Sone Ki Chidiya Kehlane Wala Desh Kahan Hai "Khwaish"

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Yeh Ghazal Likhte Waqt Soch Raha Tha Ke isse Kahan Post Karoon, Kya Yeh Sirf Ek Tanziya Kalaam Hai yaa yeh Ek Aisa Kalaam hai Jo Watan Ke hawaale Hai, Hum Sab Log Chaahe kuch Bhi Ho, Yeh Humesha Garv Se kehte Hai Ke Haan Humara Desh Hindustan Hai Par Kya Yeh Wahi Desh Hai Jo Humare Shaheedo Ne Humein Saumpa Hai..Yaa Kya yeh Wahi Desh Hai Jiski Azaadi ke Liye Humare Buzurgo Ne Bhi Jaan Ki Parwah Naa Karte Hue Bhi Sirf Azaadi ke Liye Ladhte Rahe,Pehle Bhi Issi theme Par Ek kalaam Likhi Thi "Kya Hum Sach Mein Azaad Hai??"
Ke Title Se..Iss Baar Kuch "Aaj ke Halaat" Aur Kuch "Hum Sab Ki Khamoshi yaa Yeh kahiye Kamzori" Par likhna Chahta Hoon...Padhiyega Zaroor..



Kahin Par Aag To kahin Par Hai Dhuan Dekhte Raho
Kaisa Bana Hai Aaj Ka  Insaan Dekhte Raho

Tum Baat Karte Ho Yahan Sirf Insaano Ki.....!!!!!!
Panchi Bhi Hue Hai Yahan Lahoon-Luhaan Dekhte Raho

Haadson Ne Yahan Sainkdon Ki Jaane Li....!!!!!!
Ab Bhi Band Hai Hum Sab Ki Zubaan Dekhte Raho...

Bharat Ki Asal Tasveer Uske Chote-Chote Gaon Mein hai!!!
karzon Mein Mar Rahe Hai Yeh Gaon  Ka Kisaan Dekhte Raho

Desh Ki Unnati Uski nayi peedhi ke Haath Mein Hai!!!!!!
Nashon Mein Dooba hai Aaj ka Jawaan Dekhte Raho

Imaandari Ki Padhai Kahan Dhoondhne Niklo Ho Janab!!!
Rishwat, Makari Ki hai Yaha Bahut si Dukaan Dekhte Raho

Rajneeti Ab Sirf "RAJ" Karne Ki "NEETI" Bankar Reh Gayi!!!!
Khulta Hai kab Yeh Saare Raaz-e-Nihaan Dekhte Raho..

Sone Ki chidiya Kehlaane Wala Desh Aakhir Kahan Hai???
Ab Reh gaya Hai Sirf bankar yeh Ek Nishaan Dekhte Raho

"Khwaish" Main Yeh Sab Sochkar Akela Kyon pareshaan Rahoon!!!
Jeene Ka Yehi Tareeka Bankar Reh Gaya sabse Asaan Bas Dekhte Raho.....


                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~





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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2012, 08:19:20 AM »
Har baar ki tarah,

Pokhti sonch, unche khayal aur khubsurat boli
bahut khoob, hamari daad khubool kijeye.

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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2012, 08:39:37 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2012, 09:05:50 AM »
Yeh Ghazal Likhte Waqt Soch Raha Tha Ke isse Kahan Post Karoon, Kya Yeh Sirf Ek Tanziya Kalaam Hai yaa yeh Ek Aisa Kalaam hai Jo Watan Ke hawaale Hai, Hum Sab Log Chaahe kuch Bhi Ho, Yeh Humesha Garv Se kehte Hai Ke Haan Humara Desh Hindustan Hai Par Kya Yeh Wahi Desh Hai Jo Humare Shaheedo Ne Humein Saumpa Hai..Yaa Kya yeh Wahi Desh Hai Jiski Azaadi ke Liye Humare Buzurgo Ne Bhi Jaan Ki Parwah Naa Karte Hue Bhi Sirf Azaadi ke Liye Ladhte Rahe,Pehle Bhi Issi theme Par Ek kalaam Likhi Thi "Kya Hum Sach Mein Azaad Hai??"
Ke Title Se..Iss Baar Kuch "Aaj ke Halaat" Aur Kuch "Hum Sab Ki Khamoshi yaa Yeh kahiye Kamzori" Par likhna Chahta Hoon...Padhiyega Zaroor..



