by deeep on February 18, 2010, 06:00:07 AM
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WOH aayen, na aayen,
Hum UNKA hi intzaar karte hain;

    Woh aayenge aaj, issi khwahish me,   
    Har shaam roshan dar-o-raah karte hain;

Janate hain ki falak-o-zameen kabhi milte nahi,
Fir kyun iss tamanna me, zindgi fanaa karte hain;

    Toot ke Bikhri be-aawaj aarjoo meri, aai jo sehar,
     Dil ne kaha aiy “deep” woh na aaye to kya,
       Shabnami palkon se wo bhi tumhe hi yaad karte hain………….."Pradeep"
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2010, 06:25:05 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2010, 05:07:30 PM »
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Welcome to Yoindia. Nice poem and nice creation. Keep it up.
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2010, 07:18:15 PM »
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YoIndia per aapka khair-makhdam hai, achhi creation hai Pradeep Ji..keep it up
«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2010, 10:10:18 PM »
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Wah bahut acha likha aapne Deep ji.great work.welcome to yo. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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