BIN BEDI BANDHAN KAISA.............MAMTA

by mamta bajpai on June 05, 2010, 06:07:38 AM
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BIN BEDI BANDHAN KAISA
SAANS SAANS CHANDAN KAISA

RAAG BIHAAG SAB MOUN HUE
MANN HUA MRIDANG KAISA

ANKHIYAN AANSOO KI DHAR BAHE
DHADKAN ME SPANDAN KAISA

PAAT BIRHA KE TOOT GAYE
MANN HUA UPVAN KAISA


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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2010, 07:18:41 AM »
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Mamta ji  aapne itni khoobsurat kavita likhi hai ki mujhe shabd nahi mil rahe hain taarif ke liye... bas itna kahunga ki yunhi likhte rahiye....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2010, 10:11:03 AM »
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Dhanyawaad Klaskarji!bas jab kabhi ahsas seene me dabe paaon sar uthate hain qalam khud b khud gungunane ko machal uthati hai.aapne padha or saraha ,bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2010, 10:17:25 AM »
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Bahut sundar peshkash hai Mamta Ji
Bas yun hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2010, 01:41:52 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Mamtaji..

bahut Hi khoobsurat Kavita Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2010, 01:43:56 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB MAMTA JI.. BAHUT BAHUT HI KHOOB... AUR KUCH KEH HI NAHI PA RAHA HU BUSS YEHI... BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB...WAH WAH



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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2010, 04:57:53 PM »
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wah mamta saheba bahoth qoob , bada gahera sunch leti hain ,, dad hazir hain qubool karen ..waise ap ke eak sher pada tha bada qubool laga ,, ap hazir dimaq maloom hoti hai .. ap ke sher shayad khuch is tarhan tha ..

Dahek Rahi thi Jo aag tone hai usse Bujha-e !!
Kya dil tak bhi Mumkin hai Damkal Teri Rasa-e- !! wah bahoth qoob hai

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dil , damkal , aur rasai ka qoob istemaal kiya hai ..dad

Khush rahen muskurate rahen ,, zoor a qalam aur ziyada


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«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2010, 11:19:07 PM »
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QADEER SAHEB AAP JIS SHAIR KI BAAT KAR RAHE HAIN WO KUCH IS TARAH THA.........

DAHAK RAHE HAIN SHOLE THODI BHI BUJH NA PAAYEE
KYA DIL KO TASALLI DEGI DAMKAL TERI RASAI

MAGAR AAPNE JO IS SHER KI ISSLAH KI HAI WO QABIL E TAREEF HAI.AAPNE IS SHAIR KO JIS TARAH KHOOBSOORAT BANA DIYA WO LAJAWAB HAI.AAGE BHI AAP ISI TARAH MERE QALAAM PAR GOUR FARMAYENGE .ISI UMMEED KE SAATH....

MAMTA BAJPAI
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«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2010, 11:20:32 PM »
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JASBIR SINGJI BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA...
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2010, 03:50:54 AM »
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KHWAISHJI AAP KA BEHAD SHUKRIYA.WAQT WAQT PAR KI GAYEE HOUSLA AFZAI NIT NAYE QALAAM KO LIKHNE KE LIYE PRERIT KARTI HAI .THANKS A LOT .
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2010, 03:52:08 AM »
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RAJESHJI BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA!
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2010, 04:22:04 AM »
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U R Always Welcome Mamta Ji
Ek koshish hai meri

Bina be.di hota hai pyaar ka bandhan
Swaans ko thandak deta hai chandan
Hota hai halchal aur maun mein jang
Tab bajta hai mann mein ye mridang
Dukh se jab ye ankhiyan bojhal hoye
Tab dha.dkan mein bhi spandan aaye
Jab birha ka path duur ojhal ho jaaye
Tab mann upvan sa har or fael jaaye

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«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2010, 06:50:40 AM »
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RAJESH JI SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL RESPONSE!!!!!!CANT IMEGIN.
KYAAA KAHON AAJ BOLTI BAND SI HO GAYEE HAI .ANTARMANN KE KIS CHOR KO PAKAD KAR MERE HI SAAMNE LE AAYE. MANN KA KOI KONA NAHI JO AAP SE POSHEEDA RAH PAYA HO.EXCELLENT!!!!!HAR KAISA KA AISA UTTER.NOBODY CAN GIVE ME SUCH A WONDERFUL REACTION.THANKS A LOT...........
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«Reply #13 on: June 06, 2010, 10:40:06 PM »
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bahut khoob mamta saheba.maza agaya,aap ka shukriya aapne mujhe hindi ke khathin lafzaon ko samjhne main madad farmai.meine un khathin lafzaon ke meaning likh diye hain,mujh jaise hindi ki kam ilmi rakhne waalaon ke liye aasani hogi.
BIN BEDI BANDHAN KAISA
SAANS SAANS CHANDAN KAISA

RAAG BIHAAG SAB MOUN HUE      moun=chupchap,silent
MANN HUA MRIDANG KAISA        mridang=a type of instrument

ANKHIYAN AANSOO KI DHAR BAHE     
DHADKAN ME SPANDAN KAISA       spandan=vibration

PAAT BIRHA KE TOOT GAYE        paat=leaves, birha=sapretion
MANN HUA UPVAN KAISA           upvan=garden



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«Reply #14 on: June 07, 2010, 12:00:43 AM »
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BAHUT KHUB MAMTA G AUR RAJESH HARISH G
SIR ITNA HE KAH SAKTA HU
HUM SE NA PUCH GAZEL KAISI HAI
DONO NEHLE PE DEHLE JAISI HAI
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