Kahin Par Aag To kahin Par Hai Dhuan Dekhte Raho
Kaisa Bana Hai Aaj Ka  Insaan Dekhte Raho

Tum Baat Karte Ho Yahan Sirf Insaano Ki.....!!!!!!
Panchi Bhi Hue Hai Yahan Lahoon-Luhaan Dekhte Raho

Haadson Ne Yahan Sainkdon Ki Jaane Li....!!!!!!
Ab Bhi Band Hai Hum Sab Ki Zubaan Dekhte Raho...

Bharat Ki Asal Tasveer Uske Chote-Chote Gaon Mein hai!!!
karzon Mein Mar Rahe Hai Yeh Gaon  Ka Kisaan Dekhte Raho

Desh Ki Unnati Uski nayi peedhi ke Haath Mein Hai!!!!!!
Nashon Mein Dooba hai Aaj ka Jawaan Dekhte Raho

Imaandari Ki Padhai Kahan Dhoondhne Niklo Ho Janab!!!
Rishwat, Makari Ki hai Yaha Bahut si Dukaan Dekhte Raho

Rajneeti Ab Sirf "RAJ" Karne Ki "NEETI" Bankar Reh Gayi!!!!
Khulta Hai kab Yeh Saare Raaz-e-Nihaan Dekhte Raho..

Sone Ki chidiya Kehlaane Wala Desh Aakhir Kahan Hai???
Ab Reh gaya Hai Sirf bankar yeh Ek Nishaan Dekhte Raho

"Khwaish" Main Yeh Sab Sochkar Akela Kyon pareshaan Rahoon!!!
Jeene Ka Yehi Tareeka Bankar Reh Gaya sabse Asaan Bas Dekhte Raho.....


                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~








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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2012, 10:43:50 AM »
waah... bht bht khoob khwaish ji....
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2012, 01:20:09 PM »
Har baar ki tarah,

Pokhti sonch, unche khayal aur khubsurat boli
bahut khoob, hamari daad khubool kijeye.

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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2012, 01:25:45 PM »
Bahut khoob ,aur haqeeqat per mabni ash'aar.bahut mhbarakbaad.
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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2012, 01:35:46 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2012, 03:31:08 PM »
Apki fikr dekh apne mulk kay liye bahaut acha laga dost..
Aur yeh fikr, mujhe bhi apne mulk kay liye hoti rehti hai..
Bas dua hai, Dono desh, bahaut tarakki karein..
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«Reply #9 on: January 14, 2012, 04:04:57 PM »
Yeh Ghazal Likhte Waqt Soch Raha Tha Ke isse Kahan Post Karoon, Kya Yeh Sirf Ek Tanziya Kalaam Hai yaa yeh Ek Aisa Kalaam hai Jo Watan Ke hawaale Hai, Hum Sab Log Chaahe kuch Bhi Ho, Yeh Humesha Garv Se kehte Hai Ke Haan Humara Desh Hindustan Hai Par Kya Yeh Wahi Desh Hai Jo Humare Shaheedo Ne Humein Saumpa Hai..Yaa Kya yeh Wahi Desh Hai Jiski Azaadi ke Liye Humare Buzurgo Ne Bhi Jaan Ki Parwah Naa Karte Hue Bhi Sirf Azaadi ke Liye Ladhte Rahe,Pehle Bhi Issi theme Par Ek kalaam Likhi Thi "Kya Hum Sach Mein Azaad Hai??"
Ke Title Se..Iss Baar Kuch "Aaj ke Halaat" Aur Kuch "Hum Sab Ki Khamoshi yaa Yeh kahiye Kamzori" Par likhna Chahta Hoon...Padhiyega Zaroor..



