit' karney ki gustaakhee ki hai, kyoun ki aap 'hain' aur 'hai' key isteymaal kartey waqt 'enter' karney mein chook jaatey hain! Aisaa lagtaa hai Urdu/Hindi aap ki 'mother tongue' naheen hai! Aap kaa kalaam qaabil-e-taareef hai! 'Enter' kartey waqt thorhaa khayaal rakhengey, to soney mein suhaagey kaa kaam kareygaa! Muaaf keejiyegaa!
                 - abd bundeli  (MONITOR)
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2009, 11:47:24 AM »
bahut  bahut sukhriya abdji,jo aap ne hamari mistake hum ko bataya aur ham ko samjaaya, aage se hum dyan rakhegen  yeh galti dubara na ho paaye.aur hamara kalaam aap ko pasand aaya is ke liye bahut danyawad aapka.
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2009, 12:33:08 PM »
Beautiful Cara tumhara yeh andaz bohat achcha laga too good  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2009, 01:15:19 PM »
thanks  gayelji.. jo aap ko pasand aaya.
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2009, 03:15:11 PM »
Nice One Cara Ji,.
Bohat Achcha Laga Pardhke,.
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
Lage Raho,.
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«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2009, 03:20:35 PM »
sukhriya jaanasheenji.....
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«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2009, 04:46:08 PM »
Quote from: cara on January 05, 2009, 09:15:09 AM
MERE MANDIR MEIN, TERE MASJID MEIN,
INKE GIRJE MEIN, UNKE GURUDWARE MEIN,
       EK HI MALIK RAHETA HAI
EK HI HAIN HAM ,YEH HI KAHETA HAI.

MERE KORAAN MEIN ,TERE GURU GRANTH MEIN,
   INKE GITA MEIN, UNKE BIBLE MEIN,
       EK HI GYAAN MILTA HAI
MILJUL KE RAHENE SE HI JEEVAN KHILTA HAI.

MERE RAGHON MEIN, TERE RAGHON MEIN,
INKE RAGHON MEIN,UNKE RAGHON MEIN,
     EK HI KHOON BAHETA HAI
HAM SAB EK HAIN, YEH HI SABOOT DETA HAI.

MEIN HINDU HOON,TU HAI MUSALMAAN,
YEH HAI SIKH,WOH HAI ISAAYI,
    YEH NAAM HAIN APNE
HAM JO HAIN CHAAR BHAI.

YEH HAI BHARAT,YEH HAI INDIA,YEH HAI HINDUSTAAN,
         JO CHAHEY PUKAR LO
YEH HAI SABKASTAAN.

        IS DESH KO KISI KI NAZAR NA LAGEY.


Beautiful One Cara!! bahut achi soch hai aapki..
Bahut Khoob.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2009, 04:54:13 PM »
Quote from: cara on January 05, 2009, 11:47:24 AM
bahut  bahut sukhriya abdji,jo aap ne hamari mistake hum ko bataya aur ham ko samjaaya, aage se hum dyan rakhegen  yeh galti dubara na ho paaye.aur hamara kalaam aap ko pasand aaya is ke liye bahut danyawad aapka.
Cara Ji! Mujhey khushee huyee aap ko meyree gustaakhee buree naheen lagee! Aisy hi achchhey kalaam peish kartey raheyn, mujhey aur bhi khushee hogee!Shukriyah!
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«Reply #9 on: January 05, 2009, 04:59:53 PM »
Quote from: cara on January 05, 2009, 09:15:09 AM
MERE MANDIR MEIN, TERE MASJID MEIN,
INKE GIRJE MEIN, UNKE GURUDWARE MEIN,
       EK HI MALIK RAHETA HAI
EK HI HAIN HAM ,YEH HI KAHETA HAI.

MERE KORAAN MEIN ,TERE GURU GRANTH MEIN,
   INKE GITA MEIN, UNKE BIBLE MEIN,
       EK HI GYAAN MILTA HAI
MILJUL KE RAHENE SE HI JEEVAN KHILTA HAI.

MERE RAGHON MEIN, TERE RAGHON MEIN,
INKE RAGHON MEIN,UNKE RAGHON MEIN,
     EK HI KHOON BAHETA HAI
HAM SAB EK HAIN, YEH HI SABOOT DETA HAI.

MEIN HINDU HOON,TU HAI MUSALMAAN,
YEH HAI SIKH,WOH HAI ISAAYI,
    YEH NAAM HAIN APNE
HAM JO HAIN CHAAR BHAI.

YEH HAI BHARAT,YEH HAI INDIA,YEH HAI HINDUSTAAN,
         JO CHAHEY PUKAR LO
YEH HAI SABKASTAAN.

        IS DESH KO KISI KI NAZAR NA LAGEY.


CARA Ji.. Maine aapko Bahut Kam Padha Hai.. Shayad pahali Baar Hi padha Hai.. Par Aaj Hum aapke, Aur aapke Jazzbaaton ke Kaayal ho gaye hain.. Waqai Dil Ko Chhoo gai aapki Yeh Nazm.. Kitni Khubsoorati se aapne sab Dharmo Ko Ek Dhaage Me Piroya Hai.. Yeh Padh kar Main Dang raha gaya..!! Bahut Bahut Bahuuuuuuuut Khoooooooooooob..!! Great Words.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #10 on: January 05, 2009, 05:10:26 PM »
khawishji...thanks
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cara
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«Reply #11 on: January 05, 2009, 05:15:54 PM »
abdji...aap ki gustaakee nahin hai,aap ka hath hai hamare uper aur is mein hamara balla hi hai.....thanks.
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«Reply #12 on: January 05, 2009, 05:25:05 PM »
mannji..aap ko yeh nazm pasand aayi hum danya ho gaye,bahut -bahut aap ka shukhriya.
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«Reply #13 on: January 05, 2009, 05:55:01 PM »
bahut acha likha hai more people need to read this and act on it
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«Reply #14 on: January 05, 2009, 06:03:50 PM »
waha CARA bahut hi khoobsurati sey aap neh yeh poem likhi hai aur ek ek word sach kaha hai aap neh.


MERE GURU GRANTH SAHIB JI MEH, TERE KURAAN JI MEH
INKEY BIBLE JI MEH , UNKEY GEETA JI MEH
EK HI BAAT KA PAIGAAAM HAI
PARMATMA HUM SAB KEY DILOH MEH HI PASHEMAAN HAI

FIR KU YEH DESHOH KI DURIYA HAI
FIR KY YEH LOGOH MEH GUMAAN HAI
RABB HUM SAB KEY DILOH MEH HAI
FIR KU YEH JAAN LENE KEY LIYE TEER KAMAAN HAI




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