VEER-GAATHA:Shairy-E-Watan

jannatjahan

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Paanv chuye maa ke
gale baap ke ja laga
diya vidaai behno ne
bandha hath me kala dhaga,

kadam badhata aage
dil piche dhakelta tha
phir bhi badhta tha wo aage
par piche kuch chutata tha,

apni gali se nikalte hi
ped ke oat me chipi mili thi
nam aankhon se dekhti thi usko
sard ke dhup si wo khili thi

bahon me bhar ke shish par uske
usne halka chumban dhara tha
"jaldi aaiyao" kaha tha usne
swar me uske kampan bada tha,

dur talak jane par bhi wo
piche mud kar dekh raha tha
lautunga ya nahi in galiyon me
apne aap se puch raha tha

suru ho gayee thi jung
insaan insaan ko kaat rahe the
khun bahate apne bhaiyon ka
dard ek duje ko baant rahe the

wo bhi ho gaya tha saamil
haiwaniyat ke is khel me
jane kaisi ranjeesein nikalte the ve
chand minato ke mel me

lason pe lasein bichti thi
khun ki dhara beh nikli
tha dehsat ka aisa manjar
ruhon ki bhi ruh hili

darjano goliyaan kha kar bhi wo
apni jeed me ada raha
"DHARTI MAA" ki aan bachane
ranbhumi me pada raha

jism ka aakhri khun bhi
usne maa ke naam kiya
anth samay bhi uth kar usne
tirange ko salam kiya

so gaya maa ki god me
wo bharat ratna aanke meeche
khwabon ko band kar mutthi me
chala gaya mutthi bheenche

uski galiyan, maa ka aanchal
baap ki lathi bula rahi thi
aur "DHARTI MAA" laal ko apne
god me rakh kar sula rahi thi


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jasbirsingh

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2009, 03:59:10 PM »

wah jannat, bahut dil koh chu gayi aap yeh kavita, bahut pyare thang sey aap ney bayaan ki hai

jasbir singh


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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2009, 04:25:08 PM »

Wah! Wah! Wah!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Jannat..Sach mein dil ko chuu gayi yeh kavita..


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2009, 08:14:24 PM »

Tumhare is likhe ko Ghayel koti koti pranam karta hain. Aur salam karta hain un Bharat ke Jawano ko jo haste haste apni dharti ma ke liye apni jaan de dete hain, aur hamari hifazat karte hain. Aao hum sab milkar kahe JAI HIND


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2009, 06:35:21 AM »

khubsurat


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deepika_divya

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2009, 10:44:28 AM »

Wah wah Bahoot khoob Janat ji . Super lines with lots of emotions on it.


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jannatjahan

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2009, 10:59:00 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 23, 2009, 08:14:24 PM

Aapki is hausala afjai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ghayal ji "JAI HIND"


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karndhar

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #7 on: March 24, 2009, 11:33:17 AM »

Nice One, Jannat Ji !


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jannatjahan

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #8 on: March 25, 2009, 01:15:07 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on March 23, 2009, 03:59:10 PM

wah jannat, bahut dil koh chu gayi aap yeh kavita, bahut pyare thang sey aap ney bayaan ki hai

jasbir singh

Quote from: khwaish on March 23, 2009, 04:25:08 PM

Wah! Wah! Wah!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Jannat..Sach mein dil ko chuu gayi yeh kavita..

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on March 24, 2009, 06:35:21 AM

khubsurat

Quote from: Sophi on March 24, 2009, 10:44:28 AM

Wah wah Bahoot khoob Janat ji . Super lines with lots of emotions on it.

Quote from: karndhar on March 24, 2009, 11:33:17 AM

Nice One, Jannat Ji !

thanks aap sabhi ka , mujhe yun hi encourage karte rahiye.


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Roja

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #9 on: March 25, 2009, 01:28:25 PM »

Bahut khoob Seema dear


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jannatjahan

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #10 on: March 25, 2009, 01:48:46 PM »

Quote from: Roja on March 25, 2009, 01:28:25 PM

Bahut khoob Seema dear

Thanks dear but i m not seema yaaaaarrrrrrrr


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Roja

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #11 on: March 25, 2009, 02:10:17 PM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on March 25, 2009, 01:48:46 PM

Thanks dear but i m not seema yaaaaarrrrrrrr

Welcome dear..(seema)ooh nahi nahi... Jaanat ... tongue3


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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #12 on: March 31, 2009, 06:12:24 AM »

bahoot bahoot khoob likha hai aapne ek foji kee vidaayee par ghar walo kee bhavnaao ko bakhoobee pesh kiyaa hai.....

netra.....

de deti hai vidayee koi apne hee laal ko
muskaraa kar chipa leti hai ansuon ko

ek maa ko chod gyaa uskaa wo laal koi
chal pada karj chukaane ek mahaan koi

wo ayegaa lot kar yaa saheed ho jayegaa
apnee shadaahat ko wo yaad dilaayegaa
bhool jayenge sab us anjaan ko, kyaa...
Maa kee kurbaanee ko kya koi yad kar payegaa?

netra..


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jannatjahan

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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2009, 01:36:02 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on March 31, 2009, 06:12:24 AM

Thanks netra ji....

sahi likha hai aapne koi un maaon ki kurbaniyon ko yaad nahi rakhta...

kyun bhul jate hain sab wo khuni manjar
kya dil nahi rah gaya insano ke ander ??


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Re: VEER-GAATHA

«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2009, 02:09:46 PM »

Subhan Allah, Subahn Allah, Kya Khoob Likha Hai jannat Jahana Ji,.
And Nice Netra Bhai,.


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