sangini

by apriya on December 14, 2010, 01:36:36 AM
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aapni hado se aage tujhe le jau mai
bhul jaye tu ye jahaa aaj
aa aaj tujhe
apni palko ke saamiyane me chhupau mai
 
todkar saari bandisho ko aaj fir
toot kar chahu tujhe mai
tujhe utar jaane du dil me apne
aateri aankho me doob jau mai

mit jayeye duriya aaj
tere itne kareeb aa jau mai
ban jau aaj mai tera...
aa tujhe apni sangini banau mai....
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2010, 04:14:15 AM »
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so romantic full of love.......bht khub apriya ji.....
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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2010, 05:07:02 AM »
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wah Chhote---
bahut khub--
tera pyar tujhe naseeb ho jaye yahi dua hai rab se
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2010, 08:48:22 AM »
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good lines

chaho itna apne mehboob ko ke chahat ko bhi jalan ho jaye
nibhaao itna ke waayde ko bhi khud par ghuroor ho jaye
mehssoos karo itna ke nashe ko bhi sroor ho jaye
peeyo itna ankhon se ke maihkhaane bhi naachne ko mazboor ho jaye
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katra katra peene ko mazboor ho jaye
karo pyar itna ke har pal paas rehne ko mazboor ho jaye
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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2010, 09:12:15 AM »
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gud reply saahil ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2010, 09:37:18 AM »
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THX KASAK JI
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2010, 09:55:00 AM »
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thnxx a lot to u all......bahut bahut shukriyaaaplogo ka itne achchhe comments dene ke liye.....bhaijee ghazal lekhan ke baare me kuchh bataye mai apni kalam ko aajmana chahta hu.....
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2010, 06:18:41 PM »
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Bahut khoob Anand Ji
N Nice response Saahill Ji
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