Sheede-Watan -Panna 2:Shairy-E-Watan

Rajbir

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«Reply #15 on: June 25, 2007, 04:56:26 AM »

Netra bro

Superb =D> =D> =D>


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NETRAPAL

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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #16 on: June 25, 2007, 10:16:54 AM »

sookhe nayan hai, dard hai bhoot seene me
kyo rote ho tum aaj, ho kar kahde soone kone me

aaj mara, waha mara nahi, dee usne ahooteee hai
hooa amar, bacha jar hai, amar atma hotee hai

tum kyo rote ho, aapaa kyuu apnaa khote ho
kon raha is dhara par, jeewan anaa janaa hai
jo mara matrbhoomi par, amar sahdeed tum kahate ho

karo vida tum seena taan, farj apnaa nibhao tum
kurbaan hoo kar usne bhee farj apnaa nibhayaa tha
do kubaanee tum bhee ab, do sop agnee me use ab tum

netra...


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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #17 on: July 02, 2007, 09:26:05 AM »

ho gaya sab shant hai, nahi bacha koi tuufaan hai
bachee to sir lashe hee lash or kuch karrahte hai

kuch bach gaye jo dehte hai sukuch behoshe me hee
jo mar gaye saheed ban jate hai bach gaye wo fir ladte hai

ek kadthputliee kee tarah jindgee hai inkee
n inka wahoo hai apnee, hukmaramo ke isharo par hee kurban hote hai

bas ek hee josha hai marna matr bhoo me par unhe
kisi kaha kya matrbhoomi isa bhaan taj jinhe nahi hai

netra.....


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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #18 on: July 04, 2007, 05:58:38 PM »

oogate suraj ko dekho muskrahat kaha gayee iskee
dekh kar shamaa shaido kee garmee kitnee bad gayee iskee

rota hai asmaa bhee badlo se barskar megh bhee kale hai
shama bhee dartee hao roshan hone se, roshan kargi ab jindgee kiskee

fool bhee dharte hai khilne se, baithe hai muh chupaye patto me
chale gaya khushboo sunghne wala, chitao par jalge wo ab we jiskee

netra.....


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Rajbir

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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #19 on: July 05, 2007, 04:09:01 AM »

Netra

Very good once again ! =D> =D> =D>

Shabash ! Lage raho :arrow:


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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #20 on: July 05, 2007, 10:03:15 AM »

very very thanks rajbir ji

lete hai sans to jati hai hawa hindustaan kee seene me jinke
dekhte hai najar uthakar sanse tham jate hai unkee jo dushman hai inke

barfeelee hawao me bhe khada adig wah hokar mon
sabj kapado lye bdook hatho mai khada hai wo kon

nigahe hai samne palk tak jhapaktee nahi hai uskee
majboota irade hai mjboot bajoo me khada hai intjar me kinkee

kal koi sankat ayega matr bhoome ka yahi sappot man badhayega
rond kar dushmano ko hojayega kubaan wo bhart, mataa hai jiskee

netra......


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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #21 on: July 07, 2007, 05:34:19 PM »

unche uthe hai wo irade buland rakhte hai jo
chuu letee hai ambhar bhee parinde wo bejor hote hai jo

tamanna ho dil me agar, unchaiyee choo wo lete hai
jo ho kurbaan matrbhoomi pe wahi sahide watan hote hai wo

hai jangal bhara pada jhundo ke janwaro kee bahut
lakho kee bheed me dahate hai sher bhee
kare bahadurr se raj jangal pe we sher ke hee hota hai wo

lagte hai har warsh chitao par mele jinke
dalee jatee hai malaaye galo me moortiyo par jinkee
lakho karodo kee bheed wo veer kuch hee hote hai wo

netra...


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Roja

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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #22 on: July 07, 2007, 07:52:06 PM »

Quote from: "NETRAPAL"

wah wah last lines dil ko chu gaya hai netra

Keep it up...[/color]


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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #23 on: July 11, 2007, 09:41:28 AM »

thanks roja ji apne bhee bhoot achaa likha hai..........

chal diye ham to hokar vida
chand sanse hee baki hai seene me
karo hanskar vida tum ab hamko
n lana aansoo bhee tum apnee ankho me

diya hai balidaan aaj hamne
khayee hai goli seene me
jata hoo mai to ab paas khuda ke
n kee koi bhee kami farj apna nibhane me

nahi mite hai dushman abhi tak bhee
khade hai seema par ghat fir lagane ko
bachan hai tumhe hee ab ladar kar unse
wkat pade darna mat kha lena goli seena me

hojao ge sahide watan jo doge kurbanee tum
kai shole uthene unmaad tumharee hee chitao me

netra......


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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #24 on: July 12, 2007, 06:20:38 PM »

jeewan me ate hai kam moke
hone ko balidaan matr bhoo par
kyo chukte to tum bhee dar kar
cha jao dushman par mot banke

bhoot kam hote jo ho kar saheed
chajate hai poore jaha me
jaga jate hai josh kayaro me bhee
ho kar dafan jami me kurbaan hoke

yahee ho shaan hai hamare desh kee
dushman bhee mante hai loha bharat ke foj ke
ye to ghush jate jami pe dushman ke
macha dete hai halchal waha tiranga apna gadke

netra..


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Pooja

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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #25 on: July 13, 2007, 02:46:13 AM »

bahoot khoob Netra ji!!


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NETRAPAL

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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #26 on: July 13, 2007, 09:01:36 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

bahoot khoob Netra ji!!

thanks pooja ji,

netra.....


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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #27 on: July 14, 2007, 06:53:34 PM »

lag gaya hai mela sa gaon me
atee hai bheed dabe paon se
koi nahi chata hai bolna bhee aaj
kahde hai sab udasi kee chanv me

kahi roodan hai jor se
kahi aalam hai udaasee ka
anhke bhee sajal hai sabkee
bacche bhee sahame hai
krundan ke shor se...................

sabkee ankho me bas ek intjaar hai
koi ane wale hai lipat kar tirange me
sannaat sa chaaya hai aaj sare gaon me

wo agyaa hai kai sipahiyo ke beech
garv se tane hooe sepahee hai uske
hogaye shuru sukbugahat see
"saheed agayaa hai gaon me"

vilap kartee maa ko dekha nahi jata hai
bahan bhaiyo ka krundan saha nahi jata hai
fatne ko hgayee hai chatee gam se sabkee
badhaduri se lda tha yahee charcha ha ab gaon me..

netra.....


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Roja

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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #28 on: July 15, 2007, 12:06:45 AM »

Quote from: "NETRAPAL"

Superb netra...
Keep up


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NETRAPAL

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Sheede-Watan

«Reply #29 on: July 15, 2007, 10:01:36 AM »

thanks roja ji hosla afjayee ke liye

netra.....


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