MEHASOOS

by sananu on March 19, 2010, 08:30:17 AM
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KUCH PAL KE LIYE SAHI JO KHUSHI MUJHE MILI TUJHE DEKKAR
US KHUSHI KO MEHASOOS KARTE DEKH RAHA TA CHAND KO ACHANAK SURAJ AAYA NIKALKAR
PHIR DEKHA PANCHIYO KO JAATE HUVE AASMA KE TARAF UDKAR
UNSE KAHA MERI DHOOVA US TAK PAVUNCHAVO AUR LOUTE HUVE LANA MERE PYAR KO USSE MANGKAR
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Nice creation Sananu ji. Poem ki lines agar zara chhoti choti hoti to aur bhi khoobsurat ban sakti thin. Phir bhi achhi koshish ki hai.
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