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GUJJAR ANDOLAN ME GOLEE CHALLEE OR HAR NEWS ME SHAVE SHAVE DIKHAYE GAYE USS MAN DUKHEE HO GAYAA HAM KAB TAK IS TARAH MARTE RAHENGEE KAB TAK KHAKEE WARDEE LAJJIT HOYEE HAI YAHEE SOCH KAR KUCH LIKHA HAI:-

Shav hee shav shav hee shav
Bikhare pade hai chahoo taraf
Kahi pada koi manav shav
Kahee padee khakee vardee
Kahi tirange me lipte,
Bina kafan ke bikhare shav
Shave hee shave hee shav
Bikhare pade haic haoo taraf

Aarakshn ka tha pradarsshan
Agayaantaa ke hooe dardshan
Jut gaye the we bedardee
Hoyee lajjit khakee vardee
Mita dala apno ko jisne
Kahi khakee hee bangayee shav
Shave hee shave shave shave hee shav
Bikhare pade hai chaoo taraf

N jaane kaisaa tha wo junoon
Sab taraf khoon hee khoon
Cheel or Giddh ka hota hai waha kalrav
Jahaa pade hai shav hee shave shav hee shav

Kahee laash kisee bete kee
Kahee baap hee maraa pada
Idhar baitee ek nayee see vidhvaa
Kahee rotee koi ghayal sadhva
Bilkh rahe hai kai parijan
Paa kar kisee apne ka shav
Shave hee shav shave hee shav
Bikhare bade hai chaoo taraf

NETRA......


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punam

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Re: SHAV

«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2008, 12:53:26 PM »

wow Netra ji....bahot khoob ..jawab nahi aap ka...


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Shikha12

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Re: SHAV

«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2008, 01:04:24 PM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on June 11, 2008, 12:49:26 PM

Harr baar ki tarah... Perfect.. icon_thumleft

A Burning Issue Described so simply yet effectively...
Yeh aapke alawa aur kaun kar sakta hai.. Netra.. notworthy

Great Job... Applause

Do keep writing...


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Rajbir

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Re: SHAV

«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2008, 01:35:55 PM »

Netra

Burning issues and social issues par tumhari krantikari kalam aise he chalti rahe... Applause


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Sonia01

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Re: SHAV

«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2008, 02:21:27 PM »

wow aisa current topic pe aapne itna accha likha hai. very good Netra Jee


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Pooja

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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2008, 02:53:41 PM »

bahoot khoob Netra ji... kai dino se yah news pard rahi hu... magar yah itani had tak ja chuki hai, iska andaza apki is kavita se hua!!

bahoot hi acha likha hai apne.. hamesha ki tarah.. Good job Applause


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NETRAPAL

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Re: SHAV

«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2008, 01:59:19 AM »

aap sab ka bahoot bahoot dhanywaad

netra.....


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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2008, 02:36:33 AM »

shabd nahi ke prashansa ke....
mai abhi rajasthan me hi hun aur jo babaadi hui hai usase mera sakchatkaar bhi hua hai....
atyant marmik rachna.....sadhuwad netra ji


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Re: SHAV

«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2008, 06:13:22 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on June 12, 2008, 02:36:33 AM

shabd nahi ke prashansa ke....
mai abhi rajasthan me hi hun aur jo babaadi hui hai usase mera sakchatkaar bhi hua hai....
atyant marmik rachna.....sadhuwad netra ji

thanks sir jee,

aap rajasthan me kaha hai?

netra...


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Re: SHAV

«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2008, 06:21:07 AM »

welcome netra ji
filhaal AJMER me...


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honeyrose

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Re: SHAV

«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2008, 10:19:45 AM »

Very super lines Netra ji kamaal ka likha hai aapne


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NETRAPAL

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Re: SHAV

«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2008, 11:56:36 AM »

Quote from: honeyrose on June 12, 2008, 10:19:45 AM

Very super lines Netra ji kamaal ka likha hai aapne

thanks honey jee

netra......


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