Ae chaand mat kar itna takabbur

by Iftakhar Ahmad on October 10, 2011, 03:35:21 PM
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Another she'r written in reply to a she'r:

She'r:

Ae chaand mat kar itna takabbur
Humne bhi  chaand  dekhe  hain
Ajee, tum  mein to  daagh hai
Humne   be-daagh   dekhe hain


My Reply:

Kyun  gumaan  karte  apne  is  be-daagh  chaand  pe
Is chaand ki haisiyat hi kya hai 'uss chaand' ke aage
Arey, jhurriyaan pad jayeingi  50  barson  ke  ba'ad
Magar wo chaand  to  bujhega  qayamat ke  hi  ba'ad


* Takabbur: Proud
* Gumaan: Proud 
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«Reply #1 on: October 10, 2011, 04:36:22 PM »
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Iftekhar Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab tareef ki hai yaa touheen abhi tak samjh nahi paaye..

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Bahut khoob janab .. Likhate rahiye.. Khush rahiye..
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«Reply #2 on: October 10, 2011, 05:26:41 PM »
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Bahut Bahut shukriya Parwaaz Saheb. Ye unke liye hai jo husn ki ta'areef mein Chaand ki tauheen karne se perhez nahi karte.

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«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2011, 06:24:07 PM »
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Bahut khoob Iftikhar saheb.Achha muqabla hai.
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