mukamal chou.d detta hun,.........

by laaiba on April 14, 2013, 10:10:25 PM
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1 of my most favourite ghazal
written by adeem hashmi,..... love9

taaluq todtaa hun to mukamal toud detta hun
jisse main chod deta hun mukamal choud detta hun

mohabbat ho ke nafrat ho bhara rehtaa hun shiddat se
jidher se aaye yeh dariya udher hi moud detta hun

yaqeen rakhtaa nahin hun main kisi kache taaluq par
joh dhaaga tootne waala ho usse main toud detta hun

mere deikhe huye sapne kahin lehren na le jaayein....
gharonde reitt ke taameer kar ke choud detta hun....

adeem ab tak wohee bachpan hai wohi takhreeb kaari hai
qafas ko toud detta hun parinde choud detta hun,..........

adeem hashmi
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2013, 12:12:59 AM »
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taaluq todtaa hun to mukamal toud detta hun
jisse main chod deta hun mukamal choud detta hun
mohabbat ho ke nafrat ho bhara rehtaa hun shiddat se
jidher se aaye yeh dariya udher hi moud detta hun
yaqeen rakhtaa nahin hun main kisi kache taaluq par
joh dhaaga tootne waala ho usse main toud detta
hun mere deikhe huye sapne kahin lehren na le jaayein....
gharonde reitt ke taameer kar ke choud detta hun....
adeem ab tak wohee bachpan hai wohi takhreeb kaari hai
qafas ko toud detta hun parinde choud detta hun,..........
adeem hashmi
Wah,Wah,Wah Nice sharing.
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2013, 02:48:09 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on April 14, 2013, 10:10:25 PM

1 of my most favourite ghazal
written by adeem hashmi,..... love9

taaluq todtaa hun to mukamal toud detta hun
jisse main chod deta hun mukamal choud detta hun

mohabbat ho ke nafrat ho bhara rehtaa hun shiddat se
jidher se aaye yeh dariya udher hi moud detta hun

yaqeen rakhtaa nahin hun main kisi kache taaluq par
joh dhaaga tootne waala ho usse main toud detta hun

mere deikhe huye sapne kahin lehren na le jaayein....
gharonde reitt ke taameer kar ke choud detta hun....

adeem ab tak wohee bachpan hai wohi takhreeb kaari hai
qafas ko toud detta hun parinde choud detta hun,..........

adeem hashmi

behtreen shairing laaiba..........!
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2013, 03:14:40 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on April 14, 2013, 10:10:25 PM

1 of my most favourite ghazal
written by adeem hashmi,..... love9

taaluq todtaa hun to mukamal toud detta hun
jisse main chod deta hun mukamal choud detta hun

mohabbat ho ke nafrat ho bhara rehtaa hun shiddat se
jidher se aaye yeh dariya udher hi moud detta hun

yaqeen rakhtaa nahin hun main kisi kache taaluq par
joh dhaaga tootne waala ho usse main toud detta hun

mere deikhe huye sapne kahin lehren na le jaayein....
gharonde reitt ke taameer kar ke choud detta hun....

adeem ab tak wohee bachpan hai wohi takhreeb kaari hai
qafas ko toud detta hun parinde choud detta hun,..........

adeem hashmi


Bahut Bahut Khoooob!!!!

beautiful sharing
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2013, 05:07:57 AM »
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Beautiful Lines.
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2013, 09:29:36 AM »
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nice sharing
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good
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2013, 02:57:53 PM »
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bahut hi pyari ghazal, mubarkbad khubool fermaay
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2013, 11:13:20 PM »
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aap sabkaa shookria,.......
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