Dil kahi hosh kahi rehta hai aajkal

by Sky Blue on April 14, 2010, 12:03:15 PM
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Dil kahi hosh kahi rehta hai aajkal
Har waqt khafa khafa rehta hai aajkal
Tum chhu lo to ye yakin aa jayega
Ke mujhme bhi koi rehta hai aajkal

Tanha phele bhi tha lekin tanhai na thi
Ruswa sab se tha lekin ruswai na thi
Jane kya mil gya hai muje
Dil bahra bahra rehta hai aajkal
Dil kahi hosh kahi rehta hai aaj kal

Ankh nam, sanse thami si hai
Zindagi me jane kya kami si hai
Kis se kahu, par kya kahu
Yahi soch kar dara dara sa rehta hai aajkal
Dil kahi hosh kahi rehta hai aajkal.


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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2010, 12:12:59 PM »
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waah bahut hi umda sky ji...
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2010, 06:53:47 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne. Bahut hi sundarta se aapne ehsaason ko shabdon ki maala me piroya hai. Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2010, 09:32:54 PM »
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Agli baar aap koi sharing work post kare to please Not Mine likh diya kare...........aur monitors se yeh guzarish hai ke woh is baat par thoda dhiyaan de. Pehle hamesha ek particular monitors is baat ka bohat khayaal rakhti thi aur fauran necessary steps le liya karti thi.

Yoindia par hamesha is baat par khaas dhiyaan diya gaya hai.....aur meri guzarish hai ke us meyaar ko kayem rakha jaye.
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2010, 07:46:36 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2010, 10:04:24 AM »
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Bahot achhi acreaton hai Sky Blue ji.
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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2010, 07:39:58 PM »
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Agli baar aap koi sharing work post kare to please Not Mine likh diya kare...........aur monitors se yeh guzarish hai ke woh is baat par thoda dhiyaan de. Pehle hamesha ek particular monitors is baat ka bohat khayaal rakhti thi aur fauran necessary steps le liya karti thi.

Yoindia par hamesha is baat par khaas dhiyaan diya gaya hai.....aur meri guzarish hai ke us meyaar ko kayem rakha jaye.

Nafseeyati ji jaisa ki maine apko pehle bhi kaha hai ki agar apko koi bhi baat kisi member se kehni hai jaise yoindia k rules k baare mein  ya koi aur information tou aap pehle monitors ya admin ko contact kare....i hope agli baar se aap dhyan rakhenge...

Thnx...
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2010, 09:33:09 PM »
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Nafseeyati ji jaisa ki maine apko pehle bhi kaha hai ki agar apko koi bhi baat kisi member se kehni hai jaise yoindia k rules k baare mein  ya koi aur information tou aap pehle monitors ya admin ko contact kare....i hope agli baar se aap dhyan rakhenge...

Thnx...

Badi ajeeb baat hai aap saaf taur par dekh rahi hai ke meri ab 30 post nahi hui hai aur main kisi ko PM nahi kar sakta. Aur jaha tak kisi ko not mine likhne ke liye kehne ki baat to yeh har member ki zimmedari hai ke aisi koi shring work wali thread nazar aaye to fauran Not Mine likhne ke liye kaha jaye. Yoindia mere liye koi naya nahi apni zindagi ka kaiee din maine bhi diye hai.......

Aur jaha tak is thread ki baat hai sabse pehle aap hi ne daad di thi Sky blue ko aur mere informed karne ke bavjood phir Riyaz jee ne bhi daad di, jab do do monitors itni badi galti karte hai aur koi member is koshish me laga hai ke kisi tarah Yoindia me aisa koi kaam na ho jo uske meyaar ke khilaaf hai to us member ko warning di jati hai ke "Agli baar aisa na ho"

Khair jane de shayed galti meri hi hai.........mujhe samajhna chahiye ke ab sabkuch badal chuka hai Yoindia par.....

Khair mere pass itna waqt nahi hai ke main monitors ka kaam karu aur unhe ek ek baat ki khabar karata rahu, maine apne taur par koshish karne ki koshish ki thi par shayed ise aapne personally le liya hai. Monitor banna sirf ek title hasil karna nahi hai yeh ek bohat badi zimmedari hai agar aap is zimmedari ko uthane ke liye taiyaar nahi hai to behtar hai yeh kaam kisi behtar shaks ke hatho me jane de jo achche kamo par apni tareef se bache aur galtiyo par aage badhkar zimmedari le.

