meri AWAARGI bha gayi

by samnoj on August 31, 2009, 10:59:20 AM
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her tamashai sirf sahil se manzer dekhta
koun dariya ko ulat-ta koun goher dekhta

wo to dunya ko meri awaargi bhaa gayi
wagerna tere hath me pahla pather dekhta

aankh me aansu jade the per sada tujh ko na di
ik ehsaas per ki shayed tu palat ker dekhta

meri kismat ki lakeere mere haatho me na thi
tere maathe per koi mera mukadder dekhta

zindaghi phaili hui thi shaam-e-hijra ki trah
kisko kitna hosla tha koun ji ker dekhta

doobne wala tha aur sahil pe chahro ka hujoom
pal ki mohlat thi main kis ko aankh bher ker dekhta

tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai
aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2009, 11:08:37 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Sanmoj ji,mindblowing creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2009, 11:09:52 AM »
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thnx madhu
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2009, 12:59:12 PM »
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her tamashai sirf sahil se manzer dekhta
koun dariya ko ulat-ta koun goher dekhta

wo to dunya ko meri awaargi bhaa gayi
wagerna tere hath me pahla pather dekhta

aankh me aansu jade the per sada tujh ko na di
ik ehsaas per ki shayed tu palat ker dekhta

meri kismat ki lakeere mere haatho me na thi
tere maathe per koi mera mukadder dekhta

zindaghi phaili hui thi shaam-e-hijra ki trah
kisko kitna hosla tha koun ji ker dekhta

doobne wala tha aur sahil pe chahro ka hujoom
pal ki mohlat thi main kis ko aankh bher ker dekhta

tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai
aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta

andaaz-e-byaan bahut hi khub hai ..samnoj ji..
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2009, 01:27:19 PM »
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her tamashai sirf sahil se manzer dekhta
koun dariya ko ulat-ta koun goher dekhta

wo to dunya ko meri awaargi bhaa gayi
wagerna tere hath me pahla pather dekhta

aankh me aansu jade the per sada tujh ko na di
ik ehsaas per ki shayed tu palat ker dekhta

meri kismat ki lakeere mere haatho me na thi
tere maathe per koi mera mukadder dekhta

zindaghi phaili hui thi shaam-e-hijra ki trah
kisko kitna hosla tha koun ji ker dekhta

doobne wala tha aur sahil pe chahro ka hujoom
pal ki mohlat thi main kis ko aankh bher ker dekhta

tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai
aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta


Samnoj ji bahut accha likha hai aapne.


tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai
aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta

Dil mein gehra asar ker gaya... Bahut khoob Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2009, 02:01:39 PM »
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her tamashai sirf sahil se manzer dekhta
koun dariya ko ulat-ta koun goher dekhta

wo to dunya ko meri awaargi bhaa gayi
wagerna tere hath me pahla pather dekhta

aankh me aansu jade the per sada tujh ko na di
ik ehsaas per ki shayed tu palat ker dekhta

meri kismat ki lakeere mere haatho me na thi
tere maathe per koi mera mukadder dekhta

zindaghi phaili hui thi shaam-e-hijra ki trah
kisko kitna hosla tha koun ji ker dekhta

doobne wala tha aur sahil pe chahro ka hujoom
pal ki mohlat thi main kis ko aankh bher ker dekhta

tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai
aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

her ek line kamaal ki likhi hai samnoj.. her shabd apne app main gahraai liye hue... wonderful creation.. yah char line to bahoot waqat tak dil main rahegi...

doobne wala tha aur sahil pe chahro ka hujoom
pal ki mohlat thi main kis ko aankh bher ker dekhta

tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai
aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2009, 02:21:15 PM »
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excellent job Applause ApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2009, 11:35:59 AM »
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thanx Umraan, Pooja ji, TGR n jo guest hai
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2010, 07:28:52 AM »
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her tamashai sirf sahil se manzer dekhta
koun dariya ko ulat-ta koun goher dekhta

wo to dunya ko meri awaargi bhaa gayi
wagerna tere hath me pahla pather dekhta

aankh me aansu jade the per sada tujh ko na di
ik ehsaas per ki shayed tu palat ker dekhta

meri kismat ki lakeere mere haatho me na thi
tere maathe per koi mera mukadder dekhta

zindaghi phaili hui thi shaam-e-hijra ki trah
kisko kitna hosla tha koun ji ker dekhta

doobne wala tha aur sahil pe chahro ka hujoom
pal ki mohlat thi main kis ko aankh bher ker dekhta

tu bhi dil ko lahu ki ek boondhi samjha hai
aankh ger hoti to katre me samunder dekhta

Bahut Khoob Samnoj Ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2010, 07:50:52 AM »
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thanx rajesh
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2010, 08:14:28 AM »
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bahut achche samnoj bhai kya baat hai

ek bikhra hua nagma ek toota hua taara hoon
mein apni takdeer se lad lad k bahut haara hoon
har aankh dekhti hai na jaane kyun mujhko hikaat se
kissii k liye deewana toh kissii k liye AWAARA hoon
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2010, 08:18:42 AM »
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badhya likha hai sahil

pyaar mahnga hai aur nafrat yaha sasti hai
bachke chalna diwane, te awaaro ki basti hai
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«Reply #12 on: March 20, 2010, 05:25:06 AM »
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Wow bahut hi khoob Sam ji and Sahill ji.marvelous creation.excellent  Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2010, 08:01:27 AM »
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thanx madhu
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«Reply #14 on: March 29, 2010, 08:09:56 AM »
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thanx kash
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