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Author Topic: My first Sher to my nation... My India  (Read 283 times)
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« on: December 30, 2008, 12:24:59 AM »

Hi Friend,

Such a nice community. Here comes my first post to all of you. Your views/comments/remarks are very important to me.... Thanks.

Watan main yun to azaadi bahut hai,
Gharon main fir kyun nashaadi bahut hai.

Karun kya? Mujhmen rahta hai jo insaan,
Akelepan ka wo aadi bahut hai.

Bahaaron se kaho kar len kinaara,
Mere daaman main barbaadi bahut hai.

Ghamno main muskurana ham se seekho,
Hamen is fan main ustaadi bahut hai.

Azm,
New Delhi. India.
myselfazm@gmail.com
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« Reply #1 on: December 30, 2008, 02:05:36 AM »

Azm,

Nice thoughts well expressed Applause

Welcome to Yoindia Usual Smile
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« Reply #2 on: December 30, 2008, 02:06:46 AM »

Bohat bohat khoob Azm  Clapping Smiley a huge welcome to yoindia aapse bohat kuch seekhne ko milega...

Darte hain aajkal hum ghar se nikalne ko
Koi dushman to nahi mera par dost bahut hain

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« Reply #3 on: December 30, 2008, 09:47:19 AM »

Bohat Achche Azm Ji,.
And Welcome To Yoindia,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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« Reply #4 on: December 30, 2008, 09:51:31 AM »

Bohat khoob Azm... Thumbs UP
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« Reply #5 on: December 30, 2008, 12:41:01 PM »

 Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob Azm ji, apka yoindia main sawagat hai!!
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« Reply #6 on: December 30, 2008, 12:41:19 PM »

Bohat bohat khoob Azm  Clapping Smiley a huge welcome to yoindia aapse bohat kuch seekhne ko milega...

Darte hain aajkal hum ghar se nikalne ko
Koi dushman to nahi mera par dost bahut hain

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well said SG!!
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« Reply #7 on: December 30, 2008, 12:51:27 PM »

AZM aap ney bahut khoobsurat likha hai
apni pehli poem desh key naam peh, khoob likha hai


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« Reply #8 on: December 31, 2008, 04:54:21 AM »

AZMJI AAP KA YOINDIA MEIN JORSE SWAGHAT HAIN.

WATAN KE SAATH YOINDIA MEIN BHI AAZADI BAHUT HAI
GHAIR KOI BHI NAHIN, YAHAN APNE BAHUT HAIN.

KARNA KYA HAI,NIKAAL FEK US INSAAN KO,
YAHAN AKELAPAN NAHIN APNA PAN BAHUT HAI.

BAHAROON SE KYU KAHE KAR LE KINAARA,
TU BARBAAD HAI, YAHAN AAZADI BAHUT HAI.

GHAMO MEIN MUSKRANA HUM SE SIKHO,
HAMARE GUM MEIN, DUM BAHUT HAIN.





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