Kahin Par Aag To kahin Par Hai Dhuan Dekhte Raho
Kaisa Bana Hai Aaj Ka  Insaan Dekhte Raho

Tum Baat Karte Ho Yahan Sirf Insaano Ki.....!!!!!!
Panchi Bhi Hue Hai Yahan Lahoon-Luhaan Dekhte Raho

Haadson Ne Yahan Sainkdon Ki Jaane Li....!!!!!!
Ab Bhi Band Hai Hum Sab Ki Zubaan Dekhte Raho...

Bharat Ki Asal Tasveer Uske Chote-Chote Gaon Mein hai!!!
karzon Mein Mar Rahe Hai Yeh Gaon  Ka Kisaan Dekhte Raho

Desh Ki Unnati Uski nayi peedhi ke Haath Mein Hai!!!!!!
Nashon Mein Dooba hai Aaj ka Jawaan Dekhte Raho

Imaandari Ki Padhai Kahan Dhoondhne Niklo Ho Janab!!!
Rishwat, Makari Ki hai Yaha Bahut si Dukaan Dekhte Raho

Rajneeti Ab Sirf "RAJ" Karne Ki "NEETI" Bankar Reh Gayi!!!!
Khulta Hai kab Yeh Saare Raaz-e-Nihaan Dekhte Raho..

Sone Ki chidiya Kehlaane Wala Desh Aakhir Kahan Hai???
Ab Reh gaya Hai Sirf bankar yeh Ek Nishaan Dekhte Raho

"Khwaish" Main Yeh Sab Sochkar Akela Kyon pareshaan Rahoon!!!
Jeene Ka Yehi Tareeka Bankar Reh Gaya sabse Asaan Bas Dekhte Raho.....

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



Waah! Waah! Khwaish ji.
Wonderful!
Hamesha ki tarah bahut khubsurat kalaam. Ye hi haqeekat hai.


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«Reply #10 on: January 14, 2012, 07:23:48 PM »
Yeh Ghazal Likhte Waqt Soch Raha Tha Ke isse Kahan Post Karoon, Kya Yeh Sirf Ek Tanziya Kalaam Hai yaa yeh Ek Aisa Kalaam hai Jo Watan Ke hawaale Hai, Hum Sab Log Chaahe kuch Bhi Ho, Yeh Humesha Garv Se kehte Hai Ke Haan Humara Desh Hindustan Hai Par Kya Yeh Wahi Desh Hai Jo Humare Shaheedo Ne Humein Saumpa Hai..Yaa Kya yeh Wahi Desh Hai Jiski Azaadi ke Liye Humare Buzurgo Ne Bhi Jaan Ki Parwah Naa Karte Hue Bhi Sirf Azaadi ke Liye Ladhte Rahe,Pehle Bhi Issi theme Par Ek kalaam Likhi Thi "Kya Hum Sach Mein Azaad Hai??"
Ke Title Se..Iss Baar Kuch "Aaj ke Halaat" Aur Kuch "Hum Sab Ki Khamoshi yaa Yeh kahiye Kamzori" Par likhna Chahta Hoon...Padhiyega Zaroor..


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Kahin Par Aag To kahin Par Hai Dhuan Dekhte Raho
Kaisa Bana Hai Aaj Ka  Insaan Dekhte Raho

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Tum Baat Karte Ho Yahan Sirf Insaano Ki.....!!!!!!
Panchi Bhi Hue Hai Yahan Lahoon-Luhaan Dekhte Raho

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Haadson Ne Yahan Sainkdon Ki Jaane Li....!!!!!!
Ab Bhi Band Hai Hum Sab Ki Zubaan Dekhte Raho...

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Bharat Ki Asal Tasveer Uske Chote-Chote Gaon Mein hai!!!
karzon Mein Mar Rahe Hai Yeh Gaon  Ka Kisaan Dekhte Raho

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Desh Ki Unnati Uski nayi peedhi ke Haath Mein Hai!!!!!!
Nashon Mein Dooba hai Aaj ka Jawaan Dekhte Raho

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Imaandari Ki Padhai Kahan Dhoondhne Niklo Ho Janab!!!
Rishwat, Makari Ki hai Yaha Bahut si Dukaan Dekhte Raho

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Rajneeti Ab Sirf "RAJ" Karne Ki "NEETI" Bankar Reh Gayi!!!!
Khulta Hai kab Yeh Saare Raaz-e-Nihaan Dekhte Raho..

