intzaar

by saahill on November 30, 2009, 11:13:04 AM
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karta hoon har pal tera intzaar ,
jo tum aao to mukamil ho mera intzaar
phir bhi hum apna farz nibhyange
teri chahat mein sur ko jhukyange
tere intzaar mein kuch pal to kya
hum saaru umar bhi bitayenge
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2009, 12:30:14 PM »
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You have created nice poem. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2009, 06:23:11 AM »
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karta hoon har pal tera intzaar ,
jo tum aao to mukamil ho mera intzaar
phir bhi hum apna farz nibhyange
teri chahat mein sur ko jhukyange
tere intzaar mein kuch pal to kya
hum saaru umar bhi bitayenge
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2009, 06:36:50 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Saahill Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2009, 07:20:43 AM »
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Bahut achhi poetry hai Sahil ji aapki. Thanks for sharing.
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2009, 07:33:09 AM »
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Bahut khoob Saahill ji very beautiful creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2009, 06:39:52 AM »
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Nice
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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2011, 01:28:01 PM »
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thx madhuvesh ji rishi ji
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