***Teri Judaayi Mein***

by AVTAR RAYAT on June 19, 2010, 03:40:42 AM
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Aye Sanam,,,

Tume Yakin Nahi Hai To...
Padh Lo Dil Ke Panno Ko,
Kyo Ke Is Dil Ko Har Waqt...
Tumhara Hi Intezar Rehta Hai,

Main Kisi Aur Ko Kaise...
Shaamil Karu Apni Saanso Mein,
Kyo Ke Meri Har Dhadkan Par Sirf...
Tumhara Hi Adhikaar Rehta Hai,

Maana Ki Tum Nahi Mil Sakte...
Mujhe Is Janam Mein,
Fir Bhi Tere Jhuthe Izhaar Se...
Mere Dil Ko Qraar Rehta Hai,

Teri Judaayi Mein Is Tarah...
Humare Aansu Tapkte Hein,
Jaise Barso Se In Aankho Se...
Kisi Jharne Ka Fauhaar Behta Hai,

Teri Yaado Ko Ek Pal Bhi...
Juda Nahi Kar Sakte Apne Se,
Kyoki..Mere Khoon Ke Har Katre Mein...
Tere Pyar Ka Shumaar Rehta Hai,

Aye Jaan...Mere Jinda Rehte-Rehte
Bas..Ek Bar Aakar Mujhe Mil Jaayo...
Kyoki...
In Saanso Ke Taar Kab Toot Jayein...
Humein Ab Aitbar Nahi Rehta Hai...!!!!

AVTAR RAYAT
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2010, 07:14:18 AM »
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Aapke dil k panne to bilkul sacche hai but jis k liye likhe hai unko ye panne padaye bhi hai ya nahi
ho sake to khuda k liye unhe mat padana nahi to unhe ehsas to hoga lekin sath main dukh bhi bahut hi jyada hoga ki unke liye aap itne dukhi ho or wo cah kar bhi kuch nahi kar paa rahi hai.

hm khuda se dua karenge ki ye pal aapki zindagi main kabhi na aaye ki aapko itna yakin dilana pade unhe or agar ye pal ho to dua karenge ki jald se jald aap ko unka sath mil jaye.
sach bahut hi khub likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2010, 07:20:52 AM »
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aapki yeh dard bhari dastaan humein bahut achchi lagi...  dil ki gehraiyon tak utar gayi... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Avtar ji... bahut khoob... bahut hi umda... lajawaab...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2010, 12:47:39 AM »
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    Nice one A_R ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2010, 08:08:51 AM »
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Aapke dil k panne to bilkul sacche hai but jis k liye likhe hai unko ye panne padaye bhi hai ya nahi
ho sake to khuda k liye unhe mat padana nahi to unhe ehsas to hoga lekin sath main dukh bhi bahut hi jyada hoga ki unke liye aap itne dukhi ho or wo cah kar bhi kuch nahi kar paa rahi hai.

hm khuda se dua karenge ki ye pal aapki zindagi main kabhi na aaye ki aapko itna yakin dilana pade unhe or agar ye pal ho to dua karenge ki jald se jald aap ko unka sath mil jaye.
sach bahut hi khub likha hai aapne.


Aapka Bahut-Bahut Shukriya....Nishika Ji.....
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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2010, 08:10:52 AM »
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aapki yeh dard bhari dastaan humein bahut achchi lagi...  dil ki gehraiyon tak utar gayi... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Avtar ji... bahut khoob... bahut hi umda... lajawaab...!!!

Aapka Bahut-Bahut Shukriya....Klaskar Ji.....
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2010, 09:03:05 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Avtar ji,very touching and mindblowing creation.excellent Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2010, 03:03:12 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Avtar ji,very touching and mindblowing creation.excellent Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut-Bahut Shukria Madhu Ji..Thanx,,,
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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2010, 03:05:24 AM »
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    Nice one A_R ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapka Bahut-Bahut Shukria Tamanna Ji..Thanx,,,
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