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by bekarar on January 16, 2011, 07:35:52 PM
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Zindagi bhar wahi khata karta raha...
Chehre par dhool thee... Aina saaf karta raha...

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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2011, 08:52:50 PM »
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Zindagi bhar wahi khata karta raha...
Chehre par dhool thee... Aina saaf karta raha...

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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2011, 01:57:01 AM »
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bahut hi lajawaab sharing Beqaraar ji.
sukriya share krne ke liye.
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2011, 03:54:31 AM »
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@Azeem, bilkul thik bhai azeem mujhe ye sher bahoot achcha laga, to maine soch share kar lun..aur faraz sahab ka to har sher apne aap me poori kitaab hota hai..bahoot khoob
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2011, 03:56:22 AM »
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@KB,
tum bhi kuch share karte "two liner"
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«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2011, 04:46:35 AM »
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Hmm Bekaraar Bhai ji aapne kaha to kuch kosis kar li mene --
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---Aaj mere alfazon ko taulte hain wahi
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2011, 04:52:27 AM »
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wahhhh bht pyara sher hain bekaraar ji and azeem ji aapka....

KB mastam from ur side too...

aaine ka kya kasoor ye to sach dikhata hai
chehra hi daagdaar tha tasveer saaf kaise dikhti....
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2011, 05:00:41 AM »
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waoooo oooooo Kasak
tumhara sher bhi gazab hai mindblowing ji.
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aine me kyun dekhte ho skal apni
--- aaina bhi dhundla ho jaata hai kabhi
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2011, 05:07:26 AM »
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wahh kya baat hai KB...

dil me jhanka tha ek bar maine
kaalikh k siwa mujhe kuch na mila
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2011, 05:17:33 AM »
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uffffff ---
apne mere dil me kyun jhanka tha ree
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beqaraar bhai ji gussa na hoiyega aap
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 07:20:56 AM »
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