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by AVTAR RAYAT on December 01, 2009, 09:22:40 AM
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Waise To Likhne Ko Kya Nahi Likha Maine
Phir Bhi Jitna Tujhe Chaha Nahi Likha Maine,
Mujhse Bahut Honge Zamane Me Likhne Waale,
Shayad Jaise Sab Likhte Hai Waisa Nahi Likha Maine,
Mere Har Lafz Mein Tere Liye Be-Intha Pyar hai,
Main Gunehgaar Hu Gar Bhool Se Tera Pyar Nahi Likha Maine,
Maine Apna Pyar Har Fiqre Mein Khushboo Ki Tareh Mehkaya Hai,
Maaf Karna Mere Sartaz Agar Bhool Se Kuchh Nahi Likha Maine.
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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2009, 11:05:02 AM »
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Excellent,mindblowing creation Avtar ji,hmm likha toh bahut kuch par dosto se unka naam chupaye rakha. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2009, 11:21:29 AM »
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Thanx Madhu Ji,,,,,
Waise Un Ka naam "Laveena" Hai...
Jo Sirf Ek Sapna Ban Ke Reh Gaye,,,
Sirf Unhi Ke Liye Likhte Rehte
Hein...Likhte Raheinge,,,
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2009, 11:25:17 AM »
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Dont worry woh zaroor aapko milega ek din Avtar ji,God bless you n Laveena ji. sad7
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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2009, 12:05:32 PM »
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Waise To Likhne Ko Kya Nahi Likha Maine
Phir Bhi Jitna Tujhe Chaha Nahi Likha Maine,
Mujhse Bahut Honge Zamane Me Likhne Waale,
Shayad Jaise Sab Likhte Hai Waisa Nahi Likha Maine,
Mere Har Lafz Mein Tere Liye Be-Intha Pyar hai,
Main Gunehgaar Hu Gar Bhool Se Tera Pyar Nahi Likha Maine,
Maine Apna Pyar Har Fiqre Mein Khushboo Ki Tareh Mehkaya Hai,
Maaf Karna Mere Sartaz Agar Bhool Se Kuchh Nahi Likha Maine.


Bahut hi achchha peshkash hai Avtar Ji
Bhagwaan se binti karta hun ki jis ke liye
aap likhte hain woh aap ko mil jaye
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2009, 01:17:23 PM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Aapne Avtar Ji Nice creation
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2009, 01:20:11 PM »
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Shukria RISHI JI,,,,
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