koi dhun ban jaaye.............

by SURESH SANGWAN on January 30, 2011, 02:03:50 PM
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ye koi nahin jaanata ki kab kahan aur kya mil jaye.
sabse haseen,sabse nirali koi dhun ban jaye...

Wo lamha jisme jee le koi tamaam umra..
jane kis mod pe kab, kahan ,kaise mil jaye.

kis pal jaane kaisa mausam ka mizaz ho,
tumse gale lagne ka bahana humko  mil jaye.

zindagi ko aise jiyo jaise kal ho na ho.
badi dilkashi se zindagi jeene ko mil jaaye.








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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2011, 02:41:49 PM »
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aye haye kya khub bayani hai ji.
mastam post ji.
sahi baate seekha gaye aap.
roz aaya karo yar.
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2011, 02:45:54 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Nirala ji pasand farmane ke liye..
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aye haye kya khub bayani hai ji.
mastam post ji.
sahi baate seekha gaye aap.
roz aaya karo yar.
maza aayega fir
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2011, 02:53:29 PM »
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aap jaise Shayars ko daily aana chahiye bhai.
warna mere jaise log kuch bhi likh kar pareshan karte hai sabko.
thoda raham karo aur regular aao bas
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2011, 02:56:43 PM »
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Nirala ji jab aapne iss kadar kaha hai to humko aana hi padega.
thanks Nirala ji.
aap kahen aur hum na aayen....
aap jaise Shayars ko daily aana chahiye bhai.
warna mere jaise log kuch bhi likh kar pareshan karte hai sabko.
thoda raham karo aur regular aao bas
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2011, 03:05:44 PM »
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aapka thanx Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2011, 04:29:32 PM »
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aap ki khush hone se hum bhi bahut khush hue.
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2011, 05:01:57 PM »
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khushiyan baatte chalo
gam ko dafnaate chalo
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      isko apnaate chalo
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2011, 05:20:27 PM »
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waah suresh ji waah kya baat hai bht khub ji...
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2011, 10:12:11 AM »
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thanks a lot kasak ji.
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waah suresh ji waah kya baat hai bht khub ji...
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2011, 10:16:13 AM »
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wah bahut khub likhte ho aap Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2011, 10:17:26 AM »
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thanks a lot kishan ji.
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wah bahut khub likhte ho aap Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2011, 07:33:26 PM »
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ye koi nahin jaanata ki kab kahan aur kya mil jaye.
sabse haseen,sabse nirali koi dhun ban jaye...

Wo lamha jisme jee le koi tamaam umra..
jane kis mod pe kab, kahan ,kaise mil jaye.

kis pal jaane kaisa mausam ka mizaz ho,
tumse gale lagne ka bahana humko  mil jaye.

zindagi ko aise jiyo jaise kal ho na ho.
badi dilkashi se zindagi jeene ko mil jaaye.










Bahut khooooooooooooooob ............ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2011, 03:22:14 AM »
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thanks a lot anshumali ji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2011, 12:30:37 PM »
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ye koi nahin jaanata ki kab kahan aur kya mil jaye.
sabse haseen,sabse nirali koi dhun ban jaye...

Wo lamha jisme jee le koi tamaam umra..
jane kis mod pe kab, kahan ,kaise mil jaye.

kis pal jaane kaisa mausam ka mizaz ho,
tumse gale lagne ka bahana humko  mil jaye.

zindagi ko aise jiyo jaise kal ho na ho.
badi dilkashi se zindagi jeene ko mil jaaye.










bahut khoob suresh ji
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