sahmaa saa kaalaa bhaarat (Jaipur kee aag)

by NETRAPAL on November 03, 2009, 10:51:28 AM
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kohraam fir ek bar mach gayaa
Sannaataa saa har dil pe chaa gayaa
mach gayee bhagdad see achaanak
neend se jag gaye sab achaanak
jo jag gayaa wo bach gayaa thaa
sone waalaa swaah ho gayaa thaa

jwaalaa bhee maano gagan choom rahee thee
taaron kee timtimaahat ghabraa gayee thee
chand bhee chipaa gayaa tha muh apnaa
uskee chaandnee dhoone me doob gayee thee

har saksh jad saa khadaa thaa
koi bebas mot se khel rahaa thaa,
aag kaa wo tandav, sabkee
bebasee pe muskaraa rahaa thaa
rahnumaa jantaa ke, pahuch gaye the
chand lafj kahkar aaswaashan kaa
farj apnaa nibhaa rahe thee
jinda jalte logon ko
bebasee wo apnee dikhaa gaye the

har khabree utsaathit tha
kaimraa haatho me machal rahaa thaa
chapaltaa se boltaa hooaa wo
saare jahaan ko 21v sadee kaa
bhaarat dikhaa rahaa thaa.

10 din wo tandav chaltaa rahaa
Dhooan aasmaan nigaltaa rahaa
Kai maanv kisse ban gaye
Koi ghar maatam manaataa rhaa

Ye bhee ab ek kissa ban jayegaa
kon ise ab yaad rakh paayegaa
gahree neend me dobaaraa
har saksh fir so jaayegaa…
fir jgegaa achaank neend se
aasmaa fir kaalaa ho jayegaa

Netrapal…
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2009, 11:19:03 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohot bohot khoob Netra Ji  icon_salut
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2009, 11:22:02 AM »
thank celmira ji for first reply

Netra...
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2009, 12:01:02 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI    NETRAPAL JI......

MANZAR KUDRAT KA KABHI JO BANKAR AATA HAI AAG
KAAMPH JAATI HAI DHARTI,AASMAAN JAATA HAI BAAG.
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2009, 04:31:02 PM »
Great Netrpal Ji bahut hi khubsurat rachna likhi hai aapne thnx a lot ye tandav 29 oct 2009 ko sham 7:37 PM Hua


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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2009, 07:08:11 AM »
shukriya cara and rishi agarwal ji for reply

Netra...
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2009, 07:52:46 AM »
Wah bahut bahut khoob Netra ji and Cara ji,lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #7 on: November 04, 2009, 08:47:09 AM »
thanks madhuvesh ji for reply

Netra....
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #8 on: November 06, 2009, 03:59:18 AM »

ye manajar tham gayaa to kya
ye manhoosiyat fir aayegee
dikhtaa assmaa saaf to kya
kaalimaa fir rangjaayegee
aaj anssoo hai jin ankho me
kal wo ronaa bhool jayegee


Netraa..
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #9 on: November 06, 2009, 05:11:45 AM »
Wah Netra ji bahut bahut khoob,lovely lines.great work .keep it up. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #10 on: November 15, 2009, 04:56:55 AM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Netrapal ji.. Bahoot hi Marmik rachna hai. Bahoot Khoob!
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baadal102
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«Reply #11 on: November 15, 2009, 05:02:10 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut khoob pal ji
verry touching lines
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #12 on: November 16, 2009, 04:05:39 AM »
thanka, madhuvesh ji, sophi ji, badal ji
for reply

Netra...
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