Yun hi nahi toh duniya ka chehra hain mera desh

by livingbytheday on August 15, 2012, 04:04:23 AM
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Bahut si hasraton mein duba aur ubhra hai  mera desh
Bahut naazuk se ek mod par tehraa hai mera desh
Hai itna khoobsurat dekhe koi toh pyar ho jaaye
Yun hi nahi toh duniya ka chehra hain mera desh

Bhagat ki, chandashekar ki, sukhdev  ki aankhein
Aisey maati ke laalo ka, pehraa hain mera desh

Abhi bhi dekh sakte ho, yahaan itihaas hain zinda
Nishaani hur kahaani ki, bahut gehraa hain mera desh

Hain devo ki yahi bhoomi, hain peero ki yahi bhoomi
Farishtey dekh dekh bole, sunehraa hain mera desh

teerange ko laga kameez mein nahi ghumtaa “Deepak”
Badan se duur meri ruuh par lehraa hai mera desh

-- Deepak Srivastava
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2012, 04:09:00 AM »
DEEPAK JI kya khoob likha aapne...... bahut hi khoob dherosalaam aur dhero daad...
Quote from: livingbytheday on August 15, 2012, 04:04:23 AM

teerange ko laga kameez mein nahi ghumtaa “Deepak”
Badan se duur meri ruuh par lehraa hai mera desh



aapke is sher ke liye  lakhon salaam deepk ji aur ek rau bhi dena chahta hoon par mafi chahunga aaj nahi de pa raha kyunki pehle hi nandbahu ji ko de dia.....par aapke liye  ek cadbury hai aur rau kalde denge itne khubsurat qalam ke liye..

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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2012, 05:14:38 AM »
yaqeenan yaqeenan bahut khoobsoorat kalaam hai deepak ji keep it up dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2012, 08:05:03 AM »
Bahut umda kalaam Deepak jee
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2012, 10:25:27 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khooooob!!!!

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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2012, 03:46:26 PM »
Quote from: soudagar on August 15, 2012, 04:09:00 AM
DEEPAK JI kya khoob likha aapne...... bahut hi khoob dherosalaam aur dhero daad...

aapke is sher ke liye  lakhon salaam deepk ji aur ek rau bhi dena chahta hoon par mafi chahunga aaj nahi de pa raha kyunki pehle hi nandbahu ji ko de dia.....par aapke liye  ek cadbury hai aur rau kalde denge itne khubsurat qalam ke liye..

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soudagar ji, bahut bahut shukriyaa is izzat ka, ha desh ke liye dil mein aseemit zazbe hain...

bahut se hasraton ke beech yeh hasrat bhi hain dil mein
kisi din badan mera bhi saj kar aaye teerange mein

thank you for all the respect.
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«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2012, 03:51:59 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on August 15, 2012, 05:14:38 AM
yaqeenan yaqeenan bahut khoobsoorat kalaam hai deepak ji keep it up dheron daad

thank you saini sir
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«Reply #7 on: August 15, 2012, 03:53:11 PM »
Quote from: mkv on August 15, 2012, 08:05:03 AM
Bahut umda kalaam Deepak jee
Applause Applause Applause
Post ke saath apna naam suffix kar denge to accha rahega.


thank you sir, maine apna name suffix kar diya hain, suggestion ke liye shukriyaa
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«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2012, 03:58:28 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on August 15, 2012, 10:25:27 AM
Bahut Bahut Khooooob!!!!

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bahut shukriyaa
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