Allah hum sabko sach kehne ki sach sunne ki taufeek de, shayed is comment ke baad aap koshish kare ke main banned ho jaoo. To banned hona mere liye koi nayee baat nahi hai......mujhe ab aadat ho chuki hai.
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2010, 11:13:33 PM »
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Good one SB Ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2010, 08:04:55 AM »
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Agli baar aap koi sharing work post kare to please Not Mine likh diya kare...........aur monitors se yeh guzarish hai ke woh is baat par thoda dhiyaan de. Pehle hamesha ek particular monitors is baat ka bohat khayaal rakhti thi aur fauran necessary steps le liya karti thi.

Yoindia par hamesha is baat par khaas dhiyaan diya gaya hai.....aur meri guzarish hai ke us meyaar ko kayem rakha jaye.

Nafseeyati Ji  !
Hum nay bhi kab kaha yay humari hai.
yay hume pasan aaya isliyay hum nay post ki.
par haan ! aap ki baat bhi sahi hai k agli baar " NOT MINE " likh diya karuun.
par joe baat brokenluv Ji nay kaha woh bhi teo sahi hai.
nahi kya?Huh???  icon_scratch
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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2010, 09:51:37 AM »
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Main poori tarah sehmat hoon Sky Blue ji se. Aur Geet ji ne bhi bilkul sahi kaha hai. Aur rahi baat PM bhejne ki. Uske liye 30 posts banana koi bahut badi baat nahi hai. Burai ya kami nikalne ki jagah agar 30 posts me aap wah wah bhi likh dete hain to poore ho jayenge. Uske baad apni ichcha anusaar PM bhej sakte hain. But only in that case ki jise bhejen use koi problem na ho.
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«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2010, 11:29:21 AM »
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Badi ajeeb baat hai aap saaf taur par dekh rahi hai ke meri ab 30 post nahi hui hai aur main kisi ko PM nahi kar sakta. Aur jaha tak kisi ko not mine likhne ke liye kehne ki baat to yeh har member ki zimmedari hai ke aisi koi shring work wali thread nazar aaye to fauran Not Mine likhne ke liye kaha jaye. Yoindia mere liye koi naya nahi apni zindagi ka kaiee din maine bhi diye hai.......

Aur jaha tak is thread ki baat hai sabse pehle aap hi ne daad di thi Sky blue ko aur mere informed karne ke bavjood phir Riyaz jee ne bhi daad di, jab do do monitors itni badi galti karte hai aur koi member is koshish me laga hai ke kisi tarah Yoindia me aisa koi kaam na ho jo uske meyaar ke khilaaf hai to us member ko warning di jati hai ke "Agli baar aisa na ho"

Khair jane de shayed galti meri hi hai.........mujhe samajhna chahiye ke ab sabkuch badal chuka hai Yoindia par.....

Khair mere pass itna waqt nahi hai ke main monitors ka kaam karu aur unhe ek ek baat ki khabar karata rahu, maine apne taur par koshish karne ki koshish ki thi par shayed ise aapne personally le liya hai. Monitor banna sirf ek title hasil karna nahi hai yeh ek bohat badi zimmedari hai agar aap is zimmedari ko uthane ke liye taiyaar nahi hai to behtar hai yeh kaam kisi behtar shaks ke hatho me jane de jo achche kamo par apni tareef se bache aur galtiyo par aage badhkar zimmedari le.

Allah hum sabko sach kehne ki sach sunne ki taufeek de, shayed is comment ke baad aap koshish kare ke main banned ho jaoo. To banned hona mere liye koi nayee baat nahi hai......mujhe ab aadat ho chuki hai.

Bahut bahut shukriya sky blue ji n kapil i...

Nafseeyati ji jaisa ki aap apni post ki baat kar rahe hai ki aap pm nhi kar sakte tou agar apko comment hi likhna hai tou aap monitors se request hai ki vo member ko inform kar de aese bhi tou likh sakte the...aur jahan tak aap merri montorship pe ungliya utha rahe hai tou jahan aap jaise members ho wahan monitors ki koi zarurat mujhe nhi lagti hai..jab aap pehle bhi galti kar k bann ho chuke hai tou dobara aesi galtiya kyun kar rahe hai...hum monitors yahan apne kaam k liye hai na ki kisi member ko bann karwane k liye ya uski image yoindia mein kaharab karne k liye hai,jahan tak aap sach ki baat kar rahe hai tou vo aapke iss reply se saaf zaahir hai ki aap kitni himaat rakhte hai sach sunne ki...baaki insaan ki soch uske likhne se zaahir ho jati hai...khair aage se aap iss baat ka poora dhyan de ki aap monitors k kaam k beech naa aye...aap ek shayar hai aur main bhi ek shayara hu har kisi ki izzat karna janti hu...

YOINDIA MONITOR!

Thanx!
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«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2010, 11:57:31 AM »
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bhut shan dar likha hai apne or abhivyakti shandar hai .....laga jese mere hi bhawon ko apne uker deya hai ver nice gud
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