tere sang jeena chahta hu mai............

by apriya on December 14, 2010, 12:31:30 AM
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tere sang likhi apni umra ko jeena chahta hu mai
apni kismat ko ekbaar aajmana chahta hu mai
khwabo me jee bhar kar chaha hai tujhko
par aaj chahat se aage jaana chahta hu mai
teri gesuo ki lato ko suljhana chahta hu mai
teri har uljhan se ulajhna chahta hu mai
tere khwabo me basna hai mujhe
tujhe palko me chhupana chahta hu mai
tujhe pakar khone ke ek ehsaas se darta hu mai
fir bhi tujhe apna banana chahta hu mai
tu bhi kisi ki deewani ho sakti hai
is baat ka andesha hai mujhko
par aaj naseeb se takrana chahta hu mai
tujhse kiya har khaamosh wade ko
ab nibhana chahta hu mai
jaagti aankho se maine jo chand khwab dekhe the
har us khwab ko jeena chahta hu mai
tere kangan ki khanak se har subah jaagna chahta hu mai
tere maathe pe suraj sajana chahta hu mai
tere sang khwabo me bitayi
ek shaam ka sar kuchh yu hua mujhpar
ki tere sang jeevan bitana chahta hu mai
apno ki khaatir bahut mar chuka mai
apni khaatir tere sang jeena chahta hu mai
tujhko paane ki khaatir
har bandhan todna chahta hu mai
jaat paat ki ochhi deewar se is jag ko
upar uthana chahta hu mai
nihswarth prem ko is duniya ka
mul mantra banana chahta hu mai
har dil me pyar ka alakh jagana chahta hu mai
tere pyar ki khaatir aaj
apne junoon se aage jaana chahta hu mai
jeevan se pare tere pyar ki chhao me jeena chahta hu mai.........
kya tum dogi mera saath is safar me.....
bas aaj ye janna chahta hu mai......
ANAND KUMAR"APRIYA"
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2010, 12:34:42 AM »
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aap sabo ko mera namaskar.....
ye maine apne prem ke ijhaar ke lliye likha hai aur chahunga ki aap isme kuchh sudhaar kare apni apni tippani de....             lyf me dusi baar koi dil ko is kadar bhaya hai
ek arse baad koi yu kareeb aaya hai.....
bas yu samajh lo aap ki
aapka ye chhpotu fir baukhlaya hai.......
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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2010, 12:42:45 AM »
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Wow marvlous creation apriya ji .bahut hi khoob.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2010, 12:48:03 AM »
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Bahut hi umda peshkash hai aap ki Anand Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2010, 12:56:16 AM »
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mai chahta hu ki aaplog bataye agar isme kahi sudhar ki koi gunjaish hai to.....
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2010, 01:17:44 AM »
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wah wah chhote----
bahut umda likha yar nice..
bahut pyari kavita hai:)
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2010, 01:20:31 AM »
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bhaijee sudhaar ki koi gunjaaish ho to bataye.....darasal wo brahmin hai and mai OBc category se hu..so jaat paat ki baat bhi likhi hai maine bas ab use ye kavita mail karni hai.....dekhta hu kya jawaab aayega....par usse pahle mai chahta hu ki aaplog kuchh sudhaar dete to shayad..........
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2010, 01:29:03 PM »
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good one apriya ji~

likhte rahiye`
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2011, 08:59:02 AM »
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heart touching..................
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«Reply #9 on: November 22, 2011, 02:55:27 PM »
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apriya ji sudhar ki gunjaish to bahut hain par jagah aapko khud banani hogi..likhte rahiye.....sudhar apne aap hota hai.....
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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2015, 01:32:44 PM »
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आपको बेहद बेहद धन्यवाद !! एसा लगता है की आपके द्वारा लिखी गयी हर एक पंक्ति मुझे मेरे अपने जज्बात सी लगती है.... Applause Applause love9 love4
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