KAMYABI

by BANSI DHAMEJA on June 03, 2012, 10:38:57 PM
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LAHRON SE DAR KAR NAUKA PAR NAHIN HOTI
HAUSLON WALON KI KABHI HAR NAHIN HOTI
MUSHKION SE KABHI NA GHABRABA MERE DOST
KAMYABI KABHI AASANI SE HASIL NAIN HOTI
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2012, 10:41:37 PM »
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wah wah wah .. kya baat hai... wah wah .. bahut hi khoob

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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2012, 11:13:01 PM »
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JASBIR SINGH JI BAHUT BAHUT SHKRIYA HAUSLA AFZAHI KA
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2012, 11:17:52 PM »
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sir, aap likhtey rahiye ... chahaney waley bahut hai yaha ... gila na karna, gar koi comment na karey ... par har koi padd kar wah wah jarur karta hai ... toh aap apna pyara sa shok paaltey rahiyeh aur hamey apni pyari rachnao sey nawaaztey rahiyeh .....
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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2012, 11:34:21 PM »
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AAP JAISE DOSTON NE MERA HAUSALA BARHYA HAI
KUCHH KUCHH LIKHNE KE KABIL BANAYA HAI
JAB TARIF KARTE HAIN TO ACHHA LAGAT HAI
SHAYAD ISLYE HIMUJH SE KUCHH LIKHA JATA HAI
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2012, 11:38:24 PM »
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LIKHNEY KI ADA AAP KI BADI NIRALI HAI
PADD KAR SAB KI WAH WAH HI NIKALNEY WALI HAI
AAP ISI TARAH LIKHTEY JAYIYEH HAJOOR
TALIYOH KI GOONG SEY AAP KI SHOBHA HONEY WALI HAI ...

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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2012, 09:21:22 AM »
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Priya Bansi dhameja ji ab in chaar panktiyon ke bhaaw ko agar dekhoon to laajwab lekin agar technique ko dekhoon to ise kyaa kahoon ye qataa yaani ki muktak naheen hai kyonki 4th line men bhee haar ,paar jaisaa hee koi word honaa chahiye to bhaaw kee drishtee se utaam lekin grammar kehisaab se ye mujhepasand naheen hain plz dhyaan de
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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2012, 10:21:31 AM »
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Saini ji aap ka bahut bahut shukriya. Ap ke suggestions hi mujhe aur achha likhna sikhayenge. Thanks
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«Reply #8 on: June 04, 2012, 10:24:11 AM »
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Jasbir Singh ji:
KUCHH KUCHH LIKHNE KI KOSHISH KARTA HUN  MAIN
AAP KA SAATH RAHA TO AUR BHI ACHHA LIKH PAUNGA MAIN
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«Reply #9 on: June 05, 2012, 12:52:58 AM »
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bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 05, 2012, 09:43:24 AM »
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hirday ji thanks
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