saanson ka shor aata hai har ek veerane se

by ripan dev on November 05, 2012, 03:56:15 AM
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jaane kya khataa ho gai is dil deewane se,
apne bhi najar aate hai aajkal begaane se..

mushkile yun bhi kam na thi zindgi mein pehle,
aur badhne lagi hai tere aakar chale jaane se...

kisi se ab milnaa milaanaa bekaar huaa hai,
dil kab samjhtaa hai kisi ke samjhaane se..

peeyo magar isko badnaam naa karo mere yaaron,
dagmagaate huye niklaa na karo mai khaane se .

raahat ki nahi chahat wo bas itna btaa de,
kya mil jaataa hai unhe mujhe yun tadpaane se...

zinda lash ke sheharon mein, ek meri hee,
saanson ka shor aataa hai har ek veerane se.
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«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2012, 03:58:07 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2012, 04:48:14 AM »
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waah kya baat hai ripan ji bahut khoob likha hai aapne
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«Reply #4 on: November 05, 2012, 05:13:40 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 05, 2012, 05:47:26 AM »
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jaane kya khataa ho gai is dil deewane se,
apne bhi najar aate hai aajkal begaane se..

mushkile yun bhi kam na thi zindgi mein pehle,
aur badhne lagi hai tere aakar chale jaane se...

kisi se ab milnaa milaanaa bekaar huaa hai,
dil kab samjhtaa hai kisi ke samjhaane se..

peeyo magar isko badnaam naa karo mere yaaron,
dagmagaate huye niklaa na karo mai khaane se .

raahat ki nahi chahat wo bas itna btaa de,
kya mil jaataa hai unhe mujhe yun tadpaane se...

zinda lash ke sheharon mein, ek meri hee,
saanson ka shor aataa hai har ek veerane se.

wah wah kya baat hai bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: November 05, 2012, 08:21:28 AM »
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jaane kya khataa ho gai is dil deewane se,
apne bhi najar aate hai aajkal begaane se..

mushkile yun bhi kam na thi zindgi mein pehle,
aur badhne lagi hai tere aakar chale jaane se...

kisi se ab milnaa milaanaa bekaar huaa hai,
dil kab samjhtaa hai kisi ke samjhaane se..

peeyo magar isko badnaam naa karo mere yaaron,
dagmagaate huye niklaa na karo mai khaane se .

raahat ki nahi chahat wo bas itna btaa de,
kya mil jaataa hai unhe mujhe yun tadpaane se...

zinda lash ke sheharon mein, ek meri hee,
saanson ka shor aataa hai har ek veerane se.



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«Reply #8 on: November 05, 2012, 08:56:41 AM »
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