॰॰॰बेटीयों के नसीब॰॰॰***Betio'n Ke Naseeb***

by AVTAR RAYAT on May 20, 2010, 08:41:34 AM
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Beti Bankar Aayi Hu...
Maa Baap Ke Jiwan Mein,
Basera Hoga Kal Mera Kaha'n...
Jaane Kis Ke Aangan Mein...

Kyo Ye Reet Is Dunia Ne...
Hum Betio'n Ke Liye Banaayi Hai...
Bachpan Jab Baabul Ka Ghar hai,
Fir Kyo Un Se Ye Judaayi Hai..

Jab Main Bahut Chhoti Thi...
Khilono Se Khela Karti Thi,
Gudde-Gudia Ki Shaadi Karke...
Jhuth-Mooth Roya Karti Thi,

Ab Aaj Jab Meri Vidaayi Hai
Woh Baat Samjh Mein Aayi Hai
Bachpan Ki Wo Batein Sochkar
Aankh Meri Bhar Aayi Hai...

O Baabul Tere Saath Rahi Hu...
Aaj Kaisi Tumse Ye Judaayi Hai,
Bachpan Khela Jab Aangan Me Tere,
Aaj Na Kaho Ke Tu Praayi Hai,

Aye Khuda, Kyo Rishta Humara...
Dunia Se Alag Chalaya Hai,...
Jaane Kyo Sirf Hum Betio'n Ka.
Tumne Naseeb Aisa Banaya Hai...!!!

*****AVTAR RAYAT*****


॰॰॰बेटीयों के नसीब॰॰॰

बेटी बनकर आई हूँ॰॰॰
माँ-बाप के जीवन में,
बसेरा होगा कल मेरा कहाँ॰॰॰
जाने किसके आँगन में,

क्यों ये रीत इस दुनियां ने॰॰॰
हम बेटीयों के लिये बनाई है,
बचपन जब बाबुल का घर है॰॰॰
फिर क्यों उनसे ये जुदाई है,

जब मैं बहुत छोटी थी॰॰॰
खिलोनों से खेला करती थी,
गुड्डे-गुडियों की शादी करके॰॰॰
झूठ-मूठ रोया करती थी,

अब आज जब मेरी विदाई है॰॰॰
वो बात समझ में आई है,
बचपन की वो बातें सोचकर॰॰॰
आँख मेरी भर आई है,

ओ बाबुल तेरे साथ रही हूँ॰॰॰
आज कैसी तुमसे ये जुदाई है,
बचपन खेला जब आँगन में तेरे॰॰॰
आज ना कहो के, तू पराई है,

ऐ खुदा, क्यों ये रिश्ता हमारा॰॰॰
दुनियां से अलग चलाया है,
जाने क्यों सिर्फ हम बेटीयों का॰॰॰
तुमने नसीब ऐसा बनाया है॰॰॰

****अवतार रायत****
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2010, 11:03:21 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob Avtar ji... aapne is baar pyaar mohabbat se hat ke kuch alag likha hai aur bahut hi khoob likha hai... betiyon ke dard ko aapne bahut hi khoobsurti se shabdon me utaara hai... sach me aisa kyun hota hai ki betioyon ko hi ghar chhodna padta hai beto ko nahi...  aapke ye kavita hamare dil ko chhoo gayi... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2010, 01:03:52 PM »
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very touching avtar ji
tears rolled out
sahi kaha aapne
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2010, 01:14:10 PM »
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Buhat khoob.. Avtar Rayat jee...
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2010, 03:48:47 AM »
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Aapka Shukria...Klaskar Ji,,,Mona Ji,,,vb Ji...
Thanx Alot...
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2010, 09:10:08 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Avtar ji,aapne toh bachpan ki yaadein taza kar di.bahut sachai,gaherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent. icon_salut Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2010, 09:14:02 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2010, 07:01:21 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Avtar ji,aapne toh bachpan ki yaadein taza kar di.bahut sachai,gaherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent. icon_salut Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Madhu Ji....Bahut-Bahut Shukria....
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«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2010, 06:06:38 AM »
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bahut khoob Avtaar ji badaa dard bhara hua tha ismein. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapka Shukria Suresh S. Ji...Thanx...
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