Ghata si = ghazal

by saahill on January 10, 2011, 11:01:09 AM
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Bikhraake julfein na aana bahar ghata si dhoop mein ccha jayegi, 
Na chalna tum kahin bal khaake mere sanam hawa chaltey chaltey tham jayegi        SUna hai raat ki khamoshi bhi karti hain baatein ,suna hai raat ki khamoshi karti hai baatein  , 
Tere dil ki dadhkan ko sunkar khamoshi toot jayegi

Teri sanson ki khushboo se mehkaa hai mera dil ,teri sanson ki khushboo se mehka hai mera dil,
Jo bas jao mere dil mein to bahaar dil ke angan mein aa jayegi

Bikhraake julfein na baahar aana ghata si ccha jaye
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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2011, 07:21:23 PM »
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Saahil ji bahut achhi kavita hai. thoda sa enline aur kar dete to aur  achha lagata Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bikhraake julfein na aana bahar ghata si dhoop mein ccha jayegi,  
Na chalna tum kahin bal khaake mere sanam hawa chaltey chaltey tham jayegi        SUna hai raat ki khamoshi bhi karti hain baatein ,suna hai raat ki khamoshi karti hai baatein  ,  
Tere dil ki dadhkan ko sunkar khamoshi toot jayegi

Teri sanson ki khushboo se mehkaa hai mera dil ,teri sanson ki khushboo se mehka hai mera dil,
Jo bas jao mere dil mein to bahaar dil ke angan mein aa jayegi

Bikhraake julfein na baahar aana ghata si ccha jaye
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bahut khub
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2013, 05:00:45 PM »
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thx suresh ji
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