hAmkoH siwaa e doobNe ke raasTaa Na thAa,...beautiful ghaZal

by laaiba on November 02, 2013, 05:38:02 AM
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beautiful ghazal written by 'amjad islam amjad'

 ham the hamare saath koi teesra na thaa
aisaa haseeN din kahin dekhaa suna na thaa

kuch aise uskee jheel c aankhen thee har taraf
hamkoh siwa e doobne ke raastaa na thaa,

us ke toh aNg aNg main jalne lage diye,...
jadu hai mere haath main mujhko pata na thaa

saaNson mein the gulab toh honton pe chaNdnee
in manzoron se main toh kabhee aashnaa na thaa

royaa kuch iss tara mere shaanne se lag ke woh
aisaa lagaa ke jase kabhee bewafaa na thaa,..

hai ishq aik rog,mohabbat azaa.b hai,........
ik roz yeh kharab karen gen kahaa na thaa,.

amjad wahan pe had koi rehtee bhi kis tarah
rukne ko keh rahaa thaa magar roktaa na thaa,

'amjad islam amjad'
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2013, 05:41:53 AM »
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Lovellyy ghazal... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2013, 06:23:10 AM »
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Nice jee.
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2013, 06:25:31 AM »
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Nice jee  icon_salut
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2013, 06:54:32 AM »
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just beautiful ......

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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2013, 02:07:30 PM »
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wonderful
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«Reply #6 on: November 02, 2013, 05:29:32 PM »
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Vry nice !!
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«Reply #7 on: November 02, 2013, 05:30:26 PM »
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Vry nice !!
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«Reply #8 on: November 02, 2013, 09:39:55 PM »
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beautiful ghazal written by 'amjad islam amjad'

 ham the hamare saath koi teesra na thaa
aisaa haseeN din kahin dekhaa suna na thaa

kuch aise uskee jheel c aankhen thee har taraf
hamkoh siwa e doobne ke raastaa na thaa,

us ke toh aNg aNg main jalne lage diye,...
jadu hai mere haath main mujhko pata na thaa

saaNson mein the gulab toh honton pe chaNdnee
in manzoron se main toh kabhee aashnaa na thaa

royaa kuch iss tara mere shaanne se lag ke woh
aisaa lagaa ke jase kabhee bewafaa na thaa,..

hai ishq aik rog,mohabbat azaa.b hai,........
ik roz yeh kharab karen gen kahaa na thaa,.

amjad wahan pe had koi rehtee bhi kis tarah
rukne ko keh rahaa thaa magar roktaa na thaa,

'amjad islam amjad'


nice sharing,ma'am
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«Reply #9 on: November 02, 2013, 10:55:39 PM »
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Kya bat hai..............
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«Reply #10 on: November 03, 2013, 02:21:30 AM »
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aa.p sab heee kaa bohat bohat shuqria,................
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