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Sone Ki chidiya Kehlaane Wala Desh Aakhir Kahan Hai???
Ab Reh gaya Hai Sirf bankar yeh Ek Nishaan Dekhte Raho

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"Khwaish" Main Yeh Sab Sochkar Akela Kyon pareshaan Rahoon!!!
Jeene Ka Yehi Tareeka Bankar Reh Gaya sabse Asaan Bas Dekhte Raho.....


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                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~







WAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH......WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH...

ISH GHAZAL KI JITNI TAREEF KI JAYE KAM HAI... EKDUM SAHI TASWEER DIKHA DI HAI AAPNE HINDUSTAN KI...
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«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2012, 04:12:57 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2012, 09:08:43 AM »
Yeh Ghazal Likhte Waqt Soch Raha Tha Ke isse Kahan Post Karoon, Kya Yeh Sirf Ek Tanziya Kalaam Hai yaa yeh Ek Aisa Kalaam hai Jo Watan Ke hawaale Hai, Hum Sab Log Chaahe kuch Bhi Ho, Yeh Humesha Garv Se kehte Hai Ke Haan Humara Desh Hindustan Hai Par Kya Yeh Wahi Desh Hai Jo Humare Shaheedo Ne Humein Saumpa Hai..Yaa Kya yeh Wahi Desh Hai Jiski Azaadi ke Liye Humare Buzurgo Ne Bhi Jaan Ki Parwah Naa Karte Hue Bhi Sirf Azaadi ke Liye Ladhte Rahe,Pehle Bhi Issi theme Par Ek kalaam Likhi Thi "Kya Hum Sach Mein Azaad Hai??"
Ke Title Se..Iss Baar Kuch "Aaj ke Halaat" Aur Kuch "Hum Sab Ki Khamoshi yaa Yeh kahiye Kamzori" Par likhna Chahta Hoon...Padhiyega Zaroor..



Kahin Par Aag To kahin Par Hai Dhuan Dekhte Raho
Kaisa Bana Hai Aaj Ka  Insaan Dekhte Raho

Tum Baat Karte Ho Yahan Sirf Insaano Ki.....!!!!!!
Panchi Bhi Hue Hai Yahan Lahoon-Luhaan Dekhte Raho

Haadson Ne Yahan Sainkdon Ki Jaane Li....!!!!!!
Ab Bhi Band Hai Hum Sab Ki Zubaan Dekhte Raho...

Bharat Ki Asal Tasveer Uske Chote-Chote Gaon Mein hai!!!
karzon Mein Mar Rahe Hai Yeh Gaon  Ka Kisaan Dekhte Raho

Desh Ki Unnati Uski nayi peedhi ke Haath Mein Hai!!!!!!
Nashon Mein Dooba hai Aaj ka Jawaan Dekhte Raho

Imaandari Ki Padhai Kahan Dhoondhne Niklo Ho Janab!!!
Rishwat, Makari Ki hai Yaha Bahut si Dukaan Dekhte Raho

Rajneeti Ab Sirf "RAJ" Karne Ki "NEETI" Bankar Reh Gayi!!!!
Khulta Hai kab Yeh Saare Raaz-e-Nihaan Dekhte Raho..

Sone Ki chidiya Kehlaane Wala Desh Aakhir Kahan Hai???
Ab Reh gaya Hai Sirf bankar yeh Ek Nishaan Dekhte Raho

"Khwaish" Main Yeh Sab Sochkar Akela Kyon pareshaan Rahoon!!!
Jeene Ka Yehi Tareeka Bankar Reh Gaya sabse Asaan Bas Dekhte Raho.....


                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~








saare sher ek se badh kar ek...........waaaaaaaaaaah
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«Reply #13 on: January 16, 2012, 05:05:50 AM »
waah waah khwaish ji kamaal kar diya bdhai